creative thrd:The maze of love v/s evil,note@pg154 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww
 
another about turn! loved it kathie...
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Posted: 12 years ago
excellent part
Plz somebody continue
Luv
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awosome one
Do cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
The way it started and now the way the new spice added superb..
Part 4 and part 5 loved the songs used.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved both  parts 4 n 5...:))
Posted: 12 years ago
Give me half an hOur ill have the nxt part
Posted: 12 years ago
Okai I'm Warning You Its Not That Good...πŸ˜›
Criticism's Are Welcome.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Ignore Any Mistakes.!! 😊

Part 6

He ran towards her in a panic.. his heart was beating faster and faster as he neared her.. his mind bringing in all sorts of scary things.. Things that could have happened to geet.. things that might happen.. He saw her as her hair covered her face, her hands pale as she lay in a foetal position.. he bent down towards her and held her head slowly and put it on his lap.. he removed the hair from her face slowly. As he was removing the hair to get a clear view of her face he saw blood trickling down her face'  her head was cold, he held her hands to feel that her body temperature was cold too.

(Play The Song While Reading.. Thanks😳)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=esmdRtaG96g[/YOUTUBE]

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zara

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zara

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zara

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zara

He Picked her up in his arms and started running' Blood was trickling down her face and her breathing was getting slower' he ran towards the nearest hospital cursing himself that going byy car would have been quicker.. but he didn't want to lose this opportunity of having his life in his arms.


Aaj Khamoshiyon Se Aa Rahi Hai Sada
Dhadkanein Hai Deewani
Dil Bhi Kutch Keh Raha Hai

Dil Bhi Kutch Keh Raha Hai
Sun Zara Soniye Sun Sun Sun Zaraaa

He Reached the hospital and yelled for the nurse.. "Get a flaming Doctor NOW!" he yelled as much as his lungs let him.. the nurses brought the stretcher and he placed geet on it.. but before letting the nurses take her he yelled " Agar isi kuch hua na Tho aap sab nahi bacho ge" his shown venom.. "aur use yeh nahi pata hone chahiya ke isi yahin kau leh kar aaya hai.. Samajhi" The Nurses Nodded.. As they took her away he finally let his guard down, as a lone tear finally managed to escape his eye.

Beetey Lamhon Ke Saaye Toh Bas Yahi Tham Gaye Haii
Yaad Mujhe Aaye Teri Baatein
Palkon Ki Surkh Chadar Pe Ask Bhi Jam Gaye Hai
Teri Ankhon Se Na Hatti Aankhein
Bebasi Ka Hai Aalam Kya Karoo Main Bata
Dhadkanein Hai Deewani Dil Bhi Kutch Keh Raha Hai
Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zaraaa

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zaraaa

He went out and found a deserted place to sit.. all his memories with her flashed before his eyes.. he just hoped she was alright' as long as she was infront of his eyes he would be fine' just the thought of him marrying sameera actually disgusted him. But he did it for daadima, and as long as daadima was here he would do anything to keep her happy. Even if that meant not having Geet as a part of his life..


Aaj Khamoshiyon Se Aa Rahi Hai Sada
Dhadkanein Hai Deewani
Dil Bhi Kutch Keh Raha Hai
Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zaraaa

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zaraaa

Keeping in mind that He was now engaged he planned to stay away from geet.. he didn't want anymore problem created for her.. he was aware of the evil people in his life' and now keeping her away from him would keep her alive..


Choom Ke Apne Hoton Se Tere Gam Ko Chura Loo
Laake Tujhe De Doo Khushiyan Sari
Apni Har Beqarari Ko Seene Main Hi Chupa Lu
Meri Chahtein Jaye Tujhpe Wari
Sehme Sehme Labon Mein Ghul Gayi Hai Dua
Dhadkanein Hai Deewani Dil Bhi Kutch Keh Raha Hai
Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zaraaa

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zaraaa

Just as he walked away he remembered the payal he found of geet's.. he slowly placed the payal in his pocket.. he walked away from the hospital determined to maintain his strength infront of geet.. he would keep her away from him even if that mean being rude and horrible..

Aaj Khamoshiyon Se Aa Rahi Hai Sada

Dhadkanein Hai Deewani
Dil Bhi Kutch Keh Raha Hai

Not knowing that danger was even more closer to geet then he had imagined. And when he finds out that the person or person who knows is his own flesh and blood.. He Will Keep Geet Away..

Okay Its Not As Good.. But I Hope It Is Enough To Take The Story Further..

Keep In Mind He Does Not Know Who The People Are..

So Who's Next .. Take It Away x :)

Edited by Nazmaa - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Love The Song Above Lol
Its My Favourite So I Used It...
Hehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear
who is writting the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part Nazmaa :) 
poor maan :( 
loved the part and the song is great...went perfectly with this part :) 

Reya <3