New ff on raya updated on 16th jan pg 30...

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SriB

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Waging eagerly for the next part.please update fast.

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priyanka

@murlidharmona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

awesome, it is just like what raya do.

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shubhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Thanx a lot guys for liking it nd giving ur comments...

so without any delay here comes next part..

In the airplane..

priya was very much scared and nervous now as its the time for landing and she was sitting in plane first time.. so she hold ram's hand and griped it because she was nervous..

ram:yeh kya kar rhi ho??

priya:mr kapoor,pls ap kuch der ke liye shant baithenge,plss..

ram:are par priya hua kya hai yeh toh btao,mera hath itni zor se kyu pakad rakha hai.

priya:mr kapoor main flight mein first time baithi hu aur ab mujhe dar lag rha hai landing ke time iss liye..

and there is annoncement:passengers pls sit on ther seats and put the belt carefully as we are landing..

this makes priya more scared..she hide her face in ram's coat..

ram:priya kuch nhi hoga , upar toh dekho main hu na tumhare sath kuch nhi hoga..

priya:nhi mr kapoor plss...

ram:ok ok just calm down..

ram thinks: yeh priya ne mujhe aisa pakda hua h mujhe gussa hone ki bajae yeh mujhe acha kyo lag rha hai.. yeh mujhe kya ho rha.. ab jab bhi priya mere sath hoti hai mujhe acha lagta hai,usse jab tak ladu na toh dil ko sukun nhi milta pta nhi yeh mujhe kya ho rha hai.. kahin mujhe priya se py nd suddenly there is a annoncement again. dear passengers we landed safely ..

ram come out of his thoughts and see that he also hold priya's hand..

but then suddenly says:priya utho dekho hum land kar chuke hai aur tum bilkul thik ho.. chalo utho ab priya..

priya:smiles, thank you mr kapoor thank you vry much nad in happiness she hugs ram..

this time ram fells strange but feels happy..

priya realises what she had done and broke the hug and says sorry..

ram:its ok, hota hai.. ab chalo..

After checkin in ther hotel room..

they both firstly freshen up..

nd priya:mr kapoor mujhe bhuk lagi hai, kuch order kariye na..

ram:puts his hand on her forehead..

priya:ab yeh kya kar rhe hai..

ram:dekh rha hu tumhari tabiyat toh thik h na, tumhe bhuk lagi h ,strange and smiles..

priya:ji hai main bhi human being hu mujhe bhi bhuk lagi hai ab kuch order kariye na pls..

ram:acha baba karta hu..

after eating their dinner..

the weather their was very cold, so ram told to priya that you also drink some wine otherwise you will catch cold..

priya:mr kapoor ap yeh kya keh rhe hai main aur wine impossible..

ram:ha tum mein himmat hi nhi hai wine pine ki, u r not brave like others girls..

priya:ji nhi aisa nhi hai , i m very brave..

ram:acha toh phir yeh pee ke dikhao toh manunga..

priya:in her full josh, instead of taking the glass she talkes the bottle and drinks the whole bottle..

ram was so shocked to see this that he even didn't able to stop her..

after drinking the whole bottle priya: not in her senses, dekha mujmein bhi bhahut himma hai..

ram: ha matte, tum mein mujhse bhi jada himmat hai, ab chalo so jao..

priya started laughing loudly and ram saw her very fondly and then suddenly priya started crying bitterly..

ram didn't understand what happened?? and goes to her and says:are priya kya hua abhi toh tum has rhi thi , ek dum rone kyo lagi..

priya holdin his hand in her hand:mr kapoor plss ap mujhe kabhi chod ke mat jaiye ga us aswin ki tarah, warna main mar... before she completes her sentence ram puts his finger on priya's lips and says:ssshhh, aisa kabhi mat bolna.. main tumhe kabhi chod ke nhi jaunga..promise.. par tum achanak se aisa kyu bol rhi hu..aur yeh ashwin kaun hai..

priya:mr kapoor ashwin mera woh kala atit hai jise main hamesha bhulane ki koshish karti hu par bhula nhi pati..

ram:priya tum kya keh rhi ho, kaisa atit..

priya:ram, maine jisse bhi pyarr kia hai ,usne mujhe hamesha dhokha diya hai aur mujhe chod ke chala gya...

ram:tum kiski bat kar rhi ho priya,main kuch samajh nhi paa rha hu..

priya by putting her head on ram's lap says:mr kapoor aj main apke sath apna atit batna chahti hu sab btana chahti hu apko, ap sunega..

ram:ha priya kaho na..

priya tells him everything about ashwin and also about that lift scence..

ram:koi bat nhi priya, jo hua usse bhul jao, main hu tumhare sath aur tumhe kabhi chod ke nhi jaunga, promise..

priya: mr kapoor apse ek bt aur kehni thi..

ram: ha kaho priya ..

priya: i love you mr kapoor..

ram was very happy after listening this and says: i love you too priya.. pta nhi kaise bt i love u vry vry much.. ab main tumhare bina nhi reh sakta..

priya didnt rply anything..

ram saw her and finds that she falls asleep and says: jhalli kahin ki..

and put her on the bed and kisses her forehead and says love you vry much priya...

and stands near the window and thinks.. is ashwin ko toh main btaunga, usne meri priya ke sath yeh sab kia chodunga nhi usse mein ab... aur specially usne meru priya ko itna kuch kha jab uski mujse engagement ho chuki thi..and says:tum toh gye ashwin, i will not leave you.. priya ke ek ek ansu ka badla lunga tumse..

and goes to sleep next to priya..

to be continued..

precap:both tell thier fellings to each other in full hosh..

hope you al liked it..

THANX...

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M_n_h

@M_n_h

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Nice part shubhi
i hope Ram teaches Ashwin a lesson

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Siacutie

@Siacutie

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Bahut acha laga shubi update the nxt prt fast waitng 4 raya more romantic scenes

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Daydreaming

@Daydreaming

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Hey shubhi, another great update.. 😃
It was fab yarr.. Update next part soon.. [:p]

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Kajal

@prachimishra85

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Very nice start yaar

Con't soon and do PM me

❤️ Prachi

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shubhi

@14shubhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Thanx all for liking the update..

so here goes next part..

In the morning..

priya wake up with a bad hangover and severe headache..she sits on the bed and holding her head by her hands as it was paining very much.. and then she turn and saw ram sleeping next to her, firstly she was shocked but then smile by seeing ram who was looking so adorable and cute..

she tries to remember what happened last night and after so many efforts she remembered everthing..

and thinks:priya yeh tune kya kia,apne dil ki bat mr kapoor ko bta di,ab pta nhi woh kaise react karenge,mujhse bat bhi karenge ya nhi,ek second priya agar mr kapoor ko yeh sab acha na lga hota toh woh kabhi mere sath bed share nhi karte, shayad mr kapoor bhi mujhse pyarr karte hai..and then to her shock..

ram: ha priya, i love you too..

priya:apko kaise pta ki main kya soch rhi thi..

ram:maine toh tumse i love you kal hi keh dia that par tum sunne se pehle hi so gyi,itna attitude jo hai tum mein..

priya:attitude aur woh bhi mujh mein,agar mujh mein attitude hota toh main apse kabhi nhi kehti jo maine kal kaha tha..

ram:kya kaha tha mujhe kuch yad nhi..

priya:apko kuch yad nhi hai,hatiye mujhe apse koi bat nhi karni,pee maine rakhi thi aur yad apko nhi hai.. hathiye yaha se main ja rhi hu..

ram:are priya, priya suno toh sahi yr...

but priya was not ready to listen anything and was going to get out of the bed.. then

ram holds her hand and turns her... priya losses her balance and falls on ram and her hairs covered her face..

ram removed her hairs from her face by his hands very softly and stares in her eyes and says i love you...

priya has tears in her eyes and iit rolled down to her cheeks..

ram kisses her both eyes and then cheeks..nd says

ram:sshhh, main tumhari ankhon mein ausu nhi dekh sakta priya..

ram:priya waise ek bat kahu..

priya:hmmm, kahiye..

ram:yar tum na bhahut bhari ho,ab uth jao na...

priya:stands up and make wierd expression and hit him with the pillow...and says ap na bhahut hi gande hai..

ram:are ja kaha rhi ho,mere i love you ka jawab toh deti jao..

priya:shows her thumb and runs in the washroom..

ram:smiles sweetly on her..

priya comes out of the bathroom and ram pretend to be angry from her and sits on the couch.. priya sees him and comes near him..and told him in his ears: i love you too ram..

ram jumps from excitement and huggs her...

priya broke the hug and says chaliye fresh ho jaiye main breakfast order karti hu..

ram:aj mujhe kuch nhi chahiye, sirf tum chahiye and comes close to kiss her lips and he was just touching her lips then suddenly door bell rings and priya brust out laughing..

ram:kya yr,yaha par bhi romance koi nhi karne deta..pta nhi kya hoga mera..

and goes to open the door and see a waiter standing with the braekfast,ram asks priya kya tumne breakfast order kia hai..

priya: nhi toh..

ram:yeh hamara order nhi hai..

waiter:sry sir,lagta hai main galat room mein aa gya..

ram by making his face says:aisi galti dubara mat karna itna shubh kam karna ja rha tha main,aur tumne disturb kar dia..

waiter:sry sir and turned to go..

ram stops him and says:yaha na br do not disturb ka board laga dena, taki koi mujhe dubara disturb na kare..

waiter:ok sir, and goes..

ram closes the door and turns and says: ha,toh kaha pe the hum priya..

priya:kahin nhi, abhi chaliye mujhe bhuk lgi hai,,

ram:kya yar,meri biwi bhi bilkul romantic nhi hai.. had hai yr..