New ff on raya updated on 16th jan pg 30... - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@pvkd thank dear..
will update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesum update shubi continue soon thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update Shubhi thanks for the pm
w8ing for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@siacutie thanx dear..
will continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shubi u hve asked sum names 4 ur ff i hve 2 names hope u like it raya luv story, raya made 4 each other
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@balhfan i will update at night for sure dear..
sry for making u wait..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its ok... 😊
luved d way u write... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@balhfan thanks a lot dear..
here is the next update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanx all for liking it..
sry for the delay..
here is the next update...
In the morning they both are sleeping,priya was sleeping on his chest and they both are holding each other hands...ram woke up first and saw her slepping peacefully and looking like an angel..he cupped her face lovingly and kissed her forehead.and come out of the bed and goes towards bathroom..
just then priya woke up and was feeling dizzy and had a little headache also..
ram come out of the bathroom and said:good morning jaan..
priya:what is good in this morning????
ram:kyo kya hua tum thik toh ho na and move towards her and forwards his hand to check her temprature..
priya stopped him and said:ram main thik hu bs sir mein thoda dard hai abh thik ho jaega,and then she aside her blanket and tries to come out of the bed...
ram stopped her by holding her hand and said:yum kahin nhi jaogi,main abhi doctor ko bulata hu..
priya:nhi ram thoda sa dard hai abhi thik ho jaega,main pak jaungi yaha baithe baithe..
ram:tum manane wali toh ho nhi,par jab bhi dard bad jae ya aur kuch lage toh bta dena..
priya:ha ram,ab haitye mujhe fresh hona hai..
After talking their breakfast they go out and doing shopping and wondering here and there..
priya was not feeling well but she didnt tell this to ram..
and suddenly she started to faint,ram was little far away from her and was busy to shop for her,just then he said priya:yeh dekho ,yeh tum pe bhahut acha lagega...and by not getting any rply from her he turns and didnot find her their..
some distance away there was a crowd of people,ram was scared and run towards the crowd to see what happens???
ram entered the crowd with a gr8 difficulty and was shocked to see that priya was there unconsicous..
he run towards her,put her head on his lap and said priya..priya utho...dekho main aa gya..tears started falling from his eyes..
ram hold her in his arms and run towards his car...
he take her to the hospital and was very tense..
to be continued..
hope u all like it..
Thanx..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update shubhi
hope there is ntg wrong with Priya

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