For Better or For Worse.. Maaneet..NotE:pg11n - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing update 😃😃
Lovely Precap 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVED THE YOUNG GEET WHO WAS READY TI LIVE LIFE ON HER OWN TERMS
SHE HAS A TRAGIC PAST
HOPE MAAN IS ABLE TO FILL HE LIFE WITH HAPPINESS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just read it in one go...
pls add me to ur pm list..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Note

Sorry for not updating...been really busy wiz uni n baby...but now dat da holidays r here i promise I'll try to update every 2days... Il either update TNT or tomorrow for definite...
Geet ended todayyy😭😭 Hopefully we can keep the maneet spirit alive wiz our ffs...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 8

Geet walked straight out of the office and into her waiting car
Uloo..budhoo.. Just stay quiet now.. Don't talk to him.. Leave him alone...
All through her Journey home she cursed herself for talking to Maan so casually. As her car stopped outside the villa, geet stepped outside determined to go in and sleep. However Maan had other plans for her.
Geet walked in to the house only to be serenely surprised at the amount of flowers: lilies, roses, Daisy's, violets, tulips and carnations adornng every corner of the house. All the different colours and shapes took Geet into a blissfull world of her own. She walked further inside the villa and admired the fresh flowers and scent emanating from them.
'Nakul chacha.. Nakul Chacha' geet shouted.. Nakul came rushing towards Geet
Whats happened beta? Why are you shouting so frantically?
Chacha what's this? Where did all these flowers come from? You know Maan hates flowers.. Why are so many here? You have to get rid of them before Maan gets here? Chacha hurry' geet was becoming frantic with worry. She had to do something before Maan came home. Else she would have to see his dusht dhanav form again.
Beta don't worry.. Maan babu himself ordered these flowers.. N there's something in your room'
My room? Maan ordered these? No you must be mistaken?
Beta go c yourself...
Geet ran up the stairs, taking two at a time.. She opened her room door,and was amazed at the scene before her. Red and white curtains, with red roses, white cushions and red candles adorned her room. There was a little box on her bed which geet excitedly ran towards. She stopped abruptly when she heard a sound from the box... Geet tentatively walked towards it, careful not to touch it.. She slowly lifted the lid to the most beautiful thing before her.. A pair of two dark brown eyes looked up at her. Geet fell in love instantly at the most adorable little white kitten in the box. She picked it up and started stroking its fur.. Unable to believe that she was holding her own little kitten. She picked up the envelope next the box and read:
Dear Geetu

I hope you like your present. I wanted to get you something just like my sherni. Since I couldn't actually get a lion I got the next best thing in the fAmily. I know you have always wanted a kitten but were unable to get one due to Dadimas asthma. This is my way of apologising to my Geetu for my unwarranted behaviour today. I'm sorry Geetu . Hope this kitten gives you company when I'm not able to. I sincerely hope and pray you forgive your Maan for his mistake. I have one more surprise waiting for you. Wait till I come home...

Yours forever
Maan

Geet looked at the letter and kitten amazed. She was dreaming. She could not believe that the khadoos Maan Sing Khurana would do so much for her. She kissed the kitten then the letter excitedly... Blushing profoundly when reading ' yours forever' again. She could not wait to see what awaited her next.

Precap: Surprise

Note: hey readers
I'm not getting enough feedback on this ff... It discourages me from writing. I really need to know whether I'm doing ok or should I just stop writing.. Plz let me know guys...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg!dat was just awesum..
loved the way maan manofying geet...
thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ANother maaneet FF wow👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohh... i too want a kitten...😊... adorable update dear... nd do continue ds ff...plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing update dear...i tota;lly loved the way he said sorry...absolutely amazing...aaawww...iske baad toh Geetu naraaz reh hi nahi sakti...
you did not include last precap so waiting for that

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