For Better or For Worse.. Maaneet..NotE:pg11n - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
amazing update dear
loved the way maan gave surprise and apologies to geet
waiting for next update
please cot. soon dont discont.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
plz dont stop writing..
its a beautiful ff
do updt soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53














Edited by Arsheela - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
loved the update..
cute surprise and cute gift...
waiting for the next surprise
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
WHAT A LOVELY SURPRISE AND WHAT A SWEET GIFT
LOVED THE KITTEN AND HIS WORDS ABOUT HIS SHERNI
CONTINUE
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56


hey...I read all parts of this FF today...

it is very interesting...

I am sending buddy request...

please accept and pm me when u update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Chapter 9

Maan was looking forward to tonight. He knew he had the perfect plan to make Geet smile again. Why he wanted her to always smile bemused him. The effect that girl had in him had always bemused him. He did not like the feeling that se had over him but could not control himself when it came to her and her happiness. Thats why he thought that if he pushed her away it would appease him yet since seeing her in tears it was him left to do the appeasing... The apologising.. Spending his time and effort just to see her happy again. He had to admit that seeing her happy made him happy. He convinced himself that it was because of her past.. The trauma and pain she had gone through due to that egotistical brother of hers.. Just thnkng about Brij Handa made his blood boil
' if you ever come in front of me Brij i wont leave you alive.. I will avenge every tear Geet had shed because of you.. Every drop if blood she has lost because of you..' he vowed to himself.
Gathering all his things he left for home looking forward to the evening ahead..

Geet was pacing up and down her room unable to comprehend what was happening.
' from running away from me.. He biw doing do much for me.. Whats happened to him?'
Geet continued to thnk about what was going in when she heard her mobile vibrate.. She checked her phone to see an imessage from Maan:
'Meet me in the basement in 15mins'
Geet hurriedly changed clothes n touched up her make up, excitement building up inside her at what maan had planned for her.

Maan hurriedly added the finishing touches to the room.. He could not wait to see Geets face when she saw what he had planned for her.. There was no way she would have seen this coming.. He chrcked his watch, noting that geet would be down anytime..

Geet ran down the stairs, bubbling with happiness... As she reached the door way leading to the basement she noted the darkeness surrounding the stairs, as she walked ahead she gasped as lighted scented candles began to form a path towards another doorway..
Maan, where are you?
Geet walked into the room to be surrounded by a home cinema she had neva seen before.. Plush velvet seats, huge screen, popcorn maker, ice cream fridge, pick and mix section and drinks bar all in one room.. However none of that mattered to what stood before her..
'Pinky' she screamed
She ran into the arms of her best friend Pinky who was standing alongside Maan with a massive smile on her face..
Pinky when did you come? What are you doing here? Wait.. In the morning you told me you were going Paris, then what are you doing here.. Ahh im so happy to see you, throwing her arms around a laughing Pinky
'calm down Geet.. If you bequiet tab mein bolungi na..Im here because Maan called me.. He didnt want you to be alone here so he offered me an internship in his London office rather than the Paris office.. So bus here i am..
Maan?' geet had forgotteb all about Maan in her excitement at seeing Pinky.. She looked around trying to find Maan when she saw him standing across them, munching away on the popcorn with a satisfied look on his face. Geet went to him with a massive smile on her face..
' thank you thank you thank you.. In so happy.. I dont know how to thank you.. ' she threw her arms around Maan only to feel him tense but slowly relax... His arms slowly came around her tightening her in his embrace.. Geet felt the butterflies n tingling sensation in her stomach when she heard maan say'
' just smile Geet, thats all i want from you.. Your happiness... Enjoy the movie'
She felt him entangle himself from her n began to leave the room when she stopped him
'maan are you not gona stay here and watch with us?
' no Geet.. I have work.. Apki tara time waste kar nei ki adaat nei hai' he smirked, winket at her and left the room, leaving a frustrated yet completely happy Geet staring at his retreating figure...

Precap: same as before
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
absolutely adorable...
Maan had hurt her a lot but I guess he made up to her really. It was such an amazing surprise. On top of it, Pinky coming there was totally shocking. When you started describing, i thought Maan will watch a movie with her. But he actually got her best friend there.
Awesome 👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
awesome awesome superb mind-blowing update
loved it
cont. soon
waiting for next update

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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Amazing..!!!
Awww...Maan is so sweet and adorable😍 ,he just wants smile on Geet's face so he even called Pinky .😍
He smiled and winked at her😉
Wonderful update ,Pls update the next part soon 😊

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