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Hey...hi.
Why haven't you updated it ??
Waiting for the update dear .
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Chapter 6

'sir' Geet called out again, observing Maan seemed to be lost somewhere
Not Sir geet, it's Maan for you' Maan hoped that this would break the ice between them a bit but Geets response took him by surprise
'no! You are my boss, I am your PA, I have no right to call you anything but Sir and that is what I will call you'
Maan observed Geet steadily, he had known her long enough to understand that she was hurt and was now trying to cover up her pain by acting cold. He remembered the day she came to KM with dadi.
FLASHBACK
Maan.. Maan' he heard his dadi a shout... Maan ran down the stairs hearing the anxiousness and pain in dadimas voice. The sight that stood before him shocked him. Hanging off dadima was a young girl with blood covering her face, arm and leg.
Dadima yeh Kahn hai... Wats happend.
Geet'
Geet? But she's in Mumbai at a boarding school..
Maan this is Geet... Woh Brij.. He called her back on he pretence that Baha'i had fallen ill.. When she returned, Brij locked her up. He still could not accept the fact that her birth had resulted in the death of his Khala.. The only thing he believes is that because she is a girl she's bad luck'
What?? Dadima what happened today?
He tried to kill her.
Maan face registered shock... He looked down at Geet who seemed to be coming out of her daze...
'geet? Maan called out
Geet snapped her head back... Her eyes were burning bright with fire, anger, determination
' I'm fine... Nothing's happened to me.. I can look after myself.. Dadima thank you but I don't need any news help' she said in a quiet but determined voice. The scratches and wounds covering her did not seem to affect her. Her face was cold and it showed no determination.
Geet, you will stay here' Maan said determinedly, ignoring all she had just said much to her infuriating.
Geet was hurting. Her brother had tried to kill her, her mother had abandoned her, her bauji looked at her with disgust and her aunt treated her like crap. Every time she felt she would get some ones love she was letdown. No matter what dadima had said at her home about protecting her and treating her like a daughter, whilst saving her from veerji, she did not believe it for a second. Dadima would let her down like every one else had but she would not allow this to happen. She would rather be alone in this world the go through the pain of being left alone again. Thus she made the decision not to accept dadimas offer and ignore Maans order.
' Mr Khurana, you are neither my dad nor my boss... I do not have to listen to a word you say. I am not staying here and that's final.' she tuned towards dadima and in a softer voice ' dadima thank you for everything. But I can't stay here. Sorry' she had just turned around to leave when she heard dadimas voice behind her
'tumhe meri kasam Geet.. I promised your mum I will look after you, up till today because of your bauji I was unable to. But now I will.. tumhe meri kasam you will have to stay here. Please Geet'
The pleading in dadimas voice broke something in Geets heart. She could not stand the woman she respected and loved with all her heart to beg in from of her. She needed a mother and dadima was promising her that, tears threatend to fall from here yes as she turned around. She walked towards dadima and collapsed in her arms crying.
' ssshhh beta no more. I will never let anyone hurt you again. You are mine.. Any one who hurts my Geet will have to dealwith Savitri Devi'
Maan looked at the scene before him. He realised then that Geet was scared of commitment and care. She would run from anything she may get attached to. He promised himself that he would take care of Geet, would never hurt her.

PRESENT
Maan remembered that day very clearly like it was yesterday. It hurt him to see he had hurt his Geet today. He looked up at Geet who was standing there looking at everything but him. He decided to tease her a little
' Geet, Geet,Geet... A little anger from me and you go running to dadi.. Where's my sherni'
Geet looked up at him in shock. He had not addressed her as'his sherni' in a long time. He only called her that wen he was in a playful mood , but she had not seen that side of him in a very long time, ever since he decided to ignore her. She looked at him with clear annoyance and replied
' sorry sir, I don't understand what your trying to say'
'Kya sir sir... Not so long ago you said you will never call me sir, yet now you can't stop. Seems to me you like being ordered around by me' he said with a smirk
'you are my boss'
I am your boss..but is that the only relationship we share Geet?
He looked at her Trying to gauge a reaction from her.. Standing there just staring ather.
Geet looked at him trying to analyse what was hidden behind his words. Maan walked towards her,
'Jawab do Geet!... Is that the on,y relationship we share? He stood before her looking in to her eyes. Leaving her dazed, unable to comprehend and grasp the meaning of his words. Geet looked at him unable to answer..

Precap: Geets answer

Edited by Saj110 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
amazing part... Plz try 2 update da next part soon :)
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part 6 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing

Loved Geet's cold behaviour and Maan's lines. Loved Maan's attempts to cheer up his sherni !!!
I'm actually liking this bond between maaneet..!!
Pls cont soon 😊 ] ⭐️
Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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ossum dear
superb
dear pls once check the link
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh dear...Geet is really hurting...i hope Maan brings back her hapiness
awesome part
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Chapter 7
Geet looked up at him in wonder. What did he mean? What other relationship did they share? Yes he was Dadimas grandson but what was he to her other than that?
'I don't understand what your trying to say Sir. I just told you that the only relationship we share is a professional one!'
' only professional? Are you sure Geetu?'
Geets head snapped up at his use of 'Geetu... What was wrong with him today? Why was he acting like he use to years ago? He only used Geetu when he wanted her to laugh? But why did he care about her now. He had made it clear they only had a professional relationship, yet now after talkin to Dadimas he seemed to be obsessed about proving otherwise.
' sir I would rather you only talk to me about work. Other than work we have nothing to say to each other.'
Maan looked at Geet. He saw how her face reacted at his use of 'Geetu'. He knew he had not used that word in ages and him using it would bring back a lot of memories for her. He was determined to explore her. Find out how she had changed in the past 2 years. The two years he had been trying to keep a distance from her. He stepped right in from of Geet and lifted her chin up with his fingers
'Geet' he said huskily 'I want my Geetu back... The laughing, playful , mischievous Geet who would leave no stone unturned in trouble her Maan'
Geet looked up at him, trying to think about what had bought this change in him. Her head replayed the past 2 hours. She looked up at him determinedly and said,
' Sir, you don't have to pretend to like me because of Dadima. I was upset so I called her. If she told you to behave with me then it doesn't matter. I will not tell Dadima anything regarding our professional relationship. If she asks about your behaviour towards me, I'll tel her it's fine. You don't have to force yourself to like me, talk to me, accept me.. You have your life, I have mine. I accept that and I don't mind.
Maan looked at her in shock. Where had at come from? Forced to like her, talk to her? Was she crazy? Did she not know who he was?
' Geet, I'm Maan Singh Khurana! No one, not even Dadima, can force me to do anything, let alone make me talk to someone I don't like. I am trying to make a conversation and develop some kind of understanding with you because we have to live together and work together for the next two years. Id rather us not fight and create a tense atmosphere all the time. Do you understand that?'
So that's why he was being nice to her. Geet understood where he was coming from. She also wanted to go home and relax, not end up fighting with him every night.
'sir?'
'Ji Geet?'
' I understand. Don't worry I'll stay out of your way'
'what?'
' we have no relationship except in the professional domain. In our personal lives, away from the office, I won't come near you at home or else where.you won't so much as have a sniff of me in the house.'
'Geet, I didn't mean that and you know it. Waise, did you not tell Sasha you were here to make me fall for you?' he replied woth a smirk
Geet looked up at him in shock. She believed he had not heard her, yet obviously he did. What was wrong with this bewakuuf today, that he was leaving her unable to think. She looked right in his eyes and replied
' yup, but alas, how can an animal fall for a human' with that quip she turned on her heel and left his office, frustrated at his behaviour and changing mood.
Maan was left looking at her retreating back with his mouth left hanging. Had she just called him an animal? And did she just admit she came here for him?
Maan could not forget her admission, and geet was cursing herself for allowing him to work her up like always.
'dumb dumb dumb!! Why did you say that? Remember, professional relationship only. Now you just made sure he'l come back at you with that swipe'
Geet left work ready to face what ever Maan threw at her. Maan looked at her walking out with a mischievous glint in his eye. She did not know what awaited her at home.

precap: remember you said I was your boyfriend' he replied with a naughty smirk.

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