For Better or For Worse.. Maaneet..NotE:pg11n

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sometimes life will throw trouble.. Pain.. Enemies in your path... That is when your love is tested.. Is your love strong enough to withstand the accusations, the lies and the pain? Will your love overcome this?

Character Sketch..

Maan Singh Khurana: typical 25year old boy who loves football and lives in London. He is a looking after the family company Khurana Construction. He is our typical Maan.. Strict, disciplined and serious.

Geet Handa: 20 year old girl who has come from Bangalore to London to work for Khurana Constructions on an internship. She is lively,bubbly and everything opposite to what Maan prefers. Her family had disowned her because of her gender and she is where she is now due to her godmother Savitri Devi.

Savitri Devi: Maans g'mum and Geets godmother. She looked after Geet since she was young and has always wanted Maan to marry Geet.

Pinky: Geets best friend.

Adi: Maans trusted employee.

Sasha: KC architect. Has always wanted to marry Maan.

More characters will be introduced as the story goes on.

Maan and Geet know each other but Maan hardly pays her any attention. He respects her for looking after his g'mum and has offered her this internship on her request. He is protective of her because of her past. He cares for her yet never lets it show. Geet admires and respects Maan.

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Part2&3-page2
Part4-page3
Part5-page5
Part6-page6
Part7-Page7
Part8-page8
Part9-page10
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow nice start and a different concept ... do continue soon pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice character sketch. plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1

It had been a long and tiring flight to London yet I was so excited. I couldn't wait to go my new home for the next 12months.. Khurana Villa.. I already miss dadima though.. Hope she can join me here..
My new internship in KC should be interesting. It always amazes me how the great Maan Singh Khurana can't stand the sight if me, not that it affects me because I know he cares about me in his own way.
Geet thoughts went into overdrive as she began preparing for the start of a new journey in her life. Little did she know what awaited her in London.

Meanwhile Maan was pacing up and down the arrival terminal at Heathrow airport.
' where is that girl? The flight landed 90mins ago yet she's still not out.. Aah probably found a new friend with her constant bak bak. Does she not realise I have to get to work. Yeh Larki sach mien mera nuksaan karwa nei ke hai'

Geet walked past the border and stopped to talk to some friends she had made on the plane.
' bye.. Contact Mei rehna'. ' bye' ' bye beautiful baby'
After collecting her luggage and going through security she walked through the doors only to find a glaring Maan before her.
'Maan?'
'kaha ti tum? Pura plane rikal Gaya air tum abhi nikli.. Eik to surf dadima ki kehne pei tumei lenai aya aur tum mera nuksaan kara rei ho'
'Kya? Mien tumhara nuksaan? Aap mujhe Saab ki samne daat ra hei aur mujhe embarrass kar ra hei.. Aur aap nuksaan ki baatein kar re hei?'
' ha!! Ab chup chap sei ya sei chalo.. Mujhe kaam hei tumhari Tara fazuul ka time nei hai waste kar nei ka'
' time waste? Aur mien?
Their bickering continued all the way home...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start dear...do continue...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

They reached KV... Geet was amazed at the grandeur of it.. Compared to KM this looked like a palace. Maan dropped Geet and left for KC immediately.
Geet meanwhile was taking a tour of the villa.
' How amazing is this swimming pool.. Omg it has a jacuzzi and sauna as well. Perfect for relaxing after a hard day at work' Geet continued her tour through the home cinema and bowling alley towards the gardens where ere was a tennis court and gold course. ' this place is wow!! Dadima will love it here' Geet remembered then that she had to still call Dacia so went inside and directly called dado as mobile.
' dadimaaa'
'namaste beta... How are you?
I'm good dadima.. How are you? Your not getting lonely are you? Dadima aap bhi Ajai na yaape... Dadima you have to see this place it's so big!! There's a jacuzzi, cinema, tennis court... Geet went on and on explaining the house in great detail to dadima not realising how much she was talking. Dadima was greatly amused and happy at Geets excitement and even more amused at Geets narration of her little argument with Maan.
Dadima aapka pota bilkul kharoos hai.. Dusht danav.. Tori late Kay rikhli, mujae Saab ki samnai airport mei daAat nei Lagai.. Bilkul sadoo hai'
Geet continued to express her anger not realising that some one had just entered the house..
Dadima sach mie Dusht danav hai... Inki lai Kasi Kaam karunge sirg babaji jan te hai.. Maan ok to sirf daat an aur chila nei ata hai.. Na hastai hai an smile karte hei...kharoos insaan'

Maan was standing behind her listening to her talking rubbish about him to his dadima. His facial expressions were changing from amusement to annoyance to anger as he heard her calling him danav and kharoos. Once he couldn't hear anymore he screamed
GEET
In fear Geet screamed and dropped the phone.
Maaan..aap' she quivered at the sight of him realising he had heard her talking to dadima.. The anger in his eyes was ferocious as well as the grim line on his lips.. She took a step back towards the living room as he was walking towards her
What were you saying to dadima? I'm kharoos..dusht? Tell me Geet... Why are you gone quiet now...
Geet was looking everywhere but him.. She realised that any moment now he would explode.
Mien..mmeinai..' she stammered' I didn't call you kharoos... No no.. You must have heard incorrectly'
Really? So who was it sayin I'm Dusht and sadoo? Do you think it was a ghost from above I heard speaking? Bolo an Geet...
Haha.. Bhoot ta...
Really?' Maan pulled Geet towards him with such force that she landed on his chest... She could feel his heartbeat and his breath on her neck. Never had she been this close to Maan and now that she was all her insides were burning..

Precap: ' miss Handa I am your boss.. You will address me as Sir.. Not Maan'

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3

Kyun Geet.. What were you saying?
Woh.. Woh.. Nothing..' Geet was flustered and had lost her ability to think.. Maans proximity had left her with nothing but complete awareness of him.. She was feeling things she had never felt before.. Geet looked up and saw Maan staring down at her
Bolo Geet ' he said softly... Looking straight into her eyes.. Not even he knew what was happening but her eyes were drawing him into her like a magnet. He could see nothing but her.. Her strawberry scent had taken his nose over.. Her body was tantalising him... He abruptly left her And moved back. Geet was breathing rapidly and unable to look at him after what had just happened. Her brain was confused.. She was thinking about this when she heard Maans voice..
' we leave for work at 8.. If your late I will leave without you and then its upto you how you get to KC... If your late your wage will be docked' after saying tis Maan turned around and left the room leaving Geet standing there confused about what had just happened.

The next day Maan was waiting for Geet to come down. His patience wa running low as I was already 7.55 and there was no sign of her.
'where Is she? I told her clearly to be ready by 8 but that girl has no sense of time keeping. If she's not here then I'm leaving without her.. Not my problem how she gets to KC.. ' whilst Maan was thinking this he heard the sound of Payal twinkling. He looked up to see the most beautiful yet simplest girl he had seen in London.. Geet walked down the stairs in a simple but elegant anarkali suit. She looked nervous and was unable to meet Maans eyes fearing what she would see in them.
Woh I don't know if this will be okay to wear.. I don't wear western clothes' she looked down with the slightest of shade of pink touching her cheeks. She had grown up as a traditional girl. She believed in the modern society but always felt that she had to keep her Indian identity with her. She was unsure whether this would be suitable for work but had refused to buy any western clothes even tough dadima advised her.. ' I'm Indian andi want he old to know and see' she had told dadima but now she was not sure if he ad made the right decision.
Meanwhile Maan could not stop staring at er. Ever dice their close proximity lat night she had been occupying his thought and seeing her like this had rendered him speechless. However he could not make his attraction obvious to her so just nodded his head
' hmm chal jayga.. Arab chale? We're late as it is because ofyou'

Maan entered KC and the place went crazy as the bells were ringing nd everyone was running here and there to get to their normal places before Maan came to the op floor where his office was.
Tasha' sasha Maam y is mk late today?
Sasha' I dont know.. This is not like him. Mayb he went somewre'
Their conversation ended abruptly as they saw Maan walk in with a meek Geet behind him.
Sasha: good morning MK.. Aaj apko late hog ya? And who's ths girl?
Maan ignored her and went into his office indicating for Geet to follow him much to the annoyance of Sasha who looked at her with disregard.

Maan waited for Geet to enter so he could disclose to her the aspects of her job and what would be expected from her. After last night he was not sure keeping her as his secretary would be a very good idea as that would mean they would be spending a lot of time together which he did not want. Once Geet entered Maan began...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing strat dear...i think you are still writing chapter 3...but great beginning...
waiitng for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello I am Pooja Shah , i just started reading ur ff and really liking it can u please pm me

thanks you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME
please add me to your pm list

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