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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Amar che besi bhalo tomar ta. Fabulous re. Alina sab khanai villain hoye jache.😆
Tara tari continue koro please.

Tor matha 😛 tor ta onk sundor chilo 😳 thanks... well you will see how i will make Alina neg or grey actually..hope you will like it 😳

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.SmokeySilence.

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IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna26

Awesome OS!😃

Poor Alina!After Abhay's betrayal she is left heartbroken. Female of the species is more deadlier than the male.Bechara Abhay, dono taraf se band bajega!😆 Pia is right on her part...Abhay should trust her once and tell her the truth. Together they can make impossible possible. Continue soon.

Thanks Prerna. Off course she will be heartbrken sooner or later as she is so much in love with Abhay. uska sabhi taraf se bajna chahiye 😛 sabki bajata jo hai...his turn now 😆 exactly my point, if they are clear to each other it would b gr8 😊

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiora
wow wow wow wow tanzie!!i have no words..its just brilliant!!wow !!piya slapped abhay!!oh dear alina knows the truth now?waiting 4 da nxt part..update asap!!n luv u lots 4 starting this os!!

Thanks Tora 😳 I want her to do that though I know she wont 😛 will post the next part before the episode airs.. luv u too 🤗

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.SmokeySilence.

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IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

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visma

@kuttu

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

Oh no what has Abhay created not a storm a tornado. He should know that he would now be a toast int he hand of the women that love him. First Pia and now Alina she can be quite vindictive. This is getting quite scary. I hope Alina doesn't do something rash like hurt Pia.

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D.O_Xing

@D.O_Xing

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

Yaar tanzy... You didn't send me PM for this OS...😭

Okay... Let it be..😊

I'll read all the parts and tell you..😉

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 1301Princess
Yaar tanzy... You didn't send me PM for this OS...😭
Okay... Let it be..😊
I'll read all the parts and tell you..😉

I didn't PM anyone till now dear 😳

Let me finish the second part then I will PM for both 😊

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purple_shadoz

@purple_shadoz

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

hello dear...awsm updt...👏lvd d way u shwd abhiya cnfrntztn n pia's turmoil...👍🏼so pia s off to help abhay takng all risks????? i lv ds pia...who instead ov only questning ds sm actn also...😆omg...dt ws a nyc cncpt...alina doing it cz of deepu????😡n haseena doing it cz ov alina?????alina s bng manipulatd...awww...poor soul...😭lvd d way u shwd hr feelngs n disputes wd hrslf...⭐️oh...i love ds pia agn...😳finally arnab ki paagzlpanti kuh kaam aai...😆pia's idea ws awsm...👏o my abhay...hes so sad...well i hope he bcms fine agn...wtng 4 d final showdown...😛do cont soon...loasss ov lv...😳Edited by purple_shadoz - 12 years ago

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

Nice update! I'm glad Piya knows the entire truth now! Hopefully, she'll tell Abhay asap that Alina is controlling Haseena, and Abhay will soon find a way to free Haseena from Alina's spell! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

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tanz dat was a gr8 update!!

v all were badly in need of dat, after today's episode!!

i liked ur way of taking d story to khurana's house , pia in ur os is much stronger for her love than in d show, she is angry bt still she is nt loosing it, she understands him so well n her vary act of entering in lions' den herself proved it!! i reli loved ur imagination of this whole track!!

nw coming to alina's part, her character is grey n u av potrayed it well, dat mirror imaged scene was beautiful, hats off to u for dat!!

although i gt confused at dat point where u wrote abt dat small bottles containing some dired herbs!!

bt again u av done justice in defining abhay's inner turnmoil, his human-cum-supernatural act (calling pia n then trying to connect wid her), defining his situation very well!!

continue soon hun

luv u🤗

Edited by heena_mehta - 12 years ago

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