MiniSS:Your Family's Mine&I'll Protect it Upd Pg20

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
wow dishu awesome update.I loved the way u ended ur FF.Oh I love Pia's plan above all the way she scolded Abhay & chand & evn killed deepu aunty.I m so happy 2 read ur point of view😳

With the way the current track is going, I feel like giving tight slaps to ABhay and strangling Chand, so I made Pia scold them and show them what supernaturals should be all about.

Quote

Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: friends2805
Brilliant ending...1 request to Cv's plzzz Show a brave move by Piya in some kind of circustance like this 1...I luv the way that u got the climax at itz utmost peak dishu...and brilliant resolving...u should write such mini SS' often...:)

Thank You. I guess with the way the current track is moving, I will be forced to keep writing OS and SS to vent out my frustration at the CVs

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: luvd
Wow dishu di it was just superb.
Piya ne kya danta abhay ko maaja aa gaya.seriously cv's r thowing all the crap at us.i want 2 c brave piya in the show too.
Deepu aunty maar gayi,pata nahi show mei kab hoga.
Anyways brilliant ending.

I m tired of waiting for the WW track to end. First we heard it would end by September now its mid October, still nowhere near end 😡

Quote

Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: ozzyie
beautiful ss dishu ...superb ending ...do write more .👏

How about a fun OS/SS now 😉

Quote

Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: Deepi20
Brilliant ending! Wow, Piya saved the day! 😃 I'm so happy that Piya turned out to be the smartest and was so brave to get the potion and then attack Deepanita! I really hope something like this happens in the show but it's highly unlikely! I loved the end when Piya gave Abhay a piece of her mind and questioned him on how he was planning on getting the potion! 😆 I totally loved the ending, you did an awesome job 👏

Thank You. I am really tired with the way Ek is projecting Raichands as the dumbest vampires on the planet who have to resort to such kind of kitchen and board room politics to fight a supernatural battle

Quote

Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: prerna26
Wow Amazing..!!
Well-written Plot!! Pia did all this on her own. Great...Perfect combination of beauty with brains!In Pkyek too they should show something like this...Pia supporting him through thick and thin.😃 loved the ending. You did a great job!!!Thanks a lot for Pm.

In the show, we never get to see Pia supporting Abhay in every way. Ek just wants to confirm to the stereotypical image of a damsel in distress for Pia.

Quote

Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
🤣
Pia made Abhay look like a total Jack ass.🤣🤣🤣 Awesome update Dish.

He is behaving like one in the show 🤣

Quote

Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29
loved it. piya scolding abhay n abhay n chand ashamed n other vampires amused nice i would love to see it your way . i hope so. thanks 4 pm. n thank u for writing a beautiful short SS.

Thank You, and You are Welcome

Quote

Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: abhiya7fan
omg...superb ..pia's plan was superb..
abhay aur saare vampires ki bolti band karwa di...
and then the way she gives her piece of mind to abhay and chand and abhay and the remaining vampires just stand and listen!!!
it was outstanding..!!
kaash show mein bhi yeh jaldi se solve ho jaae.. coz i cant see pia heartbroken..nor can i tolerate jay with pia!! and aleena abhay track is seriously pissing me off!!
and as for who is controlling haseena in the show..im sure it is deepanita..!!!

I really want Pia to grab Abhay by his collar and give slap him rather than just cry. and I too am waiting for this WW track to end soon, par show mein I think its Alina who is controlling Haseena

Quote

Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: abhiya7fan

guys u r forgetting that in this ss abhay has told pia the entire truth thats why she has come up with this plan to help haseena...
in the show abhay is not telling pia anything..so wat can she do...??

You are right, that is why whenever people bash Pia, I support her because I feel that its ABhay who is not trusting her enough to tell her the truth and not the other way round.