MG OS: The night i spent with you..Prt 5 on pg 13 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: tinu.jindal

awesum waiting 4 more

okay!!!!!😛😃

will continue!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Part 3


It have started raining like hell. Maan's car break down due to heavy rain.Maan says Oh what the hell? Now what?. Geet speak up Hey Mr.Maan, i guess you are Maan as you told me, by the way, give me your jacket so I can get out of the car. Maan shouts Is my jacket your umbrella? Geet nods with a innocent face which persuade Maan to hand over his jacket. Geet comes out of the car with the jacket, Maan says We have to stay a night in this jungle until the rain is over. Geet worried But where? Maan looks around and spot a small hut in the middle of the jungle.He asks to Geet to follow, Geet follow him. They both come to the small hut in the middle of jungle and enter inside. They find no one there, only dry grass. Maan says No other option, we have to stay here tonight. Geet nods.


Beshrmi to happen soon! continue reading here!


 

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Posted: 12 years ago
#13

thx alot dear!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
omg ausum...plz pm whn u upd n next part!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArMaanDeewan

omg ausum...plz pm whn u upd n next part!!

i cannot just check the heading when its prt 4 then come in!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

thx! thank you!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
till part 3
nice ones...
but why very short?
cont soon...
pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Really lovely OS! 😃
I just read all 3 parts in the one go...wanting more!!!!!!!!

I hope you update soon... hehehe would be great to see Geet suddenly jumping up and giving Maan another tight hug 😳

Its Awesome! Keep it up! 👏

~ Anju
MAAN ROCKS! ~
THE TRUE MAAN MANIAC


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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
hey
nice parts
but why short ?
make bigger ones next time 😆😛
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Part 4:


Geet is standing near the door and watching the rain falling, she raise her hands outside to get the water on her hand.She finally runs out of the hut and start dancing in the rain. Maan is watching this in the hut, he stares at her and smiles. Maan says in his heart Geet! Beautiful, I don't know what is in her that attract me toward her. Geet is enjoying the rain while Maan is enjoying looking at Geet. Geet runs to Maan and asks him to come in the rain but Maan refuses and ask Geet to come inside, Geet says Okay,I don't want to get ill.Maan says Good Girl. They both smile.Geet in heart, My boyfriend Finally. A funny smile comes on her face. She shivers as she is wet.Maan takes off his jacket and lends it to Geet, Geet dreams romantic about her and Maan in a room together. Geet thinks that she has falling in love with this man in only their first meeting, Maan also thinks the same. The rain stops. Maan and Geet goes outside to enjoy the wet forest. Geet holds Maan's hand 😳, Maan is happy with this. They both sits on a log near the hut, Geet wants to express her love. Geet says Maan I want to say something... Maan gives her permission. Geet gather courage to speak to a strange man who she have just meet tonight and already have fallen in love with him, Maan I am love with you because as girl would love a man like you. Maan is left speechless, Geet gets afraid that Maan will refuse. But Maan says Geet that what i wanted to say? I love you. They both hug each other , Maan loses his balance on the log and fell down, his shirt gets dirty.Geet laughs. Maan is angry, he goes inside Geet follows him. He takes off his dirty shirt. Geet is surprised to see a hot body , she keeps staring at it. Geet in heart, Hot! Maan Love you. Maan also start staring at her!


To be continued with Beshrmi's beginning!