Do Pal Ki Zindaagi (ch4,pg15 - 11 Feb) : Mayur FF

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Hey all,

This is Monal (Kasurbest) and Khushi (Princess_Khushi)

If you guys read the stories 

Kitni Ajeeb Hai Yeh Zindaagi, Love Story OnlinePyar ki Nishaani, Tujhe Bhula Diya, Vivaah, and Ishq Junoon Dewaangi

by Princess_Khushi

AND

Veer aur Sukirti series, and Another Cinderella story Singing' and Dancin' forever

by Kasurbest


ALSO

True Love - ff written by both of us; Monal and Princess_Khushi


Then you guys know us. If you don't, than well here we are and you can get to know us now.

We are here as co-writers of the new story 'Do Pal Ki Zindaagi'

 

Acknowledgment:

 

Kasurbest -  for the idea and concept of the story, moving on to no one else but both of us for helping each other out to make this story a great one and 'cause for bearing each other as that is the hardest thing for us to do. Just pray that while writing the parts, we dont kill (not literally of course) each other. ðŸ˜†

Last but not least thank you to all our readers, whose attention we are about to capture and for supporting us throughout to make this a successful story.

 

 

Index:

Synopsis and Introduction

PM List

Character Sketch

Chapter 1 - Page 5

Chapter 2 - Page 7

Chapter 3 - Page 12

Note

Chapter 4 - Page 15

Chapter 5 -

 

 

 

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Synopsis: 

This is a story about a girl who is in 9th grade. She was living her life peacefully and happily, until, a new guy came into her class. Her life changed completely when he entered her life. He was just like other guys. At the same time, he is different. They both don't want to accept their feelings and listen to their friends. No matter what they both don't listen to the feeling that is deep inside their heart.

 

Read the FF 'Do Pal ki Zindaagi' to see how they meet, how their life changes and what other new and perfect twisted turns that makes their life as it is.


Life - filled with all sorts of things.

Happiness, Sadness

Anger, Love

Hatred, Friendliness

All types of relationships

And

Emotions!

 

This story is about two youngsters,

Stepping in their teenage life

Not fully matured

Yet handling big problems

Better than any adult

 

The phases of life:

Going from teenage to adult-hood,

Shocks them with reality,

Breaking their illusions

As they open their eyes

To the world around

 

Strangers to friends,

Friends to best friends,

Best friends to more?

What is their relationship?

Do they even know their

Relationship

 

An invisible line

Tying them together

Who says 'True love

Can only happen in

Adulthood?'


(Not copied from over the net. Written by Khushi)


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Character Sketch

 

Singhania Family


 

Mr. Sanjeev Singhania

He is the head of the house; a kind man who loves his wife very much and loves his daughter more than anything in the world. Owner of a small business and is happy with everything that God has given him in his life.


 

Mrs. Sayantani Singhania

She is a perfect house-wife and a mother. She loves her children more than anything. She supports her husband in any kind of circumstances and understands her daughter without the use of words.



Akshara Anandita Singhania

A sweet, simple and friendly going girl, she is the main female lead of the story, always enjoying her life to the fullest and takes all the things lightly. She is never ever in her life serious. She is very smart, intelligent, and studious. You will know her more as you read the story.


 

Ashish (Age: 10)

Akshara's younger brother. He is very mischievous, loving, smart and the best brother one could ever have. He loves his sister and parents more than anything in the world. He is really a sweet person.

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Agarwal Family


 

Mr. Arjun Agarwal

He is the head of the house. He is a really nice husband and a good father. Takes good care of his family and owns a big business and also loves his one and only son more than anything in his life.


 

Mrs. Varsha Agarwal

She is the perfect housewife and loves her family. She spends most of her time in the kitchen and with her family. She supports her family very much and is always helping everyone. She is a kind-hearted and a loving mother, knows how to handle a situation in a perfect manner.


 

Aayush Agarwal

The only son in the Agarwal family (According to Akshara this is the main reason she says, "isiliye who itna bigad gaya hai"). He does have attitude and talks very less to girls except for Akshara. He is smart, handsome, good looking and studious too.

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Akshara and Aayush's friends



 

Asna

Akshara's best friend. Always teases Akshara and is really a very great friend. She is very nice, and does not miss a single opportunity to enjoy life. She is paired up with Swayam.



 

Kanika

Also Akshara's friend. She and Asna get together and eat up Akshara's brain. Knows very well how to lighten the air and keep her friends happy.



Abhishek (aka Abhi)

Aayush's best friend. He also thinks that Aayush and Akshara are not "just friends". He is an outgoing and friendly person. Always has solutions to things... well, let's say 'almost always'. 


 

Swayam

Also their friend. He is really sweet and fun person to hang around with. Always speaks the right thing at a right time. Settles the climate around perfectly. He is paired up with Asna.

 

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Side Characters


 

Vaishali Ma'am (aka Vasu ma'am)

She is their math teacher. Very strict, does not afford indiscipline or distractions in her class. Poor Akshara always gets scolding in this class because of Aayush.

Math is both Akshara's and Aayush's favorite subject. Still Vasu ma'am cares a lot about her students and is everyone's favorite teacher.


 

Satish sir

He is an English professor and a very good teacher. In every English drama or concert or any kind of classroom shows, he tends to pick Akshara and Aayush to act as couple.


Priya

Aayush's cousin sister whom he loved more like his own sister and more than anyone else. She died in a bus accident and the loss of his sister makes his attitude change completely.


Khitish

An antagonist of the story. Always planning evil in his brain. Keeps bothering Akshara and tries to make friendship with her. Only he knows what he really wants and why he is like this.

 

Edited by Moon_Snow - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Let us know what you think about it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
i think it's going to be a gud ff
interesting storyline
continue soon 
thankss for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
well start great concept thanks a lot for pm 
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnx for d pm
nice story
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome start
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 
like the characters 
pm me with upd soon