FF'Dream OR Destiny' Last Chapter 35, Page 111 - Page 70

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ok first of all sorry for not giving comments for so many chappis , actually my net was causing problems u know na 😳

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Baawra man daikhne chala aik sapna,

Baawra man daikhne chala aik sapna...

They had reached the wedding place by the time the song had ended. Kesar parked the car n looked at gulaal whose eyes were placed at her palms n who seemed to be lost in some thoughts.

"Gulaal.." said Kesar but there was no movement in her. She sat still.

"Gulaal" this time kesar called her a bit loudly n touched her shoulder in order to tell her that they had reached. "Hum agaye hen, chal"

Gulaal suddenly became aware of her surrounding but looked at kesar with a surprised expression as if her eyes were asking him that what is all happening.

"Kya hua? Teri tabyat toh theek hai na? chal na, teri dost intezar kar rahi hogi" kesar said with a confused expression. He was not able to figure out that what had happened to her.

Gulaal looked down n opened the car door n stepped outside. Kesar was now more confused of gulaal's behavior. He got out of the car n locked it, n they both moved forward towards the entrance n entered the area. There were lots n lots of guests there. Gulaal had come out like this after so many days. She was feeling very different today. A feeling of freedom was surrounding her n a feeling of completeness. Her heart was brimming with joy, a joy whose reason she was also not able to determine. The cool wind blowing, gave her a soothing n calm feeling. She was liking the effect which the wind was having on her n she folded her hands n took a deep breath as if like she wanted to hold this feeling with her forever. On the other hand, kesar was observing all this n he was feeling really happy to see her like this. May be it was the effect of the weather or their own hearts that they both were feeling so good in their own ways.

"Aray gulaal baita, kesi hai tu?" one woman aged in her mid fifties greeted gulaal n hugged her.

"Main theek hun maa, ap kesi hen?"

"Main bilkul theek hun beta, tu toh ghayab hi hogayi apni shadi k baad, maa ki bhi yaad nahi ayi kya tujhe? Haan? " she smiled n looked at kesar who was standing quietly beside gulaal but as soon as the lady's attention shifted towards him, he greeted her.

"Namaste maa ji" said kesar.

"Namaste beta, jeetay raho, gulaal, yeh kesar hai, hai na?"

"Ji maa" said gulaal n then she looked at kesar n told him "Yeh dhani ki maa hen"

Dhani's mother: "Kesay ho beta? Kabhi gulaal ko le kar ghar ao na, aur hamari gulaal ko khush rakhte ho na?" she smiled while talking to him.

Kesar was confused as to what should he say now, he knew the answer of this question. He knew that in those circumstances in which he married gulaal, how could be gulaal happy with him. He started feeling a bit uncomfortable n just managed to say "Ji".

While they were talking, gulaal excused herself to go n meet dhani as she was in the room, the marriage ceremony had not begun yet.

Dhani's mother introduced kesar to her husband n son n he was given a very special protocol as he was gulaal's husband. Kesar was feeling very awkward. He was being given special attention from the hosts n dhani's brother befriended him soon n introduced him to his friends n cousis. After some time kesar started to know the people n came to the conclusion that they vr really humble n down to earth people n they considered gulaal as their family member. They apologized him for not being present at their wedding as they were out of the country n had just returned a few days before for the wedding. The place was filled with happiness n laughter as the guests were enjoying themselves. Starters n juices were being served now but there were two eyes that were searching for some one from the whole lot of people. Two eyes that were not even concerned for other people but one. It had been some time now n gulaal had not returned. Kesar had started to become restless, he excused himself n went towards the bridal room. He knew the fact that he couldn't go there so he tried to ask a girl nearby if she can go inside n call gulaal.

"Gulaal? Kyun ap ko kya kaam hai gulaal se?" the girl inquired having a mischievous tone.

Kesar got puzzled with this question n he couldn't make out as to what to answer her.

"Ji woh..."

"Aray neha, yeh toh kesar hen, gulaal k pati yaani hamare jija ji" another girl giggled.

"Kya, ohooo jabhi toh gulaal k peeche peeche yahan bhi agaye, kya jija ji, gulaal se thori dair bhi door nahi reh sakte hen kya hahaha" neha said.

"Haan jiju, thora toh sabar rakhen na, after all function hai, n thora toh hamara right bhi banta hai na ap ki gulaal pe, hum bhi friends hi hen us ki hehehe" said dhara.

Kesar was now speechless, he had never been in such situation before. Drops of tears formed on his forehead now as he really wanted to run away from there. He was feeling very shy n awkward. Just then when the teasing of the girls was going on, coincidently, gulaal stepped out of the room n kesar nearly ran towards her, n gulaal became surprised.

"Hahahaha jiju toh kitnay bechain thay gulaal k paas jane k liye, kya jiju, hum se toh baat hi nahi ki ap ne" said dhara.

Gulaal: "Kesar? Kya hua? Tu itna ghabraya hua kyun hai?"

Neha: "Hahaha gulaal, jiju hum se dar gaye" n both the girls laughed naughtily.

Gulaal: "Kya ho raha hai yeh sab, kyun tang kar rahay ho tum log, akhir hua kya? Kesar tu..."

Neha: "Oho jiju, sorry hum ne ap ko pareshan kar diya, gulaal hum toh bas jiju ki leg pulling kar rahay thay"

Kesar: "Nahi its ok" n he tried to smile but quickly turned his attention towards gulaal, "Gulaal main tujhe dhoond raha tha, who sa mandap k side jama ho rahay thay toh is liye"

Gulaal: "Haan woh sorry main dhani se bohot din baad mili na is liye..."

"Aray bachon chalo sab jaldi, pandit ji keh rahay hen mahurat ho chukka hai shadi ka, dulhan ko le ayen" one elderly lady came n informed them all.

Gulaal: "Tu chal kesar hum sab atay hen" n she n both the girls went inside to take dhani to the mandap. Kesar also left from there to go towards the mandap area.

Few minutes passed n then the bride was brought in the mandap n the ceremony began. Dhani was looking beautiful as a bride n kesar felt like he has seen her somewhere before, but where? He was not able to figure it out.

Pandit ji began to chant the mantars n the guests had already gathered round the mandap. It was time to put the var maalas now. A girl came from the groom's side holding the platter with the mala n from this side this responsibility was assigned to gulaal. She also moved forward but somehow got tripped due to the carpet n when she was just about to fall, kesar quickly got hold of her. Gulaal was nearly leaning on kesar whose one hand was wrapped around gulaal n with the other hand he supported the platter in a position that his hand was placed exactly below gulaal's hand that was holding the platter. Gulaal looked at kesar who was already looking at her. Their eyes met n gulaal could clearly see the concern n care in kesar's eyes. She was so much near to him that his accelerated heartbeat was easily audible to her. The heart beat clearly indicated kesar's fear that what if gulaal becomes hurt. His eyes clearly stated that no matter what happens one thing vl be for sure that kesar wont let gulaal be hurt at any cost. Her own heart was also beating very fast. This all happened so suddenly that they both understood nothing but time seemed to stop at that very second for both of them. Gulaal was also lost in the moment. They could have stood there like that, forever but they were both made aware of their surroundings with a giggling sound.

Dhara: "aham aham, jiju n gulaal ji, kya ho gaya, thora hum sab ka toh khayal karo na" n she grinned widely n mischievously.


Gulaal n kesar both broke off from the moment n gulaal quickly lowered her eyes n got separated from him. She felt a little bit embarrassed of being in such a situation n moreover in front of whole lot of people present there. She quickly moved forward towards dhani while taking care of her steps this time. Kesar also felt a bit shy now as he was aware that people there were having slight smiles on their faces but they ignored all this n kept their concentration on the wedding. But dhara n neha's mind was at work then, they quickly stood by each other n whispered something in each other's ears n winked.

The ceremony proceeded further n now gulaal has come back n she was standing beside kesar again. She had not forgotten what happened just some minutes before. There was an awkward silence between them. They seemed to look at the couple that was now taking the pheras but actually they both were feeling shy due to the other one's presence. It was not as if one wanted the other to go away but still they were feeling very different.

Pandit ji's voice came: "Vivah sampan hua, aj se ap dono pati patni hue, baita vivah ka bandhan aik bohot atoot bandhan hota hai, is ki bohot ahmiyat hoti hai aik insaan ki zindagi men. Yeh rishta aik baar juray toh asaani se tootta nahi hai, aj se ap dono ka farz hai aik dusray ka saath dene ka, har dukh men har such men, zindagi k har mor pe, kabhi aik dusray ko akela nahi chorna. Aj se ap dono aik dusray ki parchayi hen, jesay parchayi insaan ka saath nahi chorti wese hi hamesha ap dono ko aik dusray ka saath nibhana hoga, yeh rishta pyar aur vishwaas pe tika hota hai toh yeh bohot zaruri hai k ap dono ko aik dusray pe vishwaas ho aur aik dusray k liye dil men pyar ho, sada khush raho baita"

Kesar n gulaal both were also hearing what pandit ji said n they started to think about their relationship n as soon as pandit ji said the last line about love, kesar's heart drowned in a river of sadness. That very moment, his heart yearned for love, love from gulaal. As soon as these thoughts crossed his mind, he was shocked.

"Pyaar?? I want her to love me??" he kept thinking, "per kyun? Y? y my heart wants this?" he looked at gulaal who was standing by his side. "y this all is happening with me? Main kyun chahta hun aisa k gulaal mere saath rahay? Hamesha mere paas rahay... mujh se pyar karay... y?? I know k yeh nahi ho sakta, main aisa soch bhi kaisay sakta hun..."

On the other hand, gulaal's mind was also stuck at the word pyaar. She felt shivers running down her spine with the thought about this word n her relation with kesar. She looked at kesar who was lost in his own thoughts. "Kya ho raha hai mujhay, y m I feeling so drawn towards him? Car men bhi mere mun se unconsciously kesar ka naam hi nikla tha, kesar..." she felt a happy vibe going through her heart with the mention of his name. She was not able to think anything further. Dhani n her husband had taken everone's blessings n were now moving towards the stage which was specially decorated for the bride groom. Sudenly she remembered dhani's wish to meet kesar n so although feeling a bit strange, she requested kesar to go with her to meet dhani n congratulate the couple.

Gulaal: "Dhani, yeh..."

Dhani: "Kesar ji, hai na? Namaste kesar ji kesay hen ap? Meri bohot icha thi k us insaan se milun jis ne gulaal ki zindagi men phir se rang bhar diye"

Kesar tried to squeeze a smile n said: "Congratulations, bohot bohot mubarak ho ap ko" n he congratulated dhani's husband also.

Although kesar tried his best not to show anything by his face but still dhani was able to feel it. She felt it that something was not right between gulaal n kesar and this was not the right moment to ask so she thought to ask gulaal afterwards. Gulaal was now talking to one of the guests n kesar was feeling very sad so he excused himself n went towards a bit less crowded area of the function. Few moments had passed when a waiter came to him n offered some juice. Kesar was also feeling thirsty so he took the glass n slowly started drinking it, he felt its taste a bit different but still he drank it all while thinking about his time spent with gulaal.

Some time passed n dhani's brother came to gulaal.

Dhani's brother: "Gulaal, plz jaldi chalo, shayad kesar ki tabyat theek nahi hai"

Gulaal at once stood up: "Kya? Kya hua usay?" n she rushed to where kesar was sitting. He was holding his head with his both hands.

Gulaal: "Kesar... kya hua tujhe?" she sat near him.

Kesar: "Gulaal..." he tried to raise his head n look at gulaal.

Gulaal was shocked to look at him. His eyes were being so dreamy but slightly red n it was very clear as if he was drunk.

Kesar: "Mera ser ghoom... raha hai... pata nahi kya, gulaal..."

Gulaal: "Kesar... tu... tu toh peeta nahi phir yeh sab kya hai" she was feeling very angry now. She hated drinking n she knew kesar also hated it but she was not able to think as to y he got drunk today.

Kesar: "Kya ... nahi... main ne nahi pi gulaal, gulaal, I m saying... truth, I didn't " n he tried to get up but lost his balance. Gulaal quickly hold him. They couldn't stay there now, they vl have to leave as soon as possible.

"Chup ho ja kesar, mujhay kuch nahi sunna" n she requested dhani's brother to take care of him while she vl go n tell dhani n other family members about them leaving early. Gulaal returned after few minutes n kesar was in the same position, he was able to stand n walk but he was feeling very dizzy n was not able to properly maintain his balance.

Gulaal had met dhani n had excused them for leaving early n told her the situation. Dhani told her to relax n not to get angry n that they should try to reach home soon. Gulaal took kesar towards their car in the parking lot n made him sit on the front seat, next to the driver's seat. Kesar although was in a drunken state but still he became shocked.

Kesar: "Gulaal, yeh... kya"

Gulaal didn't answer him n went to sit on the driving seat.

Kesar: "Tujhe driving, ati??? Hai??" he asked being shocked.

Gulaal: "Maine kaha na kesar chup ho ja, kyun mujhay ghusa dila raha hai tu, haan ati hai driving, dhani se hi seekhi thi, ab chup ho ja"

Kesar felt very sad because gulaal was talking to him like this. He stopped speaking anything n just kept looking at her with sorrow in his eyes but there was one other feeling also which clearly showed in his eyes. The feeling of love. He kept looking at gulaal, his heart yearning for just one look at him from her. Gulaal realized him looking at her n felt a bit awkward so quickly started the car. Just then she heard voices of dhara n neha. They were quickly coming towards their car n were calling her. They reached to the car n neha n dhara looked at each other while being all ashamed.

Neha: "Gulaal, v r really sorry, woh... actually..."

Dhara: "Gulaal, kesar ji ki ghalti nahi hai" n she looked at the ground being ashamed.

Gulaal was so surprised, she looked at kesar n then looked at both of them "Kya matlab? Dekho plz sahi sahi batao kya hai yeh sab?"

Dhara: "Gulaal actually humne chota sa mazak kiya tha, jija ji se cher chaar toh hoti hai na toh bas unki drink men thori si whiskey daali thi"

Gulaal: "WHAT !!!" n she got out of the car, "tum dono ka dimagh theek hai !!!"

Neha: "Gulaal, plz ghusa mat ho, v r really sorry, humne waiter se thori si daalne ko kaha tha k bas taste awkward lagay gat oh hum cheren ge jiju ko lekin us idiot ne shayad poori bottle hi daal di lagta hai, sorry gulaal plz sorry"

Gulaal: "Shut up ! tum dono ko andaza bhi hai what u guys have done ! usne zindagi men kabhi alcohol ko hath bhi nahi lagaya n aikdam is tarah, us ki halat dekhi hai tum logo ne !! n maine bhi uski aik bhi baat nahi suni" tears started to gather in her eyes n one drop fell from her eye without her even realizing this.

Dhara: "Gulaal, plz v r sorry, daikh tu ro mat, hum kesar ji se bhi sorry kar lenge, plz"

Gulaal: "Hargiz nahi !!! no need to do anything now, pehle hi tum dono ne yeh sab bakhera khara kar diya hai, now pla main khud sambhaal lungi, jao tum log"

Neha: "Ok gulaal per daikh tu naraz mat hona, hum phir se sorry bolte hen"

Gulaal: "Theek hai, ab jo hogaya so hogaya, khair choro sab, ab hamen jana hoga, ok then, bye"

Dhara n neha: "Bye gulaal"

Dhara: "N sorry again" n they both left while gulaal became very embarrassed that she didn't even listen to what kesar was saying. She quietly sat inside the car n looked at him who was sitting quietly n was looking at his palms. When she sat inside he raised his head n looked at her. Gulaal's heart missed a beat n she focused herself on driving the car. She started the car again n drove towards their home. Some time passed n they both sat quietly, kesar still feeling very dizzy suddenly started to laugh. Gulaal became very surprised as to what happened to him suddenly.

Gulaal: "Kesar..." but he kept on laughing, "Kesar !! kya hogaya tujhe !!"

Kesar: "Kya hua? Pata nahi? Hahaha per pata hai tu ghusay men bohot ajeeb lagti hai"

Gulaal: "What !!" she exclaimed being really very surprised.

Kesar: "Haan, han han han han, hahaha"

Gulaal understood that he was saying all this as he was not in his senses. She quietly focused herself on driving the car.

Kesar looked at her n felt that she didn't like his comment so he again exclaimed: "Ajeeb lagti hai haha kyun k ghusa hoti hai na, per..."

Now gulaal knew kesar wanted to talk n he was looking so sweet talking this way. Gulaal was amused n she smiled slightly n asked: "Per...?"

The look in kesar's eyes changed n his longing was very clear now, "Per... achi lagti hai... bohot ... achi lagti hai gulaal"

Gulaal's smiled disappeared n her heart beat accelerated n her grip on the car loosened. The car swayed a little but she quickly controlled herself. She was unable to reply kesar n increased the car speed in order to reach home quickly, just then she looked at the rear view mirror n saw a car behind. She thought : "Yeh car toh function k bahar jab hum thay jab bhi dekhi thi maine, shayad yeh bhi wahan ayen hon, main inhe raasta de deti hoon" n she moved her car to a side but the car which followed still kept behind at the same distance. Gulaal felt that something was fishy, she put her foot on the accelerator n drove more fast so to get rid of them but the person in the car also increased the speed n then their car was hit from behind. Gulaal was shocked n nearly lost control of the car but fortunately got it back n the very same instance she put her hand on the dashboard as kesar's head hit it but as her hand was there, he was not hurt at all, now she knew the car was following them n the intentions of the people inside it was absolutely not good. She looked at kesar who was trying to understand what has happened. They were near their home so she managed to put their car on another way towards their home n became satisfied when she saw that the car was not seen anywhr now which was following them. She thought that she had successfully dodged them. They had reached their home now so she parked the car n went to help kesar get out of the car. She wanted to enter the house as soon as possible. It was 11 pm n she knew that all the people in the house must have slept till now.

Gulaal: "Kesar, kesar jaldi chal, ghar k ander chale jayen jitna jaldi utna acha hai"

Kesar freed his hand from her grip n again sat in the car while smiling "Nahiii, nahi nahi, mujhay nahi jaana, dekho na kitni achi hawa chal rahi hai"

Gulaal again tried to take him inside the house, she somehow managed to drag him out of the car n locked it. She moved forward taking him with her n he kept on blabbering that he want to stay there, n just then two people suddenly came in front of them. It was very clear from their appearance n faces that they were some kind of goons. Gulaal became very scared n grabbed kesar's hand with both her hands n stepped back towards him. He had also understood the seriousness of the situation now.

Goon 1: "Bohot taiz gari chalati hai haan"

Goon 2: "Samjhi thi, hamen bewakoof bana diya, hahaha, aisi kachi goliyan nahi kheli hain hum ne"

Goon 1: "Kya samjhi thi k bach jaoge dono hum se, hahaha itna asaan nahi hai" n he stepped forward n took out a knife from his pocket.

Gulaal n kesar both stepped back but gulaal as in being in a defensive mode, was being in front of him, in order to protect him.

Goon 1: "Na na bachon, peechay janay se kuch nahi hoga"

Goon 3 from behind them: "Kya yaar, zara idhar bhi toh dekho naa" n grinned evilly.

Gulaal n kesar turned n became shocked to see the thirs person also there. The three people came close to them n now two of them were having knives in their hands. They started to come more close n one of them raised his hand with knife just then another goon interrupted him "Aray yaar, larki ko toh chor de, isay baad men dekhenge abhi is larkay ko thikanay lagatay hen"

Goon 3 : "Per boss hamen nahi choray ga"

Goon 2: "Boss ko abhi nahi batayen ge na kuch" n he extended his hand towards gulaal but just when his hand was about to touch her, kesar grabbed his hand fiercely n came in front of gulaal. His eyes were now being blood red due to his fierce anger. He hold his hand so tightly that the goon started to yell very badly "Ae haath chor mera saalay, daikh kya rahay ho tum sab hatao is ko mera haath tor dega yeh"

N the other two goons rushed forward n hold kesar n the three were now trying to get the goon's hand free from kesar's grip but he was not ready to let it go. With his other hand kesar hit the other goon but as he was drunk so couldn't maintain his balance n fell n the goons got a chance to take over. They hold him n hit him on his chest n face, n then on his legs. Gulaal was so frightened that her voice had stuck in her throat only. But when they started hitting kesar, she managed to run towards them n slapped one goon who in return became very angry n slapped her, she fell down n this provoked kesar's anger to the heights. He got up n somehow managed to hit the others n then went towards the person who had hit gulaal n he started hitting him very badly, the other two tried to stop him but suddenly one goon was hit very hard on the head with a stone. He hold his head n became disbalanced n finally fell down. This all happened in a friction of a second that none of them understood what happened. Gulaal had hit the goon with a big stone n now he was lying on the road n was yelling for help. The stone fell down from gulaal's hands n she was shocked, kesar was also shocked n the other two goons quickly stepped back n dragged the third goon with them n the three of them ran away very quickly. Just as they left, kesar called gulaal being all shocked.

Kesar: "Gulaal? Yeh kya kiya?"

Gulaal just looked at him n the next moment she ran to him n wrapped her hands around him n hugged him tightly n cried very bitterly

G: "Kesarrr... agar tujhe kuch ho jaata toh"


Kesar was shocked but slowly he felt happy. The care n concern that he wanted to see from gulaal's side can be seen now. His hand which were by his sides slowly were raised n encircled gulaal's waist.

Kesar: "Gulaal... main theek hoon"

Gulaal was like she had not heard him say all this, she was in a frenzy now. She tightened her grip some more n hugged him more tightly n kept saying:

"Main kitna dar gayi thi, un k paas knife theen, agar tujhe kuch ho jata toh main kya karti kesar, kesar"

Kesar's emotions had now taken him over completely, his desire his longing his yearning took over n he completely forgot every other thing except gulaal.


She was so much near to him that he could feel her breath on his neck. Her hands encircled him n her touch made him mad with desire. His hands slowly started to travel up on her back. Slowly n gradually his right hand travelled slightly up from her waist n his left hand followed his right hand. N with the movement of his hands, gulaal stopped speaking anything n slightly gasped. Both of them were lost in their moment n were just feeling it. Kesar's hands now encircled her n closely hold her very close to him n he rested his chin on gulaal's shoulder n hid his face inside her hairs.

Kesar: "Gulaal..."

The intensity of his emotions was so much that gulaal suddenly broke away from the moment n suddenly stepped back. Her heartbeat was accelerating every moment n she was afraid to look at kesar now. His eyes were burning with desire n raw emotions. She took a few steps back ward n said:

"Hamen, woh, ghar men jana hai, bohot raat ho gayi hai" n waited for kesar to move further while breathing slightly heavily, while kesar didn't moved his eyes away from her. She supported him while walking n they quietly entered the house. She locked the main door n moved forward while kesar's eyes followed her. She realized that everybody in the house was asleep n so she took kesar to their room n stepped inside n made him sit on the bed.

G: "Main woh pani le ke aati hoon" n moved towards the door.

Kesar got up n reached the door before her n stood between the door n her. She got so much confused as to what to say n how to react so she suddenly turned her back towards him but kesar was very fast in holding her hand. He hold her hand n quickly pulled her towards him n encircled his arms around her n rested his chin on her shoulder n slightly tilted it towards her face. She was able to feel his breath on her neck n a shiver ran down through her spine.

G: "Kesar..." but he interrupted in between.

K: "Shhh... gulaal... gulaal... gulaal, bas gulaal"

N he put her hair aside n started to place light kisses on her neck that trailed towards her shoulder. Gulaal was also so lost in the moment n uptill now she was holding her breath but the moment kesar's lips brushed against her skin, her breathing accelerated n she was only feeling the warmth of his body beside her, while kesar's hands slipped on her hands n reached her palms n his fingers now clutched her fingers. Gulaal tried to move away but kesar hold her again n moved her closer n this time she was facing him. Gulaal's hands were placed on his shoulders n kesar hold her waist with his left hand n with his right hand he put aside the strands of hair which encircled gulaal's pretty face which was now burning with the increased circulation of blood in her body n the flow of emotions. Gulaal raised her eyes n looked at kesar who was looking at her with intense emotions. Slowly his hand traced the curves of her face, her forehead, her cheek, her nose, her chin, her lips n began to move his face closer to her. Their face was so close now that they were both able to feel their breath on each other's face. Gulaal closed her eyes n kesar put his lips on her, feeling the intensity of the moment n sealed the gap between them. His emotions, desire, his want, his need, his concern, his love all were very clear from his passionate kiss. He was really not ready to end this so soon n now was gulaal's turn to get carried away with the moment. She slowly encircled kesar's neck with her arms n moved closer to him while kesar's hands encircled her waist more tightly now. His passion was growing more fierce n intense with every passing second but gulaal was not able to take it anymore n she broke off from the moment n broke off from the kiss. Kesar was still not ready to let go, he started to kiss her face, n then slowly moved towards her neck when suddenly realization hit gulaal n she pushed him aside n moved away. Kesar was so surprised with all this n he felt so rejected. Tears started forming in his eyes. He again moved towards her n hold her hand with love but gulaal was afraid to look at him now. She freed her hand from his grip n didn't look at him.

K: "Gulaal, main..."

G: "Kesar, plz, so ja, raat bohot ho gayi hai, plz" she said this while not even looking at him while tears were there in her eyes also. She was surprised as to how did she got carried away like this. She had decided to not to let anyone touch her like this n now she was not able to stop him. Her mind was flushed with different thoughts n dhani's words echoed in her mind:

"Kesar ji tujh se pyaar karte hen gulaal, maine daikha hai, un ki ankhon men tere liye sacha pyar hai"


Note:

Hi guys 😃, sorry for updating so so late, plz don't hit me as u guys know i was not well but now me back Allah ka shukar 😃, n have brought a super long chapi 😳 hope u guys like it 😕 n now me running from mojris n chapals 😲


Edited by kiran_trudecent - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res..me first😳

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Kiran🤗...pehle yeh jhappi le for the long chapter that u gave us after these many days...

Gulaal is confused for her own feelings that she is realizing for kesar...
Looks like dhani family is very close to gulaal...kesar missing gulaal😳
Bechaara kesar...pehli baar shaadi ke baad gulaal ke saath bhaahar aaya hai na...aur aathe hi Neha n Dhara teased him taking gulaal's name...I liked this jiju rap...
Is there any mystery/reason that kesar felt that he saw Dhani before😕...or its just a coincidence...
the trip n catch waala scene toh mast hai...how awkward it would have been for both of them when it happens in front of all the people...
Loved the lecture that pandit ji gave...afterall its his lecture abt pyaar that made kesar realize n question abt his feelings for her to himself...gulaal also thinking abt kesar😳
Dhani very smart hai yaar...hope she gives one good advice to gulaal abt kesar...
Kesar drunk...bechaara he dont know anything na...but gulaal is not listening his words...
Atlast she came to know that its not his fault...warna ghar jhaathe hi kithna sunna padtha kesar koh...
achchi lagthi hai😳...ha ha peeke jo chaahe keh sakthe hai na kesar😉
OMG...the goons r following them to kill them...arey yaar abhi kesar koh peena tha kya...ab kaise fight karega...dekha gulaal has to do some thing to save him...
ab jaldi se batha ki kya yeh goons are waiting for some occasion when they will get both kesar n gulaal together to kill...or dhani marriage is the platform to bring both of them out of the house so that they can attack them...mein kuch zyaada detective banrahi hoon aisa mujhe lagtha hai ab😆...
hayeee...me loved all the scenes after this😳..hugwa hogaya..woh bhi gullu ne diya...ab kesar kaise khud koh rokhtha😉...n more over he is drunk na...i am just picturising all this emotions for her now😍..kissy bhi hua😳...me all dreaming now😍
but last mein kya kiya yaar...he felt rejected na😭...looks like now galool entry ho jaayegi...or will she brush all this as he is in drunk state...or we will see any confrontation scene between them...
the last bit made me shocked..dhani gave her gyaan even in her busy shedule😲...time management kuch zaroorath se zyaada karthi hai yeh dhaani...ab gulaal kya keragi...n what abt the goons...

Ab jaldi se next chapter la...ab intzaar nahi hotha...
mein kuch bhool gayee kya...ohh I had to say that I loved this chapter soo much😳

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
reswa😊

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Kiran…mast chappi tha yaar…shuru maine Gullu ko hosh nahi tha aura nth main Kesu ko….I mean kohye the na dono apne hi world main….

Tune fall and hold use kiya aur woh bhi itni public main and then that eye lock sigh!😳 Very romantic yaar aur log kya bol sakte hai..aakhir husband nd wife hai na…

Gullu ki friends to badi mazakiya hai😉….muje laga pata nahi achanak Kesu main itni himmat kaha se aa gayi ke lioness ke sath hote hue usne aisi jurrat ki😕…per baad main pata chala ki baat kuch aur hai😃…Gullu madam ka gussa bhi jayaj hai na…pehli baar sath main bahar nikle or patidev talli(no referece to terrorist) hog aye…I liked how he is sitting in car quietly observing his palms when Gullu is giving gyaan to her friends👏…and then comes best one line…"acchi lagti ho bahut acchi"…Yay! Kesu hamesha pine ke baad bahut sulji hui baat karta hai…😆

Ab yeh gooda1,2,3 ki mystry kya hai…aur Gullu to ekdum zashi ki rani ban gayi na Kesu ko koi hath laga ke to dekhe…really she will protect him at any cost and so will he…sigh! 😳

Last part was really very steamy☺️ dono bekabu ho gaye the…per to kya hua yaar married couple hai haq banta hai unka…per Gullu ko badi jaldi yaad a gaya ki who kya kar rahi hai..I can't wait to read what happens next…😍

Now to you are ok na…so can we expect next update soon? Please… aur ye badi si hug🤗 for such a lovely chappi….


Edited by enchanted23 - 13 years ago
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Mujhe mili ek romantic scene... Woh bi intoxicating type.. Nacho [:D/] It was steamy men.. Felt like watching it.. Writing is too good.. TOO GOOD!! 👍🏼
Seems like Vasant's killers are behind Kesar too.. Hmm.. Interesting 😊
Give us more romance..😍 We nvr get tired.. Update jaldi.. ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
unres done...page ke upar dekh...
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Posted: 13 years ago
res😭main late ho gayi😭

awww😳Kiran mojris kis liye itne ache chapter ke liye tho jhappi milni chahiye tujhe. ye le meri taraf se ek badi si jhappi🤗

kya mast chapter hai.full on masala sab kuch tha emotion,drama,action,romance aur thoda sa chiii bhi😆loved it so much.I loved the Gulaal-Kesar interaction in the car and the mandap.Kesar realizing that he wanted love from Gulaal-such a beautiful moment😳Gulaal is also feeling the pull after all how can you resist the saffron boy😃
loved the light teasing by the girls and enjoyed seeing the usually cool as a cucumber Kesar break into a sweat.
though I don't agree with the mixing the drinks bit-such a dangerous prank,very immature of the girls but kehte haina ki anth bhala tho sab bhala so in the interest of the greater good of seeing some GK romance I am willing to forgive those girls😆
drunk Kesar is so entertaining show mein bhi aur yahan par bhi kitna cute hai😳
and yeh Goon 1,2,3 kya soch rahe the Gullu ko aise hi haraa denge arre woh tho pichle janam mein race car driver thi. shaayad gundon ko maaloom nahi hai😆
loved the protective Gulaal so much and the hug.I was blushing from that point on till the end.I loved the whole scene yaar.very very romantic.I am so looking forward to the next chapter.ab tho aage pyaar hi pyaar hai😳haina Kiran😊
please do update soon.
Edited by minizz - 13 years ago
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no mojris ji only hugs 🤗super duper bumper lovely chappi ji😃kes-gul mein kuch kuch hua😆kaam ayi hamari dua😉 i loved the chappi, pls next chappi lane mein late na karna 😃luv u 🤗

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