ASHWIN'S TRUTH REVEALED- PG 41 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

AMAAAZINGGG LY WRITTEN

BEAUTIFULL
LVED IT
THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...I loved all of them and am now waiting for the new update...looks like romance is in the air in that corner...pls do continue and make it passionate and exciting
thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Now our sweet couple are in the corner...of the room...with creamy hands...trying to catch up each others breath, with priya locked by Ram...with his eyes...mesmerizing with innocence and essence of the initial sweetness when his lady is in front of him...heart beats audible... breath movement visible...the quench of becoming one...floating on the tip of lips...with added cheese of shy..and heaviness of eyes lowering but still not listening to the shy...their eyes could dominate the shy and pierce into one another eyes searching for the image of the self...

All that happening in the room is just match and catch and suddenly ram s hands raises ...to reach priyas cheeks and he gently applies cream...and priya...tries to escape from his hands grip and ram catches her tight and their skin meet...which leaves them dwelling for few minutes enjoying the euphoria of the romantic touch that would make them feel the eternal silence...in sweetness...as priya had decorated flowers in her plat... and coz of which ram started sneezing ...continuously searching for pills ... priya searches in the drawers and as she fails to find them...she thinks of her nani's house remedy for that problem and she thinks to do so...

Priya comes to ram..and catches his ears...and pulls ...for which ram starts offf...arey priya tu tu e kya kar rahi hai...you know what ...till date no one had pulled my ears like this... and you ...how dare you to do so...no one right from my young age dared to touch me...this way...and you..you...just you became my wife and you started off this way/????? Priya hesitantly looks into ram s eyes and says ruk gaye...Ram says kya
Priya says that you stopped sneezing...and ram realizes and comes to his senses and says are ha...ruk gaye...lekin pills ke bina kaise...hua...
Priya answers" Ram, har cheez ke liye...pills ki zaroorat nahi hai...we can handle it ... by having too many pills body looses its immunity power...so dont do like that ...dont harm urself by taking too many pills...

Ram looks at her ...notices the caring in her for him...and he thinks to himself...' if you could have come in my life atleast 10 years back ... i would have been a diabetic patient with so many other complaints in my body...and also there wouldnt be anyone who would take advantage of my kindness...even i would have had...a cute family...just like vikram😊'

Priya disturbs him...and asks hello hello hello ram... aap kaha kho gaye ho? Ram smiles and asks priya to go and get fresh...as its full of cream... and priya leaves ...
Ram puts that cake aside and turns his head...to the balcony...and starts whispering to moon saying ' thanks" and here our priya in ... dazzling scarlet red ...colored night suit she comes and stands facing ram...ram... abhi tak aap soye nahi...
I thought you would have hit bed by the time i come out...ram looks at priya and takes back his breath ...looking at her...clearing her long black hair crossing her face...he hums...tum agar saath deneka...waaada karo...mein yuhi mast nag mein ..luta ta rahun..." and priya shocks to c him singing so well...and she utters "Ram aaap aur gaaana"...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Awww loved it! Very cute! Nice update! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
😊wow...I loved all of them and am now waiting for the new update.☺️👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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our cute couple...ram and priya..though they feel that they dont know anything about each other... met like anonymous stragers...and now in a life long relation...they look at each other... while ram hums that lovely song...and priya...surprised...she asks ram..." Ram aap gana...i mean,...i thought you know only to conserve your things very posessively and carry your buch of pills and get along with your business.. but how come this change all of a sudden...

Ram thinks in his mind " I myself dont know this change...when ever i look deep into your beautiful mesmerizing eyes... that naughty and friednly ram comes out...whom i crushed with in self ..the day my father passed and the day i took up the responsibility of this famiy..." and says that i love music...i use to perform for karaoke competitions in colledge..my mom loves music...so i do...but this mom she doesnt like , she always use to restrict me from my passion..so i stoppped it completely but when ever i am happy ..i hum like this"
Priya gets taken away by ram saying...i restricted myselsf for this family...she says right to live is for everyone on this earth ram...woh kuch approvals and rejections se thodi hi hoti hai...
Ram continues...i know ...i know...and then they hit bed and they turn to face one another and ram remebers the chart containing collection of priyas pics which herfather gave... and while her father was showing that chart to ram and vikram...rams bulls eye captures a pic of priya ...in which she looks like an angel...and he says...priya shall i tell u some thing? priya: " yes please"
Ram says" wooh photo mein tu bohoth acchi lag rahi hai" priya doesnt understanding what he is referring to...and asks...kya/... aur kis photo ki bare mein aaap bol rahe hai ram...?
Ram: woh teri child hood pics...jo tumhare pitaji ne mujhe diya hai...are ha...actually i forgot to share that with you... your father gave me a collection of ur pics as a gift to you...so... i wanted to show u that...some how it missed out of my mind...
Priya suddenly gets up from the bed and she looks at ram...and she says...doees that contain my child hood pics? ram says yes...and your crawling days pics are also added in that...
you had running nose in ur childhood kya? 😉 and ram starts laughing loud and priya suddenly gives a hot punch to ram... and says...ram... you are such a naughty nugget...you even saw those pics...y yyy did u see them...who asked u to see themm...i didnt have any running nose...😊😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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friends... as i have high deliverables... i couldnt update much... but will soon give u all a lovely update.
cheers,
sree
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Cute...nice to see them getting along like friends! Hope to see a nice lamba update soon! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful & touching updates. Could u please Pm me when you update next.
Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Our priya...starts off with a lovely fight with ram... mein aur running nose???? 😡 aap ko hi hogi waise adat...mujhe nahi...ram nods his head cutely ...ha hahahaha...i know how nicely u bully with other you are good at it...remember the first day...you made me climb all those steps of your appartment and finally you started of fighting with me like jhansi ki rani...remember...? You have a very big mouth...😉😃

priya...looks at him as if she is going to eat him...just the way he had cake infront of her...😃 in hotel...and she says...ha haha who has got big mouth world knows...how you ate that cake in hotel and what all you have ordered for the breakfast...very funny and u comment on me that i have a big mouth...Ram" hey tu tutu... ab woh baaat kyu lari hai beech mein...mein jagadne ki baat karrahu yaha aur tu...mujhe ek baaat samajmey nahi aati...tu hamesha ...aise his guma phira ke baatkarthi hai kya...bohoth ajeeb ho tum...priya answers ..." unlike other couples we are completely cotroversial to each other...so...atleast ek baat tho similar honi chahiye na...to...ajeeb hi sahi and she throws a very naughty cutie smile to ram..." He nods his head with a higher level of understanding and says...ok ...ok...ok...Priya...tu...jo dikti hai.na...woh tu hai hi nahi...pata hai...dikne me to itni maaasuuum lagti hai...lakin asal mein tu bohol naughty hai...
pirya" 😛 aap bhi bilkul...jo dikte hai na woh hai hi nahi...
Ram: " tu tu har baat par...mujhe kyyu compare kar rahi hai.."
Priya: " acha itni defensive ho ka aap"
Ram : Khair chodde meri maaa...pls...now pls go off to sleep " turns his head and takes a deep breath "😊
Priya smiles to her self feeling very happy bullying with ram... and she turns to the other side and lies down...and she speaks to self " I thought him to be wrong...but i was wrong... he is a very gentleman but...ya...mixture of kindness and crackness tooo😉"
Ram also lies on the bed and he thinks of priya...very funny naughty and obedient girl... still wondering...where this relation will take us in our lives..but..for now...very cute and njoying...
thanks to god that he made priya to agree fo this marriage else i would never dream of a girl like her ...in mine.
Screen blacks out...and the lovely weather...rising sun..wiht twitting bids running here and there...with droplets of drizzling rain...on leaves...and the fresh message of morning weather...passing through the world waking up every one with its breeze...and cukkooo's voice with melody calls everyone...and here is priya she woke up and refreshed herself...took a refreshing bath...and comes out with her wet long thick hair...cleanising it with towel...and drops of water from hair...falls on rams eyes ...and suddenly he opens his eyes...and looks priya...and wishes her a very good morning...and she asks ram to get up ...and says that ...she will get coffee and breakfast...and she moves on ..but again she stops and asks ram..." ram aap ko kya chahiye breakfast mein...but again refrains and says that oh no ...i should nt have asked u about this ..nahi to... aap mujhe aapka menu sunadenge na...oh no..." Ram stares at her " arey priya kya hua...waisa kyun bol rahi hai...I am not over eater u c..." Priya says " ya ya ya ya i have seen it in hotel...you eat very less. anyways today you have to eat break fast of my choice Okie????"
Ram" 😭 ghas pooos" okie cant help... Priya throws a smile and moves on to kitchen...and there she prepares sandwitch and coffee and she serves ram... they both sit in the sofa facing each other ...and ram asks " had good sleep yesterday????"
Priya: looking at her phone... she says...raat to neend nahi ayi..."
Ram: Kyun...
Priya: aap ne kharrate nahi li na kal rat...aur ab mujhe aapki kharrate ki adat jo hui hai... to...
Ram" Mein aur kharrate... no way...
Priya on;s her mobile and plays the clip...and ram" kya saboot hai ki woh meira hi hai... she shows the video"
Ram " curls up his lips and smiles and says...woh woh... and with smiles ahe asks her to delete that file nad she takes her mobile off from him...and teases him...😊😊
nd now he gets a call...about the company...he wanted to gift it to ...nutz...

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