My CID Stories (new story at pg 8) - Page 2

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Edited by shreela - 12 years ago

sorry, double-posted.

Edited by Padmini04 - 12 years ago

First of all, thanks a lot Neeme. I really did not expect such complement. Thank you.😃 and yes, you r right. I am a new writer, this is my first try, but I am not a new member in this forum. I am here since last two years, and all of you know me in another name.😛

Originally posted by: Padmini04

First of all, thanks a lot Neeme. I really did not expect such complement. Thank you.😃 and yes, you r right. I am a new writer, this is my first try, but I am not a new member in this forum. I am here since last two years, and all of you know me in another name.😛

Ur Story deserves Alot of Appreciation...

Originally posted by: neeme

Ur Story deserves Alot of Appreciation...

And Whats ur other name???😕..And why this new Id then, if u r already here with another id?

actually this idea came on my mind because of Vis di. she also posted her first story with a new id, cadburry123 or something like that.

Nice to see you attempted, I'll surely read and comment.

The story is really very good. It deals wid social evil we are facing these days and it seems u have done a lot of research to create the plot. Not even once it was bored or lost focus. I was a bit worried seeing the story in 4 posts but all in all its a great effort and doesnt seem like a first timer at all!! 👏

Very Nice story P4.(hope u dnt mind me calling u dat)..
Far better from wat we see nwdays..
it was long..may b due to descriptions..
hope to see more frm u..
PM,me whenever u write story..
Keep writing..
and ya..Welcum to forum..

nice story wid gud detection👏
gud keep it up😊

Thanks a lot Shivani and Paro..16 for liking my story.😊 Edited by Padmini04 - 12 years ago