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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Is she still upset with u???
N by the way GREAT JOB.👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks.😊 and yeah, I talked to GD, and now everything is fine between us.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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at last I had found a suitable name for my story!😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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6th Scene:-

 CID bureau. Abhijeet entered in ACP's cabin.

Abhijeet- sir, us lawyer, Suresh se milke aa raha hoon abhi! Mujhe toh shaq hai sir, ki use kisi institute se law ki degree mili bhi hogi ya nehi!

ACP- achha! aisa kyun?

Abhijeet-law ki koi basic knowledge tak nehi hai sir use! Baatein toh bohot badi badi karta hai, lekin koi kaam ka nehi! Usine misguide kiya tha Menka ko.

ACP- matlab jaaan-bujhke misguide kiya tha, ya phir…

Abhijeet- nehi sir, aisa lagta toh nehi. Bas aise hi kah diya, ki 1-2  hearing mein hi divorce order karwa dega.

ACP- lekin Abhijeet, Menka ne aise lawyer ko appoint kyun kiya? Uske paas paiso ki kami toh hai nehi! Asaani se kisi bade vakil ko bula sakti thi!

Abhijeet- woh main ne pata kiya sir! Is Suresh ko Menka ne nehi, balki Kishor ne appoint kiya tha. Mutual divorce hai, Menka bhi shayed isiliye maan gayi thi!

ACP- hm.Ho sakta hai Abhijeet, ki is Kishor ka asli maqsad tha kisi bhi tarah is divorce ko rokhna! Isiliye aise lawyer ko appoint kiya tha usne!

Abhijeet- ho sakta hai sir. Shayed yeh baat Menka aur Rakesh ko pata chal gayi, aur gusse mein dono ne milke uska khoon kaar diya! Lekin sir, jis tarah se yeh khoon huya, lagta toh nehi ki yeh achanak ya gusse mein kiya kisine! Aur agar Menka ko sirf dusri shadi karne ke liye Kishor ka khoon kaarna hota, toh woh pahle hi kaar sakti thi! Divorce ka petition kyun kiya? Aur ek baat sir, agar Menka ko mutual divorce nehi bhi milta, woh toh asaani se Kishor ke khilaf case kaar sakti thi! Toh phir…

ACP- yeh baat humein Menka ne bataya, ki woh case kaar sakti thi! Kya guarantee hai ki woh sach bol rahi hai? aur case agar karti bhi, toh kya pata, kab faisla hota case ka? Ek ek case 10-12 saal tak chalta rahta hai! itni derr toh woh intezaar nehi kaar sakti thi na!

Abhijeet- haan sir. Matlab pahle humein yeh pata karna hai ki Menka sach bol rahi hai, ya nehi!

ACP- hm. Aur us divorce petition ka ek copy lekar kisi achhe lawyer ke paas jao, aur pata karo ki unko abhi divorce milta ya nehi!

Daya and Vivek entered with another guy.

ACP- aa gaye tumlog! aur yeh kaun hai?

Daya- sir, yeh aadmi us hotel mein waiter hai, jahan Kishor thahra tha. Isine harroz kishor ko serve karta tha!

ACP- achha! matlab tumhi ne milaya tha neend ki goliyan uske khane mein, kyun?

Guy- nehi saab, main ne aisa kuch nehi kiya!

Abhijeet- dekho, tumhare liye yehi achha hai, ki sab sach sach batao! Warna…

Guy- saab, main toh use janta tak nehi tha! Main kyun khoon karunga uska?

Daya- yeh toh hum bhi janna chahte hai! kya dushmani thi tumhari uske sath?

Guy- meri kya dushmani ho sakti hai saab? Main ne kaha na, main use thik se janta bhi nehi tha!

Abhijeet- ho sakta hai, kisine tumhe paise diye ho khoon karne ke liye?

Guy- saab, hum garib zarur hai, lekin iska matlab yeh nehi ki paiso ke lalach mein kisika khoon kaar de! Aur waise bhi, agar mujhe khoon karna hota, toh main uske khane mein zahar kyun milata? Itna samajh toh mujhe bhi hai ki agar khane mein zahar mila toh police sabse pahle mujhpe hi shaq karegi!

Abhijeet- thik hai thik hai! zyada bhashan dene ki zarurat nehi hai, samjhe! Ek baat batao, agar tumne use nehi maara toh aur kaun maar sakta hai use?

Guy- mujhe nehi pata saab! Hoga uska koi dushman! Par saab, jis raat uska khoon huya, us raat usne humare hotel mein khana khaya hi nehi! Shayed bahar se khake aaya tha. Uske sath ek aur aadmi bhi tha us raat. Dono kamre mein baithke sharab pee rahe the derr raat tak. Phir pata nehi kab dono bahar chale gaye, aur lautke aaya hi nehi!

Abhijeet- ek minute! Tumne abhi abhi kya bataya, dono sharab pee rahe the? Yeh sharab kaun laake diya unko?

Guy- saab, sharab ki bottle woh khud lekar aaye the, bahar se. mujhe toh lagta hai usine khoon kiya hoga!

Vivek- yeh sach bol raha hai sir. Yeh baat hum hotel ke aur logon se bhi pata kiya.

ACP- ho kaun sakta hai yeh aadmi? Dikhne mein kaisa tha woh?

Guy- chehra thik se dekha nehi saab, par height Kishor saab ke jitna hi tha. yehi koi 5'8! Patla sa tha, rang gora tha. aur ek baat saab, ya toh uski tabiyat kharab thi, ya phir usne pahle se hi bohot pee rakhi thi! Thik se chal bhi nehi paa raha tha!

ACP- thik hai, tum abhi ja sakta ho. Lekin shahar chodke jane ki koshish mat karna!

Guy- jee saab.

ACP- aur kya naam bataya tumne apna?

Guy- saab, mera naam Sundar!

ACP- thik hai. jao.

 The guy left.

ACP- kaun ho sakta hai yeh aadmi, jiske sath Kishor ko aakhri baar dekha gaya tha?

Abhijeet- sir, kahin Rakesh toh nehi? Matlab, uska height bhi 5'8 ke karib hai, rang gora hai…

Vivek- sir, Rakesh aur Menka toh us waqt Kolhapur mein the!

Abhijeet- Vivek, yeh baat abhitak sabit nehi huyi! Unke paas na toh hotel ka bill hai, na hi koi witness jisne unhe Kolhapur mein dekha ho!

ACP- Abhijeet, agar wohlog waqei Kolhapur mein the, toh kisine toh dekha hoga unhe! Ek kaam karo Vivek, tum aur Fredricks Kolhapur jao, aur pata karo, ki kisine unhe wahan dekha ya nehi! Agar dekha, toh kaab dekha!

Vivek- yes sir.

He left.

ACP- Daya, Abhijeet! Is Kishor ki kundli nikalo. Koi na koi dushman toh tha uska!

Duo- jee sir.

 

7th Scene:-

CID jeep stopped in front of a small house. Duo came out from the jeep.

Abhijeet- yehi address tha na?

Daya- haan, yehi hai, Kishor ka ghar. Menka bata rahi thi ki yahan Kishor ke pita aur uski choti bahan rahte hai.

Abhijeet- ek baat samajh mein nehi aa rahi hai Daya, aapna ghar hote huye bhi Kishor hotel mein kyun rahta tha?

Daya- yeh baat toh inlogon se hi poochna padega! Chalo.

They knocked the door, after sometime an aged man opened it.

Man- kaun chahiye aaplogonko?

Abhijeet- Kishor ka ghar… yehi hai na?

Man- jee haan, main uska pita hoon, Jayant Trivedi. Lekin mera beta toh yahan hai nehi!

Abhijeet- humein pata hai. hum aapse kuch baat karna chahte hain.

Jayant- par aaplog hai kaun?

Daya- humlog CID se hai.

Jayant- CID! Aayiye, andar aayiye.

They entered in the house.

Jayant- batayiye, kya baat hai?

Abhijeet- dekhiye, humein aapke bete Kishor ke bare mein kuch poochna hai.

Jayant- ab kya poochna uske bare mein! Woh toh ab is duniya mein hi nehi raha!

 And he broke in tears. Duo tried to console him.

Abhijeet- dekhiye, hum aapka dukh samajh sakte hai! agar aap chahte hai ki aapke bete ka khooni jald pakda jay, toh please, humare sath co-operate kijiye!

Jayamt- batayiye, kya janna chahte hai aap?

Daya- aakhri baar aap kab mile the aapne bete se?

Jayant- 6-7 mahine pahle sir. Kishor mere paas aaya tha. use kuch paiso ki zarurat thi, isliye. Lekin main ne, dene se inkar kaar diya. Uske baad woh kabhi nehi aaya. Dekhne ko mila, toh uski laash!

Daya- aapko pata hai, aapki bahu Menka aur Kishor ka divorce case chal raha tha?

Jayant- jee nehi. Mujhe nehi pata tha. aur haan, Menka ko main ne kabhi aapni bahu nehi mana!

Daya- woh kyun?

Jayant- uski wajese mera beta mujhe chodke chala gaya! Humse baat tak karne nehi deti thi use! Paiso ka lalach deke shadi kee thi! Woh chahti thi ki mera beta uska gulam banke rahe! Jab aisa nehi huya, maar diya mere Kishor ko!

Abhijeet- matlab, aap kahena chahte hai ki Menka ne hi Kishor ka khoon kiya?

Jayant- aur kaun maar sakta hai use? Zarur us Menka ne hi aapna boyfriend Rakesh ke sath milke kiya hai yeh sab!

Abhijeet- aap Rakesh ke bare mein kaise jante?

Jayant- puri duniya janti hai sir.  Shadi se pahle aur shadi ke baad bhi uska rista tha us Rakesh ke sath.

Daya- toh phir usne Kishor se shadi kyun kee?

Jayant- yeh baat aap usise pooch lijiye. Main kaise bata sakta hoon!

Abhijeet- yeh baat aap police ko kyun nehi bataya?

Jayant- us waqt toh police ne humein bataya ki Kishor ne suicide kiya. Mujhe laga tha ki Menka ki wajese hi woh suicide karne pe majboor ho gaya. Phir bhi main ne socha, ki aapne ghar ki baatein bahar kyun failaya jay! Mera beta wapas toh nehi aa jayga. Lekin agar usne mere Kishor ka khoon kiya hai, toh aaplog use chodna mat! Use saza zarur dilwana!

Daya- uski chinta aap mat kijiye! Gunhegar chahe koi bhi ho, CID use kabhi nehi chodti. Lekin ek baat batayiye, aapka beta koi dudh-peeta bachha toh tha nehi! Jab uski aur Menka ki nehi banti thi, use pata tha ki uski biwi ka affair kisi aur aadmi ke sath hai, toh usne pahle hi divorce case kyun nehi kiya?

Jayant- dekhiye, main manta hoon ki mera beta bhi koi dudh ka dhula nehi tha! paiso ka lalach tha use! Aur usse bhi badi baat, jahantak mujhe pata hai, Menka se woh bohot pyaar karta tha! Isiliye itne dino tak us aurat ko bardast karta raha! Lekin baad mein divorce case toh kiya na!

Daya- hm. Lekin woh hotel mein kyun rukha tha? yahan toh uska aapna ghar tha!

Jayant- main ne kaha na aapse, ki hum dono ke bich koi problem chal raha tha! sach kahun toh, main usse bohot naraz tha. humari marzi ke khilaf usne shadi kee, kabhi nehi socha ki mera kya hoga, uski bahen ka kya hoga! Contact tak nehi rakta tha humse. Isiliye, main ne bhi usse sara nata tod diya tha. lekin aulad chahe jaisa bhi ho, maa-baap ke liye toh jaan se pyaare hote hai! main ne kabhi sapne mein bhi nehi socha tha ki mera beta…

Abhijeet stood up and touched his shoulder to console him. Then he asked, "aapki beti kahan hai?"

Jayant- uski tabiyat bohot kharab hai sir. Aapne bhai ki maut ka sadma bardast nehi ho paya usse.  Andar Kamre mein so rahi hai woh.

Daya- thik hai. humein aapke bete  ke bare mein sari details chahiye.

Jayant- details??

Abhijeet- haan, aap Kishor ka kamra dikhayiye humein.

Jayant- uske kamre se kya milega aaplogonko? Woh toh rahta bhi nehi tha yahan!

Abhijeet- phir bhi, humein dekhna hai.

Jayant hesitated a bit, then said,

Jayant- jee, aayiye!

 He opened the door of a locked room and asked duo to enter.

Abhijeet- thik hai, hum kamra dekh lenge. Aap yehin rukhiye.

They started searching, and after sometime,

Daya- Abhijeet!

Abhijeet- haan Daya!

Daya- yeh file dekho! Bohot sambhalke rakha tha yahan. Secret-drawer mein.

Abhijeet- kya hai yeh?

Daya- yeh ek police case ki file hai. yeh Kishor 5saal pahle ek baar arrest ho chukka tha.

Abhijeet- achha! mamla kya tha?

Daya- usne ek ladki se shadi ka wada karke phir dhokha diya tha use. Is wajese us ladki ne suicide kaar lee. Lekin Kishor ke khilaf koi thos sabut na hone ki wajese woh chut gaya.

Abhijeet- hmm. Aur kuch hai us ladki ke bare mein?

Daya- haan, sari details hai. yeh file bureau leke chalte hai. wahan jakar thikse dekhenge.

They searched the room again and left the house after sometime.

 

8th scene:-

 CID bureau. Duo was checking the file they brought from Kishor's house with ACP.

ACP- Abhijeet, tumne us divorce petition ke bare mein pata kiya?

Abhijeet- haan sir, main Ms Maya Phadnis se is bare mein baat kee. Unka kahena hai ki agar Kishor aur Menka ne yah petition wapas nehi liya toh 6-7 mahine mein unko divorce mil jata.

Freddy and Vivek entered.

Freddy- sir, hum Kolhapur gaye the, Rakesh ke farmhouse mein. Menka sach bol rahi hai sir. Wahan ka caretaker toh raat ko rahta nehi hai wahan pe, lekin aas-paas ke logon ne dekha hai Menka aur rakesh ko wahan pe.

Vivek- aur sir, wahan ka watchman ne bhi un dono ko dekha tha, raat ke 12 baje. Dono garden mein baithke baatein kaar rahe the.

ACP- lekin Menka toh kah rahi thi ki watchman daru pike pada rahta hai, duty pe rahta hi nehi!

Vivek- haan sir, magar us din Rakesh ne use daraya tha ki woh use naukri se nikal dega. Isiliye woh us raat duty pe tha. Shayed un dono ne use notice nehi kiya!

Daya- sir, police-station se Kishor ka post-mortem report aa gaya. Ismein likha hai ki uski maut kareeb raat ke 12.30 baje huyi thi. Ab Menka aur Rakesh agar 12 baje tak Kolhapur mein the, toh adhe ghante mein Mumbai wapas aake kisika khoon karna unke liye toh namumkeen hai!

ACP- haan Daya! Aur woh Sundar toh bata raha tha ki us raat koi dusra aadmi tha uske sath! Kaun ho sakta hai woh? Pahle hum soch rahe the ki woh Rakesh hai! lekin Rakesh toh us waqt Kolhapur mein tha!

Freddy- sir, kahin aisa toh nehi, ki Menka aur Rakesh ne kisi supari killer ko paise diye ho, khoon karne ke liye?

Daya- nehi Freddy! Jis tarah yeh khoon huya, yeh koi supari killer ka technique nehi hai! aur humne aapne khabriyon se pata bhi kiya. Yeh kisi supari killer ka kaam nehi hai!

Vivek- sir, sabse badi baat toh yeh hai ki Menka ya Rakesh Kishor ka khoon kyun karenge? Kya maqsad ho sakta hai unka?

Freddy- Vivek, us din Menka ne khud kaha tha, ki Kishor bohot torture karta tha uspe. Kahin badla lene ke liye…

Vivek- sir, aap ek baat toh manenge ki woh ek sidhisadhi ladki hai. koi hardcore criminal nehi! Agar use badla lene ke liye khoon karna hota toh bohot pahle kaar deti! Licensed gun hai uske paas. Woh kabhi bhi Kishor pe goli chala sakti thi. Lekin itna plan karke murder karna uske liye possible nehi hai! aur ab jab kuch hi mahino mein use chutkara mil jata, toh woh kyun karegi khoon?

Abhijeet- lekin Vivek, Kishor ke pita ka pura yakeen hai ki khoon Menka ne hi kiya!

Vivek- sir, ho sakta hai woh…

Daya- abhijeet, mujhe lagta hai ki Vivek sahi kah raha hai! woh toh aapne bete ki maut ke gham mein ab kuch bhi bol sakte hai. aur rahi baat Menka aur Rakesh ke affairs ki, toh ab jab divorce hone hi wala tha Kishor aur Menka ka, toh woh khoon kyun karenge? Itne dino taq agar intezaar kiya, toh aur 6 mahine nehi rukh sakte the?

Abhijeet- mujhe pata hai Daya! Main toh bas aise hi kah raha tha. lekin sir, khooni chahe koi bhi ho, lagta hai uske maqsad ka pata chal gaya!

ACP- achha! kya?

Abhijeet- badla!

Daya- badla! Kis baat ka?

Abhijeet- dhokhe ka! Sir, yeh dekhiye. Menka ka post-mortem report.

ACP checked it and his expression changed.

ACP- achha! itna bada dhokha! Toh ho sakta hai ki Sheetal ke kisi ristedaar ya dost ne badla lene ke liye kiya hai yeh khoon! Vivek, zara humara record mein dekho, is ladki ke bare mein aur kuch pata chalta hai ya nehi!

Vivek- yes sir!

 

9th Scene-

CID bureau. Vivek entered with a file.

Vivek- sir, yeh raha Sheetal Mehta suicide case ka file.

Abhijeet took it from his hand and checked it.

Abhijeet- sir, yahan pe likha hai ki Sheetal ke pariwaar pe uski maa aur ek chota bhai tha.

ACP- toh ho sakta hai ki uske bhai ne hi yeh khoon kiya! naam kyat ha uska?

Abhijeet- sir, Sundar!

ACP- kya!! Abhijeet, yeh Sundar wohi waiter toh nehi hai?

Abhijeet- lagta toh aisa hi hai sir! Yahan uska 5saal purana photo hai, Lagta hai ki yeh wohi aadmi hai!

ACP- Daya, Abhijeet! Is aadmi ko uthao, kahin se bhi! Yeh humare hath se bachna nehi chahiye!

 

10th Scene:-

 A chawl. Daya, Sachin and Kajal stood in front of a locked door.

Daya- address toh sahi hai na?

Sachin- haan sir, hotelwalo ne toh yehi address diya tha!

Daya- lekin yeh aadmi itni derr se darwaza kyun nehi khol raha?

Kajal- sir, kahin woh bhag toh nehi gaya?

Daya- bhagke jayga kahan! Aaj nehi toh kaal pakad mein toh aayega hi! Filhaal yeh darwaza todna padega.

 He broke open the door, and all three entered.

Daya- ghar ka ek ek kona chan maro. Agar woh gunhegaar hai, toh koi na koi suraag zarur milega.

 They searched the entire house. After sometime Kajal called out, "sir!"

Daya- haan Kajal! Kuch mila?

Kajal- yeh dekhiye sir. Yeh gun mili hai! aur 2 bullets bhi.

Daya- gun! Dikhao zara.

Kajal handed over the gun to him. He checked it.

Daya- goli toh nehi chali isse. Dekhke aisa lagta hai ki smuggling ka saman hai. is Sundar ke paas kahan se aaya?

Sachin- sir, kahin is aadmi ka arms smuggling ka dhanda toh nehi hai?

Daya was about to say something but suddenly he noticed a shadow near the door. He signaled Sachin and Kajal to be silent and take position. They did so. Just then Sundar entered in the room and shocked to see the CID officers. He tried to flee away but caught by Daya and got a tight slap.

                                                                                                       to be continued...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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11th  Scene:-

 CID bureau. Sundar sat on a chair and CID officers stood around him.

ACP- batao, kyun kiya tumne Kishor ka khoon?

Sundar- main ne use nehi maara.

Abhijeet- dekho, abhi jhooth bolneka koi faida nehi, tum bach nehi sakte! Tumhare liye yehi achha hoga ki sab sach bata do, shayed tumhari saza thodi kam ho jay!

Sundar- aaplog chahe toh mujhe phansi pe chadha dijiye, main yehi kahunga ki main ne Kishor ko nehi maara. Lekin maarna chahta tha, zarur chahta tha! uski wajese meri bahen ne aatmahatya kee thi! Meri maa se yeh sadma bardaast nehi ho paya, aur aajtak woh mental home mein padi huyi hai! aur main! Mujhe beech mein hi apni padhai chodni padi! humari puri zindegi barbaad kaar diya us Kishor ne! main nehi janta ki uska khoon kisne kiya! Lekin jisne bhi kiya, bohot achha kiya!

Sachin- kya kiya tha Kishor ne tumhari bahen ke sath?

Sundar- Kishor aur meri bahen Sheetal, dono ek group theatre mein sath kaam karte the. Kishor wahan ka artist bhi tha aur make-up man bhi. Shayed maut se pahle bhi wohin kaam karta tha. Dono ek dusre se pyaar karte the. Kishor ne Sheetal se shadi ka wada bhi kiya. Lekin achanak ek din usne meri bahen ko chodke kisi dusri aurat se shadi kaar lee. Sheetal ke samne us waqt maut ke alawa aur koi dusra rasta nehi tha.

Daya looked at Abhijeet, he said in lower voice, "haan, report mein likha hai ki maut ke waqt Sheetal pregnant thi."

Sundar- aur phir main ne than liya ki iska badla main lekar rahunga. Ek din mauka bhi aa gaya. Kishor usi hotel mein aake rukha jahan main kaam karta hoon. Aur main ne use maarne ki planning shuru kee. Lekin mujhe mauka hi nehi mila use maarne ka!

Daya- yeh gun kahanse aayi tumhare paas?

Sundar- yeh mere ek dost ka hai. uska arms smuggling ka business hai. yeh usne mujhe 2din ke liye udhar diya. Bohot papad belne pade mujhe iske liye. Yeh gun mujhe us din subah mili jis din Kishor ka khoon huya. Us raat hi Kishor ka khoon karnewala tha, lekin us dusre aadmi ne sab gadbad kaar diya.

ACP- kahani achhi hai! woh dusra aadmi tumhara hi koi sathi tha na, jisne Kishor ka khoon kiya? Aur ab tum use bachane ki koshish kaar rahe ho?

Sundar- yeh kahani nehi hai saab! Aur jab main khud phaans gaya, toh kisi aurko bachane ka kya faida? Aap hotel mein kisise bhi pooch lijiye, us raat main kitchen aur dining se ek minute ke liye bhi hila nehi!

Daya- sir, ek minute!

Trio came in a corner, Daya said " mujhe lagta hai sir yeh sach bol raha hai. hotel mein enquiry kee humlogon ne. us raat woh hotel mein hi tha, kahin nehi gaya. Aur jab woh gun laaya tha Kishor ko maarne ke liye, toh sleeping pills ka istemaal kyun karta?"

ACP- is dusre aadmi ko jald se jald dhoondna padega Daya! Sare raaz isi aadmi ke paas hai!

Freddy- sir, is Sundar ka kya kare?

ACP- daal do ise lock-up mein. Illegal gun rakhne ke zurm mein ab ispar bhi case chalega. Aur Abhijeet, us arms smuggling racket ke bare mein pata karo.

Abhijeet- ek baar yeh case solve ho jay sir, unko bhi pakad lenge!

 

12th Scene:-

 CID bureau. Trio, Freddy and Vivek stood in front of the white board. Some matters about the case were written on it.

ACP- is waqt hum ek aisa murder case solve kaar rahe hai, jahan humare paas koi laash nehi hai. phir bhi, humein victim ke bare mein jo kuch bhi pata hai, usise khooni ka bhi pata lagana hai.

Abhijeet- sir, humare 3 suspects, Menka, Rakesh aur Sundar, inmein se kisine bhi khoon nehi kiya. Menka aur Rakesh khoon ke waqt Kolhapur mein the, is baat ka 2-3 witness bhi hai. unke paas yeh mauka toh tha, ki woh kisi aur se yeh khoon karwaye, lekin koi maqsad nehi. Menka ko Kishor se problem zarur tha, lekin 6-7 mahino mein use chutkara mil jata, khoon karne ki koi jarurat nehi thi. Rahi baat Rakesh ki, jahantak humein pata chala, dono mein koi niji dusmani nehi thi.

Daya- aur Sundar ke paas maqsad zarur tha khoon karne ka, par use mauka hi nehi mila. Investigation ke baad humein pata chala ki woh sach bol raha hai. aur us aadmi ke bare mein abhitak pata nehi chala jise aakhri baar Kishor ke sath dekha gaya. Ho na ho, khoon usine kiya. Lekin aisa koi bhi aadmi nehi mil raha jisne uska chehra thikse dekha ho!

ACP- sabse badi baat toh yeh hai Daya, ki jisne bhi yeh khoon kiya, usne sleeping pills dene ke  baad use chat se dhakka kyun diya? Us hotel ke kamre mein hi chodke ja sakta tha!

Freddy- ho sakta hai sir, uska chehra bigadne ke liye? Taki koi pahechan na sake!

ACP- nehi Freddy! Agar aisi baat hoti toh khooni uska driving-license wahin chodke nehi jata. Baat kuch aur hi hai.

Abhijeet- aur sir, Kishor khud chalke gaya tha hotel se uske sath. Receptionist ne dono dekha tha jate huye. Us waqt kafi raat ho chuki thi, aur Kishor ne us receptionist se yeh bhi kaha ki thodi derr mein wapas aa jayga.

ACP- toh us waqt bhi receptionist ne woh dusre aadmi ka chahra nehi dekha?

Abhijeet- nehi sir. Jab Kishor uske sath baat kaar raha tha tabtak woh aadmi bahar chala gaya tha. ab ek aadmi itni raatko jiske sath bahar ja sakta hai, zarur woh koi jaan-pahechanwala ya karibee dost hoga!

Daya- haan, lekin humein pata chala ki Kishor ka koi aisa dost nehi tha. jis group theater mein woh kaam karta tha, wahan sare log usse pareshan the. Kisise nehi banta tha uska. Abhi 3 mahine pahle us theater ke malik se uska jhagda ho gaya tha aur dusre hi din usne wahanse kuch paise aur make-up ka saman churake bhag gaya.

ACP- achha! lekin ek baat mujhe pareshan kaar rahi hai Daya, usne diary mein aisa kyun likha ki Menka use maarna chahti hai!

Daya- Menka ka toh kahena hai ki yeh baat uske gharwalo ne hi uske dimaag mein bhare hai! ho bhi sakta hai, kyun ki humne bhi dekha kitna zahar bhara hai Kishor ke pita ke dil mein, Menka ke liye! Lekin sir, agar humare sare suspects begunah hai toh…( he suddenly took Kishor's photo from the table and watched keenly. Then said) sir, mujhe lagta hai humein ek Jayant Trivedi ke ghar jana chahiye!

ACP- Jayat Trivedi! Kya tumko uspe shaq hai? lekin ek baap aapne bete ka khoon kyun karega?

Abhijeet (he held another file)- sir, yeh dekhiye! Menka ko uske ghar mein se yeh file mila aaj subah, jo woh humare paas bhej diya. Yeh bhi Kishor ne sambhalke rakha tha. Insurance ke papers hai ismein. 3 mahine pahle hi Kishor ne aapne aur aapni bahen Divya ke naam pe 10-10 lakh ka life insurance karwaya. Dono ke nominee hai, unke pita Jayant Trivedi. Matlab sir, 3 mahine pahle hi Jayant Kishor se mila tha. par usne humse jhooth bola ki woh 6-7 mahine pahle aakhri baar dekha tha aapne bete ko!

Vivek- lekin paiso ke lalach mein usne aapne bete ka khoon kiya?

Abhijeet- shayed nehi! Humein Jayant Trivedi pe shaq bhi nehi hai.

Freddy- matlab sir?

ACP looked at Daya. He handed-over the photo of Kishor to him and showed something.

ACP (with a smile)- matlab jald samajh mein aa jayga Freddy! Daya, Abhijeet! Very good job! Ab jaldi jao, pakdo use. Kahin bhagne na pay!

Duo exchanged glances and smiled. Then said, "yes sir".

 

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 CID jeep was going through a busy road.

Abhijeet- Daya, jaldi karo. yeh khooni bohot shatir hai! agar use zara bhi shaq ho gaya toh…

Daya- nehi! Khooni chahe kitna bhi shatir ho, CID ke hathose bach nehi sakta!

Abhijeet- waise tumhe uspe shaq kab huya?

Daya- jab paheli baar mile the, thoda doubt toh usi waqt ho gaya tha, pata nehi kyun! Aur aaj jab hum case ke bare mein discuss kaar rahe the, tabhi yaad aa gaya ki… aur tumko kab pata chala?

Abhijeet- mujhe bhi pahele hi din kuch ajeeb sa laga tha, lekin dhayan nehi diya! Par aaj jab tumne kaha toh… mujhe bhi usi waqt samajh mein aa gaya.

Daya- tumko kaise pata chala ki main kya kahena chahta hoon?

Abhijeet- Daya, Jo baat tum dil mein chupake rakhte ho na, woh bhi mujhe toh pata chal hi jata hai! aur yahan toh sab saaf dikh raha tha!

Daya looked at him with a smile, then moved fast.

 

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 CID jeep stopped in front of Jayant's house. Duo came out.

Abhijeet- sambhalke Daya! Agar humara shaq sahi hai toh Divya ki jaan ko bhi khatra hai.

Daya- toh darwaza tod dete hai!

Abhijeet-nehi, rukho!

 He took out a knife and opened the door. They entered.

Abhijeet- pahle Divya ko dhoondte hai!

 They searched the entire house and found a girl lied unconscious in a room. She was looking very sick and pale.

Daya- Divya! Lekin ise huya kya?

Abhijeet checked her and said "zinda hai! lagta hai kafi dinose slow-poisoning kiya ja raha tha. Daya, jaldi ambulance bulao."

Daya took out his mobile and called for ambulance.

Daya- ambulance bas aata hi hoga. Lekin yeh Jayant kahan gaya? Kahin bhag toh nehi gaya?

Abhijeet- nehi. Agar bhagna hota toh zarur bhes badalke jata. Par uska make-up ka sara saman toh yehin pada hai. aas-paas hi kahin gaya hoga.

Daya- thik hai. toh phir, Vivek ko hospital bhej dete hai, taki  who Divya ko hosh aate hi uska statement le sake. Aur hum dono yehin rukhte hai.

 After sometime ambulance reached. Divya was sent to the hospital. Here duo was waiting. Within half-an-hour, the front door was opened and Jayant entered. He was shocked to see duo.

Abhijeet- aayiye, Jayant jee! Aaphi ka intezaar ho raha hai.

Jayant- sir, aaplog? Kishor ke khooni ka kuch pata chala?

Daya- haan, zarur pata chala! Hum toh use hi pakadne aaye hai!

Jayant- yahan? Kya woh mere ghar mein chupa hai?

Abhijeet- bilkul! Aur is waqt woh humare samne khade hai!

Jayant- yeh kya bakwaas hai! main ne Kishor ka khoon kiya? Aapne bete ka khoon kiya main ne?

Daya- nehi, Kishor ka nehi. Kishor ka khoon toh tum kaar hi nehi sakte! Kyun ki Kishor koi aur nehi, tum khud ho!

 Jayant pretended to laugh, but his nervousness was clearly visible on his face.

Jayant- lagta hai aaplogonki dimagi halat kuch thik nehi hai! ek kaam kijiye, kisi achhe psychiatrist ko dikhayiye. Usiki ki jarurat hai aapko is waqt!

Daya- achha! humein psychiatrist ki zarurat ho na ho, tujhe toh ab doctor ki zarurat padegi Kishor! Aapna tuta huya hath-pair thik karwane ke liye!

 He grabbed Jayant's neck and pulled off his wig, and then his fake beard. The original face is visible now. The person's age is around 35 and he is quite handsome. Duo saw his photo many times. He is Kishor, Menka's husband.

Abhijeet- baki ke make-up toh achhe se nahane se chala jayega, kyun Kishor jee?

Daya- haan, aur agar nehi gaya, toh aur bhi tarika hai na humare paas, chehre se 'make-up' hathane ke liye!

 He gave Kishor the famous slap.

 

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 CID bureau. Kishor sat on the chair, CID officers stood around him.

 ACP- kaun tha woh aadmi, jiski laash ko police tumhari laash samajh rahi thi?

Kishor- woh ek drug-addict tha. sadak pe pada huya mil gaya mujhe. Main ne use drug ke paise dene ka lalach dikhaya toh woh meri baat maanne ke liye tayyar ho gaya.

Use main us hotel mein lekar gaya. Mujhe pata tha ki us waqt hotel mein bohot bhid hoti hai. koi humein notice nehi karega. Ek sharab ki bottle pahle se tha mere paas. Aur neend ki goliyan bhi. Mujhe neend ki goliyan lene ki aadat thi. Main ne uski sharab mein aise matra mein neend ki goliyan mila di, taki 3-4 ghante mein uski maut ho jay. Aur phir, raat ke kareeb 12 baje, jab lobby mein koi nehi tha, tab main use sath lekar bahar nikla. Aur wahan se thodi dur ek under-construction building hai, wahan leke gaya. Mujhe pata tha ki wahan koi night watchman nehi hota. 1ghante ke andar jab uski maut ho gayi, main uski laash ko chaat pe le jake, niche fek diya. Uska chehra bhi bigad diya taki koi pahechan na sake. Aur apna driving license uske paas chodke gaya, taki sabko lage ki meri maut ho gayi.

Daya- aur phir aapne ghar jake, aapne pitaji ka make-up lekar baith gaye! Waise tumhare pitaji kahan hai is waqt?

Kishor- woh…woh toh…

Vivek entered.

Vivek- sir, Divya ko hosh aa gaya. Aur usne aapni statement bhi diya. Yeh raha uska statement ka copy.

ACP- Daya, padke sunao zara!

Daya took it and started reading.

 " mera naam Divya Trivedi hai. main Jayant Trivedi ki beti aur Kishor Trivedi ki bahen hoon. Lekin mere papa Kishor ko aapna beta nehi maante the. Main bhi use aapna bhai nehi maanti. Usine mere papa ka khoon kiya."

Abhijeet-  kya!! Kishor, kya yeh sach hai?

Kishor nodded. Everyone looked at him with hatred.

ACP- aur kya likha hai ismein?

Daya continued.

 " Kishor ne hum sabki marzi ke khilaf jake shadi kee. Aur shadi ke baad na toh humein 1 paisa bhejta tha, na hi koi contact kaarta tha. main school ke bachho ko tution padhati hoon. Meri kamai se aur papa ke pension ke paiso se badi mushkil se ghar chalta tha humara. Aur Kishor wahan ameer ladki se shadi karke aish kaar raha tha! phir 3mahine pahle achanak woh humare paas aaya aur kahne laga ki aajtak usne jo bhi kiya uska bohot afsos hai use. Ab use koi achhi naukri mil gayi hai, ab se har mahine humein paise bhejwaega. aur woh aapna aur mera life-insurance karwana chahta hai, jiski nominee humare papa honge. Premium woh khud bharega. Taki agar achanak humein kuch ho gaya, toh papako koi problem na ho. Papa ne toh saaf mana kaar diye the. Lekin woh barbar kah raha tha, aur main uski baaton mein aa gayi. Mere zidd karne par papa ko bhi maanna pada. Phir usne humare ghar aana-jaana shuru kiya. Aur mauka dekhke meri sari jewelleries, jo hum mushkil se bachake rakhe the, woh sab churake le gaya.

  Kuch din pahle, achanak ek din raatko Kishor phirse humare ghar aaya. Usne kaha ki usne kisika khoon kaar diya. Ab mujhe aur papako jakar us laash ko, Kishor ki laash batakar le aana hai. papa ne use usi waqt chale jane ke liye kaha. Usne nehi maana. Aur is kaha-suni ke beech, achanak usne ek kitchen-knife uthaya aur… papako maar dala. Unki laashko humare garden mein gad diya."

ACP- Abhijeet, 2 constables ko bhej do, garden se laash ko dhoondne ke liye.

 Then he signaled Daya to continue.

"uske baad usne make-up lagake papa ki tarah shakal banaya. Uska make-up ka saman humare hi ghar mein tha. aur mujhe jabardasti aapne sath police-station leke gaya. Wahanse wapas aane ke baad usne mujhe dara-dhamka kar kamre mein bandh karke rakha tha. aur harroz kuch aisa injection de raha tha, jisse main pura din behosh padi rahti thi. Aur kuch yaad bhi nehi rahta tha mujhe. Agar kuch din aur aisa chalta, toh main bhi maar jati! Main chahti hoon ki Kishor ko kadi se kadi saza ho."

Vivek- sir, doctor ne bataya ki use ek khas tarah ke drug inject kiya jaa raha tha. agar thode din aur aisa chalta, toh wakei uski maut  ho jati.

Kishor- mera plan bhi yehi tha. taki pure 20lakh rupay mere hath aaye. Phir main chala jata koi dusre shaher, aapni zindegi jeene!

ACP- aur us diary? Usmein kyun likha ki Menka tumhe maarna chahti hai?

Kishor- Menka ko phasane ke liye. Lekin mujhe pata tha ki itna sabut kafi nehi hai uski zindegi barbaad karne ke liye. Isliye plan change kaarna pada. Main toh chahta tha ki Menka aur Rakesh ki shadi jald ho jay! Isliye main ne hi vakil se kaha ki use kahe ki 1-2 hearing mein divorce mil jayga. Mujhe pata tha ki us din Menka aur Rakesh Kolhapur janewale the. Isliye main ne usi din yeh murder ka plan banaya.

Daya- Menka ki dusri shadi se tumhara kya fayda hota?

Kishor- sir, humara divorce abhitak nehi huya. Legally main hi uska pati hoon. Aisi halat mein agar usne dusri shadi kee, toh woh shadi legally "null and void" kahlayega. Yeh Menka kaise hone deti? Is baat ko lekar puri zindegi blackmail kar sakta tha use.

Abhijeet- lekin afsos, humein sab pata chal gaya. Waise toh pahle din jab tumko dekha, tabhi thoda shaq huya tha. tumhara aur tumhare pitaji ka shakal kafi milta julta hai, isi baat ka faida uthaya tumne. Lekin make-up mein thodi galti ho gayi thi. Aapne hath pe ek kata huya nishan hai tumhara, jo humne photo mein dekha. Bilkul waisa hi nishan tumhare pitaji ke hath mein bhi! Use kisi tarah chupana tha tumhe.

Daya- aur jab humare sare suspects begunah nikle, tab toh ek hi aadmi bachta hai, jiske paas mauka aur maqsad dono tha khoon karne ka! Aur woh hai khud Kishor Trivedi! Tumhare is blackmailing wali idea ke bare mein andaaza tha humein. aur jab insurance ke bare mein baad mein pata chala, tab toh shaq ki koi gunjaish hi nehi thi!

ACP- insaan ke naam pe ek kalank ho tum! Tumne na sirf pati-patnee ke rishte ka apmaan kiya, 2-2 khoon kiya hai tumne. Aur ek khoon karnewale the. Phansi toh tumhe hokar rahegi! Le jao ise!

Freddy and Sachin took him away. Just then Menka and Rakesh entered.

Menka- sir, Vivek ne humein phone karke sab bataya. Waqei bohot bada ahsaan kiya aapne hum par!

ACP- arre nehi, ismein ahsaan kaisa! Yeh toh humara farz tha! ab toh tumhe jald hi divorce mil jayga. age ki planning kya hai? shadi ka card kaab bhej rahi ho?

Menka smiled shyly. Rakesh said, "sir, bas jitni jaldi ise chutkara mil jay us Kishor se! waise aap sabko zarur aana hai shadi mein."

Vivek- haan sir, meri bahen ki shadi hai, aap sabko toh aana hi hoga!

Abhijeet- haan toh aayenge na! lekin Vivek, bahen ki shadi toh thik hai, aapni shadi mein kab bula rahe ho?

Vivek (shy)- sir, pahle aap aur Daya sir toh bulayiye humein! Meri shadi ka kya hai… ho jaygi kabhi bhi!

Scene ended with a cute smile on everyone's face.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's a good story and I'm glad you wrote it for Dada. 😊
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first of KD that I checked UR PM too much LATE... then due to sum PENDING WORKS.. I saved it in MY DT😊... MY LAPPY was CRASH so COMPLETE REGRET😡... khair after so much PANGA😆... YESTERNIGHT I was ABLE to READ UR LUSH GIFT😳 as MY BD TREAT...😃

chalo zara DETAIL mein BAAT ho jayey... TUM nay itna TIME nikala, itni MEHNUT ki aur STORY kay START mein likh diya...😕

@GD, yaar, tumhari stories jitni achhi toh hai nehi, phir bhi ek dost ke taraf se hai, yehi sochke pad lena aur comment bhi karna!😊

ab batao pehlay TUMHARAY PITAI ki jayey ya POOJA😡...khair A TREMENDIOUS EFFORT👏 without TITLE😉... KD koi TITLE bhi hota hay STORY ka😆... ab agar main kisi ko kahun kay KD ki WO STORY parhi tou wo poochay ga nahi kay NAAM batao... yahan NAAM hee NAHI hay... wesay I think U are really inspired with KD now😉... as dunt reveal the KD full form in ADAALAT yet...😈

U start the STORY with NICE PACE👍🏼... sum CHIT CHAT also there between DUO and VIVEK... the BEST THING abt the STORY that U GRIPPED READER in that way that HE/SHE thinks with WRITERS MIND👏... at INITIAL U want that READER suspect MENKA... yup WE did😊... then RAKESH.. also DID😊... then SUNDER... also did😊... then the PITAJEE... ok also framed reader mind on that PATH...👏

I have a doubt at first side wen knew that KISHORE was a MAKEUP ARTIST... I felt that KD would use it😉 but yaar yup after the point of DIVYA wen KISHORE FATHER did not allow DUO to MEET HER... its confirmed that DAAL MEIN BUHT KUCH KAALA HAY...😆😆😆

I learnt alot abt MUTUAL DIVIRCE as still I dunt know anything abt DIVORCE n all😆... so its a NEW JAANKAARI for ME😊... I also adore that U used sum EXTRA MATTERS so good👏 like wen TEAM find a ILLEGAL GUN from SUNDER and Interrogate HIM abt that.. after that ACP Sir ordered BARAY BHAI to get those ILLEGAL ARM RACKET as well... very NICE...👏

GREAT MINDS think ALIKE😈... so I think U n ME stand on SAME PLACE in WRITINF field...😉😆

its really MY PLEASURE KD that U did that😳... either I dunt know that THANK U is a WORD enough to tell U abt MY FEELINGS😕 but I hope MY TWO CHOTAY CHOTAY HANDS always there for DUA for U... 🤗🤗🤗


Edited by gadhadada - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GD, thanks a lot dear for ur feedback.🤗 really happy to know that u like my story. aur rahi baat title ki, actually I could not find a suitable one.  u suggest something if u can.😊