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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Pain

(Muskaan's FF - Truly Magical)

Pain, pain is all that I feel
Whether it is inside of me or outside of me
I look around everywhere and all I see is darkness just darkness and no light
I try to take a step forward, but I keep going backwards falling and stumbling
I try to reach out for a hand, but I only manage to grasp some air
My tears are flowing... running down my cheek
My hearts feels pain in each and every breath
My voice refuses to come out of my mouth
I am so lost, scared and confused
I crave for a hug, a caress and warmth of words
I look up to someone, anyone who can help me
I find no one...except me..just standing all alone as always

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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
luvly luvly luvllyyy collection of poemsss!!!!
my my you are very talented dear 👏👏

I love the lanugage, diction, imagery and flow...marvelous dear 👍🏼

the FF writers that u write poems for are very fortunate to have someone like u spend their time and make a poem for their FF. very lucky indeed.

i wonder if i will ever get lucky 😆

p.s happy diwaliii 🤗
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Wish You Were Mine
(Muskaan's FF - Truly Magical)

Seven years of pain
Seven years of loneliness
Seven years of unhappiness
A day comes in my life...
Where I find you in front of me
You look the same, ever so same from outside
Yet, so broken from the inside
Your beautiful eyes give away your hidden pain
Your eyes are lifeless, listless and hollow
The pain in them speaks of volumes
The pain in them cannot match the pain and suffering I went through
Your pain is hundred folds more than mine
I wish I could do something, anything
To take that pain away
I feel helpless standing here in front of you
Because I am unable to take the pain away from you
Since you are no longer mine
Your name is now linked with someone else's name
Oh! I wish that you were mine!
I wish that you were mine!
Only mine!
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#84
Away from me
(Muskaan's FF - Truly Magical)

The only hope of happiness I have is from the little angel who is yours
Who lights up my heart every time I see her face
I feel an instant connection with her
And my heart starts beating faster when I am near her
My smile widens when she looks at me
I feel content when she holds my hand
I feel peaceful when she falls asleep in my arms

I want to make her happy
And give her everything that she deserves
I want her to accept me
I want her to love me
Because I feel she is mine
I am lost when she gets upset at me
I feel rejection when she does not look at me
And that is how I felt on my birthday
When she was not happy with me

I felt like I failed again, yet again
I did not know what to do
I did not know how to make her happy
And so I did what I am used to doing
Yelling! And I yelled at her
And she went away crying...away from me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Thank you 😳
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Originally posted by: ramahesh

all poems lovely awesome  dear
just loved it!!!❤️


Thank you for ur lovely comments.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zeynab111

luvly luvly luvllyyy collection of poemsss!!!!

my my you are very talented dear 👏👏

I love the lanugage, diction, imagery and flow...marvelous dear 👍🏼

the FF writers that u write poems for are very fortunate to have someone like u spend their time and make a poem for their FF. very lucky indeed.

i wonder if i will ever get lucky 😆

p.s happy diwaliii 🤗


Hey,

I am so overwhelmed with ur comments.
Thank you so much.
It means a lot to me. 
Happy Diwali to u too.🤗
I can try to see if luck comes ur way. I will try my best dear. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
You
(Muskaan's FF - Truly Magical)

I found you
And you came into my life
My life began with you
My hopes, my dreams and my wishes
They all existed for you.
My days started with you 
And my nights ended with you 
The sun was bright and cheerful because I saw your face 
The night was calm and peaceful because I was content I had you
I was happy because my life was you.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Water.

Pain

(Muskaan's FF - Truly Magical)

Pain, pain is all that I feel
Whether it is inside of me or outside of me
I look around everywhere and all I see is darkness just darkness and no light
I try to take a step forward, but I keep going backwards falling and stumbling
I try to reach out for a hand, but I only manage to grasp some air
My tears are flowing... running down my cheek
My hearts feels pain in each and every breath
My voice refuses to come out of my mouth
I am so lost, scared and confused
I crave for a hug, a caress and warmth of words
I look up to someone, anyone who can help me
I find no one...except me..just standing all alone as always


may b this person didn't visit forums. plz guide her/him here as they definetly will  find someone who can grab the hand and give a huge bone crushing hug.