Pyaar Tune kya Kiya- AR Love story part 5 updt - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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simply amazing part..

loved it..

waiting for AR meeting..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys am back with the next part'..m really sorry for the delay coz since m working guys don't get the much needed time to give my ff'... I have majorly changed the story completely of what I had thought this story would be I just hope ur'll like it '.

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Part -4

After finishing the song tears start pouring from his eyes he couldn't hear the applause who went in a frenzy duh enough to not notice tears of this man except for two people who also had tears in their eyes but all he could think & see was her face, the song completely broke him. Hell that's what he wanted Pain and only pain coz that's what he deserves ,,,thanking the audience which was just a mere whisper coz of his choked voice he made a quick exit from the back door of the stage feeling suffocated with the pain he was feeling as though he couldn't breathe coming out he stood near a wall lifeless that's what he felt with closed eyes & tears streaming on his face he remembered her, he could see her, her smile, her face, his lost love "Shilpa"'..the name itself made him weak defeated he slides on the floor with only tears by his side.

After seeing Armaan disappearing from the stage both Abhi n Nikki got alarmed and without talking to each other they both ran from there to be with him everyone else must have missed his tears but not them'..

Seeing him siiting on the floor completely broken

Ab & Ni- Armaan'.both shouted out of concern

Nikki goes and kneels beside him and hugs him at first armaan just cries in her arms but later he starts murmuring

Ar- Sh Shilpa, shilpa, I miss, shilpa I miss her so much and breaks into a sob

Abhi looked at his brother (yes they r cousins but more than that they are brothers cum friend) he felt so helpless wish he could do something to help his brother but there's nothing he can do running a hand in his hair getting frustrated praying to god pls do something help armaan'.

Armaan had not left Nikki still crying in her arm' she pulled herself apart from him cupping his face in her hands her heart Pained to see him in this state

Ni- Armaan pls stop crying, pls stop crying don't do this to yourself calm down armaan pls see we are there with you (she was feeling As thou she was consoling a small child)

And the next thing what armaan said made her shocked to hell even Abhi

Ar- nikki pls bring shilpa to me , I miss her so much, I beg to you pls..folding his hands in front of her' I'll do anything for you pls bring her'crying & begging in front of her

Nikki was too shocked to even react has he gone mad was all she could think

Ar- pls bring her I can't live without her I'll die, I'll die pls pls bring her back to me and in this moment he goes and touches Nikki's feet ..i'll do anything I'l die

Nikki at once got up and this ticked her off

Ni- in a angry tone.. Armaan just stop it for god's sake stop it ' you know it very well that Shilpa is dead, u got it, again kneeling in front of him taking by his shoulders " u heard it right Shilpa is dead" "shilpa is dead armaan . He just looked at her with a stunned face fat tears falling from his eyes not a limb moving from his body

Ni-Armaan kab tak aise chalta rahega'not knowing what to say else finding the right words 'she's gone Armaan from your life you know it but why can't you accept the truth,, she's gone armaan for how long u'll cause yourself pain .it was god's wish try to understand

Armaan looked at her and whispered

Ar- I killed her' Nikki & Abhi were taken back with his words..I killed her nikki ..i killed her ( shouting at the top of his voice guilt taken over him)

Ni ' NO Armaan u didn't kill her she died in a road accident '.reasoning with him coz this is the truth not what he is making out for so many years

But armaan was long gone on his guilt trip

Ar ' I killed my love!!! I hate myself I hate myself getting angry with this he banged his head on the wall ..blood started oozing out of his head but that didn't stop him from banging his head murmuring how he hates himself

Abhi and nikki both gasped at the scene in front of them

Abhi had it enough he had to stop it he went near armaan made him stand up and stopped him from hurting himself

Ab- armaan bhai bohot ho gaya .. pls stop this

But armaan was not stopping he was on his own world of guilt , pain, sadness and her. Thinking hurting himself would his his pain

Now abhi realized he had to stop armaan and he have to handle it alone physically this is going way out of hand but the next moment armaan pushes him and goes to corner picking up a broken bottle ready to stab himself when abhi stopped him and slapped him so hard that he fell on the ground unconscious anger taking over him

Ni ' Armaan'' was all that she could say realizing what he was going to do to numb to even speak,, she see's abhi picking up armaan in his arm

Ab- nikki'..nikki no answer nikki in a loud voice

Ni- hun

Ab- go get the car we have to take him home..(nikki nodding her head slightly) and give me your scarf his head is bleeding wanna tie it on his head it will stop the bleeding for a while atleast

The drive home to their home was silent.. armaan lay unconscious on the back seat'niki couldn't stop her tears realizing she would have lost her best friend blinking her tears she looked at abhi who was trying hard to concentrated on the road but all his mind could think of the consequences if he would have not reached on time his brother would have not been alive no and nikki's color drained face how could he forget that..Looking sideways he see's her staring at him with tears in her eyes. He immediately pulls her to him crying and comforting each other they reached home.

Nikki cleans his wound and bandages his head and gives him a injection placing a kiss on his forehead she and abhi return to their room not before making sure if he's alright.

Nikki was hugging abhi trying to get some sleep in his arms but sleep was long gone only the sight of arman hurting himself was all she could see her body shuddered at the thought

Ni- Abhi''

Abhi- hmmm

Ni- he is losing it..he is losing his mind..he's going crazy day by day'..its been more than two years that she left but still why can't he accept it... is he going mad???? This was more of statement than a question

Abhi not wanting to believe it but it's the fact

Ab- no way nikki armaan ko kuch nahi hoga , this has to end and it will he'll be back to his normal self. we won't let anything of this sought happen again. Don't worry everything will be fine.

Deciding this torture has to end, they will confront him, talk to him will do anything to bring back the original armaan but there's no escape from it'finally finding peace in each others arms they drifted off to sleep.

Mumbai Airport

Anjali, Atul, Rahul and muskaan were all set to go to US Miami

Padma- Anjali beta apna khayal rakhna wahan aur pls armaan ko waapas leke aana nahin toh meri beti ki aakhri umeed bhi khatam hojaayegi

Anjali hugs her and says- mom ps aap itna emotional mat hoye,mera tension mat lijiye I will be fine waise atul, rahul muskaan hain na mere saath.. mujhe aap ki fikar ho rahi hai kyunki aapko toh dad ko sambhaalna hai (saying with mischief).dont worry mom hum armaan ko leke hi aayenge aur aapki riddhima nahin rimmi bilkul theek ho jayegi.

Mu- auntyji tussi chinta mat karo sab changa ho jayega, chak de phatte'padma smiles

Ra- anjie ab hume chalna chahiye flight ki announecement hogayi hai

All say goodbye to Padma and promise her they'll bring Armaan back

In the flight anjali and atul were seated together

At- anju ek baat poochun

An- haan sweetheart ye bhi koi poochnewali baat hai u knw u can ask anything u have full right

At- finding the right words' um ..um kya tumne armaan ko maaf kar diya

Anjali keeps silent anger rising in her

At ' anju m waiting

An- No nahin main use kabhi maaf nahin kar sakti,,she tries to say more but was cut by atul

At ' lekin anju tum ye jaanti ho ki ridzi ki joh haalat hai..tum puri tarah se Armaan ko blame nahin kar sakti'yeh joh bhi hua hai ek bohot badi misunderstanding ki wajah...armaan toh jaanta bhi nahin hai ki ridzi mental asylum main hai.

An- atul how could you take his side...after what my lil sister has gone thru you have seen this all in front of your eyes but still you choose to side him..

At- no anju tum mujhe galat samajh rahi ho 'you can't think emotionally about one side...you have to think practically from both the sides trying to reason with anjali coz it will be unfair to totally blame armaan.

Rahul and muskaan who had heard all their conversation not becoz they were eavesdropping but coz ther were aseated behind atul and anjali

Mu- rahul kya tum bhi armaan se naaraz ho???

Ra- naaraz toh hun aakhir joh ridzi ki haalat hai use ignore nahin kiya ja sakta but I also agree with atul uska kehna bhi kahin na kahin sach hai.

Mu- yeh tum kya politician ki tarah answer de rahe ho'

Ra- muskaan'achcha tum batao tum armaan se naaraz ho

Mu- haan bohot naaraz hoon mann karta hai jab who mere saamne aayega na toh main use 2 -4 ghuse laga doon..usne meri ridzi ka dill tod tha' maine meri best friend ko khoya bhale hi koyi mujhe best friend na mane but ridzi toh kitni achchi thi na toh uske saath kyun aise hua ..Having tears in her eyes

Ra- muskaan joh hua so hua par ab sab theek hojayega..takes her in his arms silently crying hoping that not only ridzi gets alright but also they will get their Long lost friends also their Gang back''.muskaan comes out from his arms and asks

Mu- Rahul tum apna credit card laye hona'

Ra- haan kyun getting puzzled suddenly why she is asking this question

Mu- Arrey meri shopping tum hi karvaoge na''smiling sheepishly

Ra- haan kyun nahin waise I can't wait to go on Miami beach wow wahan kitni hot hot girls hogi bikini main wow'not realizing what he was talking

Mu- Rahulll'''i will kill you and presses his neck'.rahul shouting at the top of his voice gaining attention of all the fellow passengers 'but that didn't stop muskaan.😃😳

That's it guys I know ur'll would be confused with this sudden twist in story but this idea suddenly striked me and I changed my whole story'.sorry for the SAD part but this was really much needed in the story'and Shilpa is also a integral part of my ff everything will be revealed in the next part.just crossing my fingers hope ur'll like it..

And pls guys share me your views and criticism will surely try to improve..Guys I know there's not much of AR but the next and coming parts would be more of AR''

And pls tune in to find out more about

Riddhima who lost her love and has gone mad'.Armaan who too lost his love and is on the verge of going crazy'Will these two people ever find Love?...Will Armaan & Riddhima meet '.Too many wills but only one hope to be LOVED and to LOVE..

LoVe .KiARa.

Edited by Kiara_angel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Nice part.
Shocked with shilpa entry.
Waiting 4 nxt part.
Update soon.
Thanx 4 d pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesommee Part. Armaan Loves Shilpa. OMG! Theee Waayy Armaan Was Hurtinn Himselff Was Soo Painful! Jussst Waannt AR To Get Togethhaa. && Wantinn To Reaadd Theirr Sceness. Updatee Sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Loved the update
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i dont like this part i think the very first way was better then this mover here rid is 2nd choice n moreover shilpa is dead n armaan cant hate her n move on n i dont like this


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice! Kinda suprised with Shilpa's Entry!

But overall is really Good! Update soon as possible! :)))))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey dat was a nice twist loved d update..felt bad for both of dem.want to read more update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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greatly confused of shilpas entry
i have no words
at present i am in a shock

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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Hey! Great part!
I'm loving the updates!
Please do continue soon :-)

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