it is being long time I have seen an FF abt Dakshna. Since I am a little bit busy I cannot take part in it also. But I do read every FFs u wrote. Lucky, Storyteller, DakshnaFan etc... pls keep writing new FFs. It is good to read it.
Here is one I just tried to write fast.
Dakshna after mrg.
Daksh comes after Office. It was good raining and Daksh comes wet. Naina who is in room sees Daksh and runs to take the towel. She starts to scold him
Naina: Aree.. baarish ho raha hai.. umbrella kyu nahi lete ho? muje bulakar pata sakte the na?
Daksh sits on the chair and Naina dries his hair. Naina is in saree. Daksh feels warm and he pulls Naina towards him. Naina shrinks a little bit. She smiles and pushes him back. She goes to the wardrobe and takes another dress and tells
Naina: Kapde badal lo.. bimar pad jayega...
Daksh gets up and comes near Naina and looks at her... he slowly takes the dress from her hand and goes to wash room.
Naina is busy with cleaning the table and arranging the things over there. Daksh comes near her and hugs from her back and kisses behind her ear. Naina smiles and lovingly hesitates and continues her job
Daksh: Arre... pati hoo mein.. zara bhi parava nahi?!!!
Naina smiles herself and turns towards Daksh naughtifully: Nahi tho.. kyu?
Daksh wonders and holds Naina's hand and asks: Kya matlab?
naina as usual changes the subject: Ayi khane ke liye wait kar rahi hai.. chalo. der hote to dand ho jayenge. Naina walks towards the door.
Daksh feels bad... he thinks naina is disintersted to romance with him. his face is like KP.
Naina finds Daksh has not come with her and she turns towards him. Seeing his face she understood whats in his mind. She comes closer to him.
Naina: kya huva..?
Daksh sharp voice: tum javoo... muje bhookh nahi hai.
Naina mischeviously: sachmuj bhookh nahi lagta?
Daksh: Naina tum jaavo, muje bohot neend aa rahi hai..
Naina feels bad. she walks and daksh feels more bad. his face turns like KP. naina goes and closes the door and comes back. at that time only Daksh noticed door was opened. and he could get why Naina hesitated...
Naina: ab bata do.. mere ziddi pati kyu KP ka muh dikhakar khade ho?
Daksh does not look at her, still like KP.
Naina puts her arms around his neck and leans on her tove and kisses on his cheek. Daksh feels better but does not show it to her.
Naina sad face: ab muskuravo na??
Daksh smiles and pulls her towards him and asks: sirf ek hai??
Naina smiles and kisses on his other cheek also.
Naina: Ab Khush??? chalo... ayi wait kar rahi hogi..
they both leave happily...
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