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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry it took so long to write this part, have been really busy, hope u guys enjoy it. Can't wait to read all your FF's. I hope intezar ka fal meetha hota hai. u'll get what I mean l8ter. 
 
Naina goes to Daksh's room.
 
D: (Daksh has got his right hand on his right  cheek where Naina kissed him). Seeing this Naina gives a silent laugh.

Then she takes out her phone and takes a picture. She goes and stands next to Daksh. Then she makes her bangles jingle next to Daksh's ear.

(Daksh is saying everything in his sleep in a sleepy baby voice and with his hand on the cheek unless I mention otherwise)

D: Naina

N: Wah, tumne mujhe in chudiyon ke awaaz se pehchan liya

D: Of course, Naina, tum itni jaldi jag gayi

N: Jaldi nahi, bohot der hogayi, tum bhi jag jao, kam pe nahi jaana kya?

D: Mujhe tora aur der sone do na, bohot acha sapna dekhraha hoon.

N: Acha sapna dekh rahe ho, yeh to tumhari chehre pe dikhraha hai. (She laughs again).

D:Tum bhi so jaona, mere paas

(Daksh pats the empty place next to him on the bed).

 (Naina looks shocked)

N: Tumhe pata bhi hai tum kya keh rahe ho?

D: Haa, aur maine kuch galat nahi kaha

N: Mujhe nahi sona hai tumhare paas.

 Daksh takes a hold of her hand.

N: Mera haath choro. Daksh

D: Nahi

 Daksh pulls Naina on top of the bed and rolls so that he is on top of her and he opens his eyes  and the hand no longer on his cheek. They look into each other eyes for a while

Then Daksh smiles and Naina feels shy

D: Main abhi tak sapna dekh raha hoon, kya?

N: Tumhe kya lagta hai?

D: Sapna jaisa khoobsurat toh lagta hain. Waise bhi, jab tum mere samne ho ti ho, mujhe sapna aur haqeeqat ke faraq nahi pata hota. Par, yeh ek sapna hai ya haqeeqat, pata lagane ke liye meri paas ek tarika hai.

N: Kaisa tarika?

D: Dikhata hoon

He moves in slowly, inch by inch to kiss Naina on the lips/cheek, Then when he is about an inch away, Naina pinches Daksh on the arm

D: Ouch, Naina, mujhe chimti kyu mara?

N: Yeh mera tarika hai, tumhe sapne aur haqeeqat ki faraq dikhane ki.

D: Tumhara tarika na, bohot dukhta hain, mera tarika kitna acha ta.

N: Dukhta hai na, toh bohot acha hai, agli baar aise karne se pehle yeh dard ko yaad rakhna. Aur mujhse maafi mang goh, abhi.

D:Main jhooth nahi bolunga, main sorry nahi hoon toh sorry kyun ku bolu,, phir se aisa moka mila toh phir se aisa hi karunga.

N: Aaj kal tumhara himmat bohot bargaya hai.

D: Yeh sarasar nainsaafi hai, tumne mujhe kiss kiya toh main tumhe kyun nahi kiss kar sakta hoon

N: Tumhe pata nahi hai kya, wakilsaab, yeh toh pyar ka pehla rule hai. pyar ke court mein tumhare court ke rules nahi chalte.

D: Kaun se kitab mein yeh rules likhe hai, zara main bhi paru.

N: Koi kitab mein nahi likhe hai, Yeh kuch unlikhe rules hai.

D: Matlab imaginary hai. mujhe toh lagte hai sare rules ladkiyone hi choona hai. ladkiyon ek chal hain, ladko ko tarpane ke liye.

N: Haa, toh, tum tarpa rahe hona?

D: Haa, par main aur nahi tarpunga, Rules torne ke liye hi banaya jate hai

N: Tum aisa karoge toh tumhara reputation ka kya hoga?

D: Agar main kahu, ki mujhe isse koi farak nahi parta aur ki main manta hoon ki pyar mein sab kuch jaiz hai, toh

N: Phir jaise tum mujlimo ko saza dilate ho, waise bhi main tumhe saaza doonghi.

D: Tumhari har ek saza main bhi hhushi khushi seh lunga.

N: Saza kya hai, suno toh zara, jis gal pe maine tumko kal raat pyar se kiss kiya ta main ussi gaal pe me tumhe zor se tappar doonghi, aur tum pura din apna haath gaal pe rakhde na, kal raat ki tarah

N: Kal raat ki tarah, matlab?

N: Matlab main bataungi nahi, dikhati hoon. And she shows him the picture from the mobile. Naina laughs again. Daksh chases Naina round the room trying to get the phone

D: Main kitna stupid lagta hoon. Yeh photo ko mitao.

N: Tum stupid nahi lagte ho, bohot kute lagte ho, kute pinky.

Naina pinches Daksh's cheeks.

D: Acha, toh tum itna has kyu rahi ho?

N: Sorry, par tum tora stupid toh lagte ho. Daksh, ek baat batao agar maine tumhe dono gaalo pe aur maate pe bhi kiss kiya hota, toh tum ke se sote.

D: Pata nahi, par agar tum chaho, tum test kar sakti ho. I don't mind. Tumhari aur ek kiss ke liye toh mujhe aur stupid lagna bhi manzoor hai.

N: Acha, aur kal agar mere alava Aai aageyi tumko utane keliye, aur une tumko aisa dekhliya, toh tum kya bahana banaoge?

D: Nahi  Naina, main chahta hoon aaj se main tumhara chehra sabse baad dekh kar sojaoon, aur tumhare chehra sab se pehle dekh kar jaagu. Taki mera din acha rahega aur mera din bhi.

N: Mera chehra tumhe itna pasand hai.

D: Yeh koi puch neki baat hai kya.

N: Tik hain, tum aisa chahte ho to aisa hi hoga. Pata hai Daksh, jab tum aise romantic baatein karte ho toh mujhe bohot acha lagta hai. (itna acha lagat hai ki, main bata bhi nahi sakti, aise baatein karke mujhe khush rakho, kyunki is mein tumhara bhi faida hai.

Naina kisses him on the left cheek.

Daksh pretends to faint and falls on the bed and puts both his hands on his cheeks and they both laugh.

D: Hai, main toh margaya, logh jhooth bholte hain, intezaar ka fal meetha nahi, bohot zyada meetha hota hai, mujhe toh lagte hain mujhe tooth ache ho jayega

N: Wah, wah, tumhare liye meetha fal aur mere liye sirf khatta karela, yeh bhi toh nainsaafi hai.

D: Nahi yeh insaaf hi hai, hum dono, jaanta hai ki maine tumse se zyada intezaar kiya hai, aur waise bhi tumhari meethas nai toh is karela patwardan koh kute pinky banadiya hai na.

N: Main Naina Bhardwarj hoon, koi mamuli ladki nahi, mujhe pana ke liye tora toh papad bel ne parenge. par Daksh, I'm sorry, maine tumko kuch zyada hi intezaar karvaya na

D: Koi baat nahi, tum mujhe tumko kiss karne do ge toh main tumhe maaf kardunga

N: Phir se chimiti maaru kya?

D: Nahi, par ek jappi toh de sakta hoon na

And they hug

N: Ab chalo, nashta tanda hora hoga.

 

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Intezaar ka fal sachi muchi bahot bahot bahot metta hai yaar...
I just love the dialogue where Daksh says to Naina he would like to see her first in day & last before sleeping... 😉
Loved it loved it... 👏   🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow wow and wow.👏..superb dialogues and beautiful scene..lved it,I can imagine the scene as I read it,😍 amazing.I was waiting for this scene aur its worth wait yaar..dil khush hogaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks again, I can't wait 2 read ur FFs
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi all i hav never wrote any stories but i daily read ur stories and i liked them plz keep on writting friends u all r superb i will daily read them as it became my routine...plz keep on writting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: HeenaBanu

hi all i hav never wrote any stories but i daily read ur stories and i liked them plz keep on writting friends u all r superb i will daily read them as it became my routine...plz keep on writting

Same with me tooo...I enjoy alot by reading 
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Posted: 12 years ago

One more from me...

Its morning and Naina gets coffee for Daksh in his room & finds the room in complete mess. She hears shower noise and concludes Daksh is using shower so she goes ahead and start cleaning his room before he comes out.

N : ye KP bhi na kitna sab mess karke rakha hai ek chis apne jage pe nahi hai

She keeps all his files & folders properly in their place, adjust the bed'. Then takes out his clothes and keeps them on bed, his wallet, handky, watch besides the clothes'

Daksh comes out of washroom & notices naina busy doing all the work'

D: naina tum kab aayee'

N: tum jab shower le rahe the'aur ye kya hai KP kaise halat ki hi kamre ki'

D : arre wah'. Tumne to sara kamra ek dam saaf kar diya' aur waise bhi tum jo ho na sab thik karne' tumne hi kaha tha na tumhe mera kaam karna accha lagta hai,   tumhara hi to haat hai mujhe ittna begadne main'

N: accha akkdu ye baat hai to abhi se ye sab nahi chalega' tumhare liye coffee laee hoon' chalo tumhe office ke liye late nahi ho raha'

Daksh comes close to naina and his arms around naina's waist'. Both get lost in each others eyes'

D: (in soft voice) nahi office jane ka jara bhi man nahi kar raha hai'

N: kyu? Kya hua tumhari tabyet to thik hai na'.

With concern she touchs his forehead and then neck to check whether he has temperature or not'.

N: sab to thik hai to phir aaj kya hua'.

D: bas yuhi nahi jana chahata tumhare saat rahena chahata hoon'. Naina smiles silently and reads daksh mind what he his upto'. But does not show it to him'. & try's to change the topic

N: ye accha bahana hai office nahi jane ka'. Chalo coffee pilo nahi to cold coffee pene padegi' & laughs..

Daksh doesn't like but still gets ready & while having the coffee an idea strikes his mind and he breaks the button of his shirt intentionally so that he can tell naina to fix it'.

D: Naina, ye shirt ka button ek missing hai ab kya karu dekho ye bhi ek ishara hai mujhe office mein nahi jane ka'.

N: accha KP kitne bahane banane lage ho tum uff' ruko abhi thik karti hoon'

She gets a needle & tread and comes to stitch the button'

Daksh puts his arms around Naina's waist and while she is fixing his shirt button Daksh pulls her very close to him & with a mild smile is admiring her very sweetly'. Naina feels a bit shy' she is trying to avoid eye contact but can't stop admiring him back'.

N: Daksh ye kya kar rahe ho tum' aaj kal tum bahut besaram hote ja rahe ho'. Koi aajayega'.  

D: aane do main kissi se nahi darta' tumse pyaar karta hoon itna to haaq hai na mera'.

D: (slowly moves his fingers thru Naina's Hair and softly in her ears says) Tumhe baata nahi sakta ki main tumse kitna pyaar karta hu... jab bhi aakhane band karta hu to tumhe dekhata hu... jab aakhane kholta hu to tumhe hi doondta hu... meri Naina sirf aur sirf meri Naina... 

She mischievously hurts Daksh with the needle so that he can leave her '.

He loses the grip and moves back "Ouch" Naina ye kya kiya dard hota hai'. Places his hand where the needle hurt him  (doing all nautanki to scared Naina)

N: sorry sorry Daksh' zoor se laga kya dekhu to kahan '. She removes his hand kisses where he got hurt'.

D : abhi bhi dard ho raha hai' she gives one more kiss

D : abhi thik hai par yahan bhi dard ho raha hai (pointing finger on left cheek)

Naina puts her arms one by one slowly around Daksh, comes very close to him, leans on her toe and kisses him on his left cheek then on right cheek'  aur ek doosre ke aakhon mein kho jate hai'.

Aai calls Chintu Naina Nasta ready hai, aajao'..

Both wake up from the moment, hug each other and go downstairs for Breakfast'.

Edited by DakshnaFan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow Lucky and Storyteller... very nice!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Dakshnafan.. i loved it.. this dialogue too...

jab bhi aakhane band karta hu to tumhe dekhata hu... jab aakhane kholta hu to tumhe hi doondta hu... meri Naina sirf aur sirf meri Naina... 

Edited by ntsindia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks sousou, neetu 😊
I am happy that u liked it...😊