Dakshna FF(Fan fiction) - Page 13

Originally posted by: storytellerSSBN

Thanks for the appreciation guys, dakshnafan, neethu, sousousou, lucky

I'm upset changing the forum title hasn't resulted in more ppl writing FF's

 

An alternative ending to the coffee mug story

I'll finish later

N: Zara socho, Daksh. Hum burappe mein yehi mugs se coffee piyenge, saath saath, aur main hamare char bache ke liye bhi asia hi cups lekar aungi, usme likha hoga, KP junior, little miss KP,  twin/double KPs

D: Par Naina bache ko coffee nahi dena chahiye

N: oh God, Daksh, main bhi yeh baat jaanti hoon, bache mugs pe dood piyenge na,  coffee mugs me sirf coffee peene ka koi rule nahi hai. mujhe bachche ko palna aata hai, mere bachche ke liye kya acha hai aur kya bura hai mujhe achi tara se pata hain, tumhe bata ne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. 

D: woh sirf tumhare bache hai kya, tumne akele hi char bache peda kar di

N: Nahi, woh tumhare bi bache hai, par jab me tumse gussa karungi, aise hi bolungi. Agar tumhe yeh kabhi sunna nahi hain to tum mujhe kabhi gussa mat dilana, samljhe

D: Tik hain, ab Mrs KP mat bano tum

N: Mujhe ab meri baat pura karne do, hamare twins, mein ek ladka hoga aur ek ladki.

D: Hamare bache ko tumhare aankhein milne chahiye

N: Sirf mere aankhein, baki sab tumhare jaisa. Tumhe baas meri aankhein ache lagte hai kya mera aur kuch acha nahi lagta

D: Tumhara sab kuch mujhe bohot pasand hai, par tumhari aankhein mujhe sabse pasand lagte hai, bas

N: Aisa hai toh phir tik hai, par hamari bari ladki tumhari tara glasses pehnti hai, OK

D: OK

N:  aurwoh mujhe aai bulayenge aur tumhe ... tumhe... KP bulayenge

Naina laughs

N: Sorry, woh tumhe Baba hi bolenge, agar aur kuch bole to main une khub daatungi

D: Tum daato gi, rehne do, waise bache ko daat na nahi chahiye, use pyar se samjhana chahiye

N: Haa, tum ne sach kaha, tum bohot acha banoge Daksh, bohot acha,

D: Tumhe sach me asia lagta hai

N: Haa, jaise tum har aur rishta bohot ache se nibhaye ho, beta ka, bhai ka, devar ka, dost ka, waise yeh rishta bi bohot ache se niba oge, tum daaro mat, mujhe pura yakeen hai.

N: Aur bi zara socho Daksh, yeh cups ko dekhar hamare bache yeh puchte hai ki KP ka matlab kya hai main tumhe KP kyun bulati hoon.

N: Main une kehti hoon ki, mujhse milne se pehle tumhare Baba bohot zyada akhroo te

phir tum bohot gusse kahonge, mein itna akhroo nahi ta, thoda akhroo,

mein kahungi ' dekha bacho, aise hi akhdoo te tumhare Baba aur use aise hi bohot jaldi gussa aajati ti'

hum sab tumpe upar haste hai

Tum bachose kahoge 'mujhse milne se pehle tumhari Aai bohot bari jooti ti, aur ab bhi bohot jooti hai'

Tum saab mujhpe haste ho

Main kehti hoon 'ki main jooti nahi hu'

Hum dono jagra karte hai.

Phir hamari bari ladki apni mug table pe bang karke kehti hai 'order, order' ek lawyer ki tarah.

Aur hum do no chup hojate hai,  phir hamara sab se choto beta, ek origami rose tumhe de ta hai aur kehta hai 'yeh aai ko de do, baat out of court hi settle hojaye, toh hum sab ke liye acha hoga.

Tum mujhe rose de te ho

mein kehti hoon, case settle hogaya

phir hab sab hasne lagte hai aur phir hum sab gale lagte hai.

D: Mujhe tumhari kahaani sunkar bohot acha laga

N: Yeh kahaani nahi hai, ek din sach mein hoga, tum dekhna, aur sirf in mugs ke waje se 

D: Tumne bohot sochkar yeh tofe lekar aayi ho na. Sach main, joh tofa itne pyari pal de sakta hain, woh tofa anmol hota hai, isi liye yeh tofa mujhe bohot pasand hai.

N: Haa, maine bohot socha ki tumhe kya tofa du, phir yeh idea mujhe aaya aur mujhe pata ta ki tumhe tofa bohot acha lage ga. Daksh, tum dekhna, hum hamare bache ko, hamare bare mein bohot kahaniya sunayenge. aur aise hum bhi woh pal phir se jeeyenge,

D: Haa, par tumhe nahi lagta ki char bache kuch ...

N: zyada hai, dont worry, hum romance har din bacho ke sona ki baad karenge, aur tum bohot ache se maam ki ghar itne sara bacho ko samala ta na.

D: haan, meh jaanta hoon, main kehna wala ta ki char bache kum hai mujhe to ek cricket team chahiye

N: ek cricket team, tum no mene ke liye hamare bacho apne pet me rakhne ke liye aur janam ke liye tayar ho toh, toh mujhe koi aitraaz nahi

D; no way, never, yeh mujhs nahi hoga

N: Pehle bhi tum, no, never, keh chuke ho, aur tumhe pata uske baad kya hua

Daksh imagines himself nine months pregnant and giving birth and looks scared and shouts out

D: hum godhle le te hai,

and then as if saying it to himself D: haan, hum godhle le te he, yehi tik hoga, Naina.

then in a more sad tone of voice

D: Bari dukh ki baat hain ki, par sach hai ki kuch bache ko unhe maa baap,  apno ka, kya kisi ka bhi pyar nahi milta, kahe wajehse. 

N: Main un bacho ki feelings bohot ache tara se samajh ti hoon, bohot bura lagta hain. Agar main un bachcho ko tora sa bhi pyar aur khushi deh saki, joh tumne aur aai ne mujhe diye hai, toh main bohot khushi hugi,  Tumne bohot acha socha, Daksh.

D: Toh baat pakki, tum maiyya yashoda zaroor banogi. Yeh sun kar, Aai bhi bohot khush hojayegi.

And they both hug

  

 

 

 

    

 

Ayi comes to know abt the dept of Daksh's love

On terrace as usual their meeting at night. Ayi is about to take the dried cloths

from terrace and coming there. 
http://image.yaymicro.com/rz_1210x1210/0/451/old-couple-sitting-at-bench-by-sea-4519d9.jpg
Dakshna are sitting on the sofa and Naina's head is on his shoulder. Daksh holds Naina's left hand using his right hand very romantically.
Meanwhile Ayi comes ther and see Dakshna and gets chocked. She becomes speachless and stands there.
Naina: meine kabhi nahi socha ki tum muje pyar karoge daksh.
Daksh smiles: mein bhi vahi soch rahi hoom.. tum asal mein ek jaadoogar ho... sab ka dil jeet jaate ho... khas karke mera bhi... mein bhi kabhi nahi socha ki mein kisi ek ladki ko itna pyar karega...
Naina: To yeh kaise ho gaya..
Daksh: Kaise, Kab yeh to muje pata nahi.. par ek baat hai... darjeeling mein hum dono pehlibar train mein mili na... usi din se hi tum mera dil mein hai...
Naina: Sach!!!!
Daksh: Par ek baat hai... us din mene socha tum ek bohot bada fraud ho. par bad mein samach gaya na tum itni acchi aur maasoom hain...
Naina: Accha.. to kab pata chala mein khatarnak nahi hai??
Daksh: pata nahi... shaayad Mrs Archerkar ka farm house mein hum dono chale gaye the na? vaha hogi... jo bhi hai... deere deere tumhari har baat mein pasand karne laga tha.. par muje uska ehsas nahi thi... (in sharp voice) jab pata chala to.. tumhe bataya bhi nahi...
naina smiles and sits more closely to him
Daksh continues: Aur jab tum Kajrat gayi thi na? muje laga, ki tum khar chotkar ja rahi thi... Oh.. us din muje laga mein akela ho gaya... yaad hai, us din mein bus depot mein aya aur...
Naina: ha... film ka hero jaise... (both giggles)

tells: Naina, thodi der bhi yehi ruko na. mere paas...
Naina looks at Daksh and sits near her.
Naina: Accha baba, bolo..
Daksh: aisa nahi. (stretches his arms) aisa...
Naina looks at Daksh as if 'Daksh, you are behaving so needy' and hugs him.
Daksh: tumhare saath aisa baidna muje accha lagtha hai..
Naina gets up: Ayi-baba se patavo. hamare shaadi ke baad mein kahi nahi jaavoongi na... Ab muje jana hai
Daksh: Arre... ? ruko na...?
Naina: Good night!
Daksh: kam se kam subah tak kuch khaas do no..
Naina looks at Daksh 'you are so naughty...' and comes and kisses on his forehead.
Daksh becomes happy.
Naina about to leave. daksh holds her hand and points on her cheek and asks: "whats it?"
Naina: Kya hai??
Daksh: muje dekhne do..
He comes closer and kisses on her cheek and laughs...
Daksh: ab javo... Good night!!
Naina smiles with a little bt shy...

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Contd..

Daksh and naina at beach

Daksh takes naina out for a surprise and he takes her to beach( I thought a lot, but felt this would be better)

Daksh and naina get down and naina is excited to be at beach and she feels happy that daksh brought her there

Naina;(excited tone) daksh, toh yeh hain mera surprise

Daksh; kyu, acha laga?😲

Naina; acha laga? bahut acha laga.Pata hain daksh agar tum mujhe kisi restaurant aur kahi aur le jaate, mujhe itni khushi nahi hote,Mujhe beach pe khelna bahut acha lagta hain bahut mazaa aata hain.I love u😛

Daksh is very happy that naina liked his surprise.He keeps looking at her happiness and feels happy😃

Naina; Daksh, yaha khade kyu hain hum? chalo na paani mein khelte hain, chalo

Daksh; naina,, kapde geele ho jayenge

Naina; koi baat nahi, baad mein sochenge uss ke baare.Pls chalona, mere liye

Daksh' acha baba chalo, 

He rolls up his pants 

Daksh and naina get into water and naina starts throwing water at daksh.

Daksh; naina, kya kar rahi ho?

Naina; kyu pata nahi chal raha hain( she laughs)

Now  daksh starts throwing water against her.They keep playing in water.Naina is lost in excitement .She is about to slip, daksh holds her from falling and then...

Aankhon ki gustakiyaan maaf ho😆.AS USUAL intense eye lock.😳After few moments they come into real world.Naina becomes lil reserved and shy,daksh katho haal already boora hain pyar mein😆.

                                                                                Contd...

Originally posted by: lucky.m

contd...

Daksh- naina aur butaa

Daksh tries to ease up the situation and says

Daksh; Mam, agar aapki khelna khatam ho gaya tho, kuch khaane chale, 

Naina; haan chalo

Daksh; kya khayenge

Naina;butta..mujhe butaa khana hai(corn)

Daksh; jo aap ki marji

Daksh goes and gets butta for naina and naina asks y he didn't get one for him

Daksh; Tum kahvo, mujhe nahi khana hai

Naina ;acha..agar mein apna butta share karoo tab bhi nahi.she takes a bite and gives it to  daksh and daksh have his share

Daksh; butta itna meetha kyu hain?😲

Naina; kya meetha? paagal hogaye ho kya? she takes another bite ans says, meetha nahi hain

Daksh; tumhare liye nahi mere liye, tum no jo taste karke de diya

Naina looks at daksh and gives asmile combined with shy😳

Naina; daksh, kya tum bhi

Daksh;ab to mujhe theeke khane ko meetha banane ka technique pata chal gaya, tum jo mere saath ho aur hamesha rahoge

Naina;  daksh ab bas bhi karona☺️

Daksh; Haan, teek keh rahi ho, kafi jyada tarif karliya.ab bas aur jhoot nahi bhol sakta😆

Naina gives a surprised look combined with angry and says

Naina; acha toh sab jhoot tha.. tumhe tho...😡

She starts hitting daksh slowly and daksh slowly runs from there, chased by naina

                                                                                            contd...

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Contd...

Daksh proposes naina officially

Naina gets hold of daksh and they both get tired running

Daksh; agar bhagna uar tumhara gussa khatam hogaya ho tho thodi dher  walk par chale

Naina  nods her head with smile

They both start walking in beach, both hands locked , with naina's head on daksh's shoulders

Naina; daksh

Daksh; low voice'' hmmm

Naina; aaj mein bahut khush hoon.. bahut.Aaj ki shaam mujhe hamesha yaad rahegi..itne ache surprise ke liye thanks

They both stop and look at each other, facing each other.Daksh takes naina;'s face into his hands  and says

Daksh; Naina..yahi khusihi dekhnite mujhe tumhari chehre par, sirf aaj nahi, hamesha hamesha,😛

Naina looks at him with love❤️ and admiration just then daksh says

Daksh; Naina, aaj ke shaam ko aur khaas banana chahta hoon.aur is ke liye aapko aankhe bandh karni padege.

Naina closes her eyes and daksh says, ab kholo.she opens her eyes and then she sees daksh kneeling infront of her with a ring in his hand and says

(With idea from neetu addition of apic

love-bishal.blogspot.com/2011/04/how-to-porpose-girl-for-1st-time.html)

Daksh; Naina, I promise ki  tumhari zindagi ki har ek lamha  khusiyon se bardunga...aur har ek pal tumse itna pyar karunga ki duniya ka pyar kampadjayega. kya tum mere jeeavn saathi banoge? mujhse shaddi karoge?😊😲

Naina is speechless with tears of joy rolling in her eyes and she says

Naina; Yes..yes😳😃

Daksh usko ring pehnatha hain, uske hand ko kiss karta hain and then they share a tight hug of happiness and joy both saying luv u to each other👏

Not yet sure abt continution to this part.hope u will enjoy all the parts😃

                                        

Originally posted by: lucky.m

❤️A scene between daksh and naina in kitchen after marriage❤️

Ghar mein sab ghar se bahar gaye,Naina is busy preparing dinner.Just then daksh returns from office.Naina asks him to freshen up and come and she will make coffee by then

Daksh freshens up, gets into his night wear and comes down and his coffee is on the table.He sips the coffee and asks naina where others are and naina says all went out with some work

Daksh; acha, toh ghar pe koi nahi hain, sirf main aur tum😉

Naina is engaged in preparing dinner and she doesn't notice the naughty tone of daksh and says ; Haan baba. sirf main aur tum

Daksh comes into kitchen and stands besides naina and says

Daksh; mein kuch madat kardoo😉

Naina;looks at him with smile and says acha, tum meri madat karoge! kaise?

Daksh comes near her and pulls her towards him and says "aise"

Naina; daksh, ye tum kya karrahe ho?😳

Daksh; kya kar raha hoo? apni biwi ke saath romance kar raha hoon aur kya?

Naina; daksh pls mujhe chod do, kaam karne dona

Daksh; acha... teek hain and he leaves her and naina gets back to work.Daksh keeps looking at her ad naina feels lil shy, but still continues with her work.She starts making rotis

Daksh comes and hugs her from back 

http://depositphotos.com/3233926/stock-photo-Young-couple-in-their-kitchen.html

Naina; daksh...tum phir aagaye..tum javo yaha se ,bahut kaam hai..pls and lovingly she takes atta powder and writes on daksh's cheek

Daksh becomes more romantic❤️ and says; kisne roka hain kaam karne se.tum apna kaam karo aur mein apna kaam karunga, saying this he kisses naina back of her ear.Naina stops the work and turns towards him

Daksh; rookh kyu gaayi? karona apna kaam karo and he kisses her on cheek😉

Naina; daksh..tum aise karoge tho mein kaam kaise karungi

Daksh; maine kya kiya?😆

Naina looks at daksh lil angrily

Daksh; acha acha, kaam karnedoonga aur yaha se chalajavunga lekin meri kuch demands hai

Naina; kaunsa demands?😲

Daksh sits on kithchen table and says

Daksh; yahi kuch 5 ya 6 kisses dedo baaaki demands hamare room mein batavunga

Naina; kya? tum pagal hogaye ho, yaha? aur 6 , 5 nahi nahi

Daksh; sochlo

Naina; ek se chalega

Daksh; hello excuse me. mein koi sabji bejnewala nahi hoon, ki tum bargaining kar sako.fixed hai😆

Naina tries alot to convince him and u all know how jiddi daksh is .She finally  gives up, comes near him, daksh holds her waist and☺️ naina puts hands around his neck and she kisses daksh on forehead, eyes and cheeks and says ab tho javona and in process daksh ke baal mein atta powder lag jata hain

Daksh; sirf paanch huye, 6th kiss kaha hain? jalidi karo😆

Naina comes closer to daksh,both get lost,in each other she is about to kiss daksh😳, just then calling bell bajta hain, dakshna get alert, naina hurridely goes to open the door and daksh sits in hall

Originally posted by: ntsindia

Ayi comes to know abt the dept of Daksh's love

On terrace as usual their meeting at night. Ayi is about to take the dried cloths

from terrace and coming there. 
http://image.yaymicro.com/rz_1210x1210/0/451/old-couple-sitting-at-bench-by-sea-4519d9.jpg
Dakshna are sitting on the sofa and Naina's head is on his shoulder. Daksh holds Naina's left hand using his right hand very romantically.
Meanwhile Ayi comes ther and see Dakshna and gets chocked. She becomes speachless and stands there.
Naina: meine kabhi nahi socha ki tum muje pyar karoge daksh.
Daksh smiles: mein bhi vahi soch rahi hoom.. tum asal mein ek jaadoogar ho... sab ka dil jeet jaate ho... khas karke mera bhi... mein bhi kabhi nahi socha ki mein kisi ek ladki ko itna pyar karega...
Naina: To yeh kaise ho gaya..
Daksh: Kaise, Kab yeh to muje pata nahi.. par ek baat hai... darjeeling mein hum dono pehlibar train mein mili na... usi din se hi tum mera dil mein hai...
Naina: Sach!!!!
Daksh: Par ek baat hai... us din mene socha tum ek bohot bada fraud ho. par bad mein samach gaya na tum itni acchi aur maasoom hain...
Naina: Accha.. to kab pata chala mein khatarnak nahi hai??
Daksh: pata nahi... shaayad Mrs Archerkar ka farm house mein hum dono chale gaye the na? vaha hogi... jo bhi hai... deere deere tumhari har baat mein pasand karne laga tha.. par muje uska ehsas nahi thi... (in sharp voice) jab pata chala to.. tumhe bataya bhi nahi...
naina smiles and sits more closely to him
Daksh continues: Aur jab tum Kajrat gayi thi na? muje laga, ki tum khar chotkar ja rahi thi... Oh.. us din muje laga mein akela ho gaya... yaad hai, us din mein bus depot mein aya aur...
Naina: ha... film ka hero jaise... (both giggles)

Daksh: Tuhe pata hai.. use baad kya kya huva.. jaham dekhoo, jise milooo sirf tumhara cherhra tha.. mera behaviour bilkul paagalon ki tarah... tumse milne ki, tumse baat karne ki bahana doont raha tha.. aisa ek moka mile tho kajrat aya...

Naina: tumhare dil ki baatem muje batane ke liye.. hai na?
Daksh with sharpen voice: Hanh.. par bata nahi paya... phir accident, Abhi aya...
Naina: agar us din tum bataya to koyi problem nahi thi na?
Daksh: Shaayad...! phir mujse pehle abhi tuhe propose kiya...
(hearing that ayi gets double shocked)
Naina: aur mein use 'ha' bhi keh diya... hai na.. Daksh! meine kaha tha na mein use pyar nahi karti... kam se kam usi samay pata sakte the na? phir saare dard sehkar... devdas ki tarah...
Daksh: meine socha.. agar tumhare mann me mein hoo to tum 'na' kahenge...
Naina: budhoo.. muje kaise pata tum muje pyar karte ho? meine socha tum kisi aur se... phir kaise mein? (Ayi opens her mouth and puts her hand on it with surprise.. http://us.123rf.com/400wm/400/400/gvictoria/gvictoria1011/gvictoria101100129/8317255-expressive-face-of-blonde-woman-showing-shock-or-surprise-on-a-white-background.jpg ) Ayi with tears leaves... she is in a mix feelings... One side, the happiness in Daksh loves a girl this much - that too Naina. Other side, she did not see her son's pain he had been suffering.
Naina looks sad
Daksh: Hey.. kya huva...? jo ho gaya tho ho gaya... ab mein bohot khush hoom. itne dard sahne ke baad ab tum meri ho gayi na?
Dakshna hug. 
Naina: I am sorry Daksh, meri vajah se tum bohot dard seh liya.. ab mei tumhara dil kabhi dukha nahi doongi..
After sometimes.
Naina: Daksh, bohot raat ho chuki hai.. ab hame sona hai...
Naina gives a sweet smile and gets up and about to move. Daksh holds her hand and

tells: Naina, thodi der bhi yehi ruko na. mere paas...
Naina looks at Daksh and sits near her.
Naina: Accha baba, bolo..
Daksh: aisa nahi. (stretches his arms) aisa...
Naina looks at Daksh as if 'Daksh, you are behaving so needy' and hugs him.
Daksh: tumhare saath aisa baidna muje accha lagtha hai..
Naina gets up: Ayi-baba se patavo. hamare shaadi ke baad mein kahi nahi jaavoongi na... Ab muje jana hai
Daksh: Arre... ? ruko na...?
Naina: Good night!
Daksh: kam se kam subah tak kuch khaas do no..
Naina looks at Daksh 'you are so naughty...' and comes and kisses on his forehead.
Daksh becomes happy.
Naina about to leave. daksh holds her hand and points on her cheek and asks: "whats it?"
Naina: Kya hai??
Daksh: muje dekhne do..
He comes closer and kisses on her cheek and laughs...
Daksh: ab javo... Good night!!
Naina smiles with a little bt shy...