FF: Mohabbat Door Jaane na De-part 16 pg 46 - Page 32

Great update, waiting to see if khushi will be able to tell arnav what shyam has to do with her past.

Haaye jaaneman ... yeh part itna short kyun tha? 😕😲

You know I kept reading on and on.. I had actually forgotten bits of the previous chapter so I went back and skimmed through that too.

Then I got back and as I was reading, I realized how well you had covered all the points. You didn't miss anything. I loved how the story progressed. It was so well thought out and flowed amazingly. Man both of your stories have me HOOKED!!

Ab shyam ka asli chehra jald hi saamne aa jaye.. and what's more, he becomes instrumental in bringing our Arshi closer? 👏 wah kya thought process hai. Loved it! ❤️

Poor Anjali. 🤢 And I loved how you also thought about how Arnu would need to be alone now that he has witnessed something so drastic. He would need to ponder upon it and think it through before reacting.

There were so many angles in this story Niha. You covered them all so beautifully! 👍🏼

I just loved it. I wanna see Arnav Khushi face off. Now please be a darling - not like a tru daily soap writer or something, and please have them pour their hearts out to each other 😆

Make them talk 😃

Princess - You are back with a bang... ❤️🤗☢️

OMG!!!!!!!
This part was awesome I cannot wait til the next part

uff ladki... itne itne dino mein update deti ho ... !!!
anyways... this was a nice update... i hope Arnav acts smartly and not like Shashi Babu in the show.. the kind of pathetic jasoos he is i tell u 😆 And Khushi has to tell everything to Arnav... lekin pata nahin tumhare dimaag mein kya hai Nandkisor... 😃

Cheers,
Monsi

nyc but post next part soon

Hey Niha!

Super FF,I hope Khushi does tell Arnav the truth!

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Originally posted by: 4LeePAR

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