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Posted: 13 years ago


awwwthaku darlingggsss🤗
updating wthin a few mints :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey my dear buddies... i knw i have gvn u a heart attack in d last update...n some of my buddies r still ready to kill me 😆 anyways am updatin today... its d last chapter of ths ss !! thanks a lot for ur response.. there s one more FF which i have started...n i dont knw hwther my studies allow me to update it.. anyway;s ill try my level best fr dat.. n ds SS is very very close to my heart n some f u guys know y is it !!😉😳 hmm am nt continuing my speech ... so here goes ur update ... d song mentioned in last part inspired me to write dis ff so am including dt too.. hope u enjoy it ! once again thanks to all my hugsss🤗
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~!* PART 6 *!~

"Arohiii……. " I heard him shouting my name ! I turned around n found 2 deep brown eyes looking at me with painful eyes… "change d last paragraph jaan…. U knw how I hate dat incident" arjun whispered into my ears. "voo arjun….umm I just wanted the readers catch their breath …. Nt to hurt u dear.." I replied him. "wateva it is I don't want it to be like dat even in ur story …u knw how hurted I was on dat day ..huh?" n I nodded a yes in response ! " baby rashi have called u many tymes… call her n get ready .we need to leave within 1hr."he gave me a kiss on my forehead n left me in our room. I smiled to myself n went back to d memories on dt day …yes dat truck came towards us with full speed bt instead of me, arjun gt hit by it. I dint knw how it happened bt dat incident tuk my breath away… dose moments wen I felt I 'll loose my arjun foreva.. I still don't knw how I wd I have survived if I loose him……… that moment 1truth struck me. There would be NO AROHI WITHOUT ARJUN. We complete each other…… unki saason se meri saasein chalthe hai… ham tho bani hai ek dusre keliye… vo incident ke bare main yad bhi nahi karna chahthi… dats y I wrote about my death in d story narrating our lovestory…. I wanna die before him…. Bcz I wnot live without him fr a second !!

That day after d accident he was admitted in hospital n I could say dose were d days I realized d value of life….i feared I wd never get a chance to prove my love for him… I would never confess my love to him…the moment he became consious,I confessed my love for him… n he had n o doubts about me.. he just pulled me in a hug n did wat u guys expected… yes he kissed me with all his energy. I felt dat kiss so right…it was a needed one at dat moment. A kiss which only had purity,innocence n true love. We realized it after manyy yrs of fighting n seperation. May be bcz of dat,I felt more sweetness in dis kiss than the one we had before… at ayisha's engagement !

After that things went in the ryt flow. His parents came to my home for asking my hands for him. My papa n mama always wanted my happiness so they agreed to our rishtha. N fynally we were married. It was a simple ceremony n only our close friends n relatives attended d wedding which was held at our very own "kanha ji's " temple. It was bcz f his blessing we atlast won in our love test. We shifted to another apartment which he bought specially bought for me. He always wanted to have a home of his own means a home should be the result of his hardwrk. Am glad dat he fulfilled his wish. The frst thing we did after marriege was to adopt raj as our son. He used to call us di n bhai bt after adoption we asked him to call us mom n dad. He was quite surprised with dis. Bt it was arjun's decision n I was ver much happy about it. because arjun knew dat raj was nt lyk my small bro but was lyk my son. We moved with him into our new apartment .

"mom..momm…. " I heard raj's voice. "yes beta??" "mom ur phone s ringing dint u hear?" raj gave me my cell n went back to arjun's. "yeah heylo rashi..bol" it was rashi on the other side. "hey aru, tu ayegi na? I just wanted to confirm dats it " "yea rashi how cd I miss d party" " oh aru tu tho badi star ban gayi na I thought of reminding u dats it sweet heart" "well rashi beta star?? Are baba sirf 2film main gaayi hai meine.. koi star nahi ba gayi hoon.. aur agar star bhi ban gaya tho bhi tum logon se milne main koi mujhe nahi rok saktha samjhi??? " I complained. "okey baba be on tym dere.we'll be waiting..teek hi rakthi hoon bye " "bye ya " I hung up call. I got ready within a few time.After 2 yrs taurus girlz r going to meet.We were not really 4 now bt 8 lol. Rashi -Rajveer ,Shefali-Romit , Purvi-Salil n Arohi-Arjun !! I am soo excited to meet dem n deir litl kiddos… oh god dey wd also be in d same situation… where s my babyy?? I ran to the room where our litle angel was sleeping. "ISHA", ahhan our ISHU myn n arjun's 8 mnths baby..it was raj who cared for her more.. he is with her full tym n remind me about her food,sleeping tym etc.. me n arjun always felt blessed to have our litle angels in our life.

I entered ishu's room n found her playing with her dad n bro. it was a moment to be captured. Arjun was trying hard to dresss her. My angel s stubborn at times. Now she wants to play with raj so not getting dressed. I went dere n helped arjun. She instanly smiled at me n pointed to arjun like complaining. We laughed at the sight. I took her from arjun n asked dem to get ready. We all were ready with half an hour n I tried to feed ishu. Arjun n r aj used that time to watch india's match. N as usual we got call from rashi again n arjun n raj agreed to leave.. I tell u dese guys need a tv n ipl ..dey'll srvive !

I sat on front seat with ishu on my lap n raj on back seat reading hs favorite magazine. Arjun smiled at me n held my hands. I returned him a smile n he switched on d music player. It was one of our fvourite song other dan kitani mohabbatha hai…

Koi jo mila to mujhe aisa lagta tha jaise meri saari dumiya mein

geeton ki rut aur rangon ki barkha hai khushboo ki aandhi hai

bahki hui si ab saari fizaayein hai mahki hui si ab saari havaayein

khoyi hui si ab saari dishaayein ha badli hui si ab saari adaayein hai

jaagi umange hai dhadak raha hai dil saanson me toofa hai hothon pe nagme hai

aankhon me sapne hai sapno me beete huye saare woh lamhe hai

jab koi aaya tha nazro pe chaaya tha dil me samaya tha

kaise mai bataun tumhe kaise use paaya tha

pyaare se chehre pe bikhri jo zulfein to aisa lagta tha jaise

kohre ke peeche ek os me dhula hua phool khila hai jaise

baadal me ek chaand chupa hai aur jhaank raha hai jaise

raat ke parde me ek savera hai roshan roshan

aankhon me sapno ka saagar jisme

prem sitaaron ki chaadar jaise jhalak rahi hai

lahro lahro baat kare to jaise moti barse

jaise kahi chaand ki paayal goonje

jaise kahi sheesh ke jaam gire aur chann se tootey

jaise koi chip ke sitaar bajaye jaise koi chaandani raat me gaaye

jaise koi haule se paas bulaye kaisi meethi baate thi wo

kaisi mulakate thi who jab maine jaana tha

nazro se kaise pighalte hai dil aur aarzoo paati hai kaise manzil

aur kaise utarta hai chaand zameen par kaise kabhi lagta hai swarg agar hai to

bas hai yahi par usne banaya mujhe aur samjhaya mujhe

hum jo mile hai humein ise hi milna tha

gul jo khile hai unhe aise hi khilna tha

janmo ke bandhan janmo ke rishtey hai

jab bhi hum jamne to hum yuhi milte hai

kaano me mere jaise shahad sa ghulne lage

khwaabo ke dar jaise aankhon me khilne lage khwaabo ki duniya bhi kitni hasi aur kaisi

rangee thi

khwaabo ki duniya jo kehne ko thi par kahi bhi ni thi

khwaab jo toote mere aankh jo khuli meri

hosh jo aaya mujhe maine dekha maine jaana

wo jo kabhi aaya tha nazro pe chaaya tha

dil me samaya tha jaa bhi chuka hai aur

dil mera hai ab tanha tanha na to koi armaa hai na koi tamanna hai

aur na koi sapna hai ab jo mere din aur ab jo meri raate hai

unme sirf aansoo hai unme sirf dard ki ranjh ki baate hai aur faryaade hai

mera ab koi nahi mai hu aur khoye huye

pyaar ki raate hai……………………………………………….

main hu aur khoye huwe pyar ki yaad haimain hu aur khoye huwe pyar ki yaad hai.

main hu aur khoye huwe pyar ki yaad hai.

ab jo mere din aur ab jo meri rate hai unme sirf ansu hai unme sirf dard ki ranjh ki baate

hai aur fariyaade hai,

mera ab koi nahi main hu aur khoye huwe pyaar ki yaade hai,

Dub Gaya Hai Dil Gum K Andhere Me, Meri sari duniya hai Dard ke ghere me, ,

mere sare geet dhale aanho me banke diwana ab yaha waha firta hu thokre khata hu un

raho me,

jaha use dekha tha jaha use chaha tha, jaha me hasa tha aur baad me roya tha

jaha use paya tha paake khoya tha, jaha kabhi phulo ke kaliyo ke saye the rangin rangin

mehki rut ne,

har ek kadam par ras rachaye the gulshan gulshan, din me ujale the jagmag jagmag,

nur tha raato me jhil mil-jhil mil, jaha mene khwabo ki dekhi thi manzil,

jaha meri kashti ne paya tha sahil, jaha mene payi thi palko ki chhav,

jaha meri baho me kal thi kisi ki mari mari bahe,

jaha ek chehre se hat ti nahi thi meri nigahe, jaha kal narmi hi narmi thi pyar hi pyar tha

batome,

hath tha hatho me, jaha kal gaye the prem tarane, jaha kal dekhe the sapne suhane,

kisi ko sunaye the dil ke fasane, jaha kal khayi thi jine ki marne ki kasme

todi thi duniya ki sari rasme, jaha kal barsa tha preet ka badal, jaha mene thama tha koi

achal

jaha pehli baar huwa tha me pagal,

ab un rahon main koi nahi hai ab hai vo rahein viran viran

dil bhi hai jaise hairan hairan… jane khaa gaye mere sapno ka mela

aise hi khayalo main khoya khoya gum raha tha mein kabse akela

chamka sitare jese koi gagan main gunji sada koi mere angan main

kisi ne pukara mujhe mudke jo dekha mene,

mil gaya khoya huwa dil ka sahara mujhe,

jise mene chaha tha, jise mene puja tha, laut ke aya hai.

da hai thoda ghabraya hai, zulf karesha hai kapte hoth aur

bhigi hui akhe…..dekh raha hai mujhe gumsum-gumsum,

uski nazar jese pucha rahi ho itna bata do kahi khafa to nahi tum

pyar jo dekha fir meri nighaho me, aaj nahi kal tha wo meri in baho me,

bhul gaya mera dil jese har gum. badal gaya jese duniya ka mausam…

chhome jo man aur chhoome hawain…

kitani hasi hai kitani suhani..

ham donom ki prem kahani… ham donom ki prem kahani…

ham donom ki prem kahani…

yahi thi hamari kahani…. arjun aur arohi ki kahani…. Jo ek dil keliye duniya dedi aur ek pal kelye apni zindagi……..

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😳HOPE u like it... dnt kill me fr dt prank ... u guys myt have understud y arohi did so ...anyways fynally dey lived a happy life ever after...

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Posted: 13 years ago

i juust loove both parts :) <3.. (sorry for small comment), i really enjoyed it :)..

Congo for being a rockerz :) <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting for next update 😍
Edited by pinkyfrkaranika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna4karanika

sryyy am not hereee...🤢😆





BHOOOT 🤣 🤣

P.s. Loved Both ur updates appu dii 👏 and congoz ur a rocker now 😳 😉 nd this is called ''sister connection'' :P :P Rofl 🤣 i also turned into a senior member :P 😆
Love yaa >:D<

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Posted: 13 years ago
res..guests in hme nw.wil read and cmmnt aftr dat😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Good u brought in the twist - otherwise God only knows what would have happened to u - luved the happy ending - arjuhi raj and ishu seems to be a beautiful combination - thx for the lovely story
Good to know that u are starting a new ff - have u made a thread for it Appu?

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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...that was such a sweet ending appu!!!loved it totally!!!!!They adopted raj!!!😳 And isha is sooo cuteee!!!!🤗🤗

You didn't send me the pm today so pehle hi bol diya ki don't forget to send me the pm to ur ff!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
first of all congratz on being a rockerz.. i know i am late but better late than never..

and good arohi's death is limited to the fiction by her.. otherwise i wud have certainly killed you..

and yes, arohi and arjun will live happily ever after..

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