FF YOU ARE MINE Part-4 "Wen I lvd U-IV"page-19

Hello Guys i am back with my new FF hope you all like it 😳

    

Characters:-

Avdhesh Singh Thakur-

"Rich Arrogant, Rude  businessman of India now hardly visit his nation only for his mother, world know this Avdhesh apart from this there's another side of AST which is revealed to only some close friends n someone special whom he valued more then life, but at same time there's someone in the world who's thought make his blood boil, he is searching for that person from years ."

Arpita Rai-

"Princess of state of Lalanpur, came back to her hometown after five years stay in London to get engaged to a Prince chosen by her Father Raja Saahab Mahesh Chandra Rai,"

 

Synopsis-

He is on search of someone he has some deabts to pay that person and he promised himself that he will make sure hell for that person who his whole world revolve around whether like it or not who changed his peaceful world full of love and happiness though he someone special for him now but whom he claims to his only solace that person should be HIS and only HIS  and in his words " YOU ARE MINE"

Video Representation of Synopsis and Characters

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yGCoTP0pHtA[/YOUTUBE]

Precap on Page 2

Part 1  ... "The Journey  Begins "on Page 3

Precap ... on Page 6

Part 2 ... "When I saw You" on Page 8

Precap... on Page 10

Part 3 ... "Welcome Back" on Page 12

Part4... "When I Loved You-I" on Page14

                   "When I Loved You-II"on Page 16

Precap... on Page 17

                     "When I Loved You-III" on Page 17

                     "When  I Loved You-IV" on Page 19

                   

Edited by joliefille - 12 years ago

Hye jo, now congrates on your 3rd ff dear.
So avi in a new avtaar rich arrogant buisness man.
And arpi princess of Lallanpur.
Raja mahesh chandra(i started imagining mahesh rai kings get up) 🤣

Both the title is nice but i think
"U Are Mine" is more nice.
I know dis one also going to be as rocking as Desire.
Do update soon dear.Edited by Cuty16 - 12 years ago

congrats on your 1st, 2nd, 3rd FF :PEdited by amnaM - 12 years ago

Hiee Sugar Pie.. Missed Ya.. New FF.. Oh Wow.. I want title as YoU ARE MINE. It suits the FF. lovely concept..





update soon..
Edited by KriYa_life - 12 years ago

Heyy neha !!🤗

hw r u??

missing u a lot..😭

Loved the introduction...⭐️

I guess YOU ARE MINE is perfect..👍🏼

Heyy Teacher ji 🤗🤗 Edited by yoga23priya - 12 years ago

Neha, I love your new ff. Why didn't you send me a pm, I feel so bad for commenting so late. It is very interesting, please continue. I wonder who Avi owes debt to,. OMG Arpi is going to marry another man. I can't wait to see Avita's meeting. 

Precap

Hey guys thanx for such nice responce ,

n about the title too so its decided its

"You Are Mine"

 

"Avi catch me if you can!"

A soft sweet smile run on his lips , but in a flick of second that smile vanished , muscles turn stern as the sweet voice turn in harsh n full of disgust tone

"Avdhesh you don't deserve me! I hate you! Don't you dare to touch me , or show me your dirty face ever in life, !"

His clutches tighten n the wine glass he was holding got crushed n a drop of salty water rolled down from those eyes on ground with few drops of blood.

 

Heyyy TJ 🤗 Edited by yoga23priya - 12 years ago