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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey pls make it fast.waiting
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Originally posted by: sharmake11

me waiting we going to get

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chapter 62
Night
Prem takes Geet to KM'..
All were very happy as they were missing mishti a lot'
After few hours maan too returned mansion'

Finishing dinner all went to their rooms '
maan took geet to her room and made her sleep there'.as after knowing her fear of physical relation'he don't want to take any risk Of scaring her more. By their closeness'
With every passing day he immense himself more in work to suppress his strong physical desires for her'

On other hand Geet getting curious about physical relation between couple'the fact every marriage is imperfect without it was making her anxious and more then that her incomplete relation with maan is making her restless'''
"From years, I am performing all my duties of bahu and a good wife by taking care of home, kitchen and most important taking care of relations'but still my relation is incomplete" ? 'I am incomplete? Why? Why is he avoiding me? Why is this distance between us?
.

Hey babaji ab main kya karu?
prachi se pooch lete hu?
she calls prachi..
prachi---picks ph ' geet, how are U'
not good everything is messed up'I am confused?
Tell me what is bothering U.geet.?

Is physical relation really needed? I mean if wife and husband are happy without it..?
haa..geet,'Its very important for marital relation'
geet'but he told me he is not interested ..What it means?
Generally husband tells it when they don't love their wife 'but we all know how madly maan bhaiji loves U..

Geet---Then what is stopping him?

Prachi---Is he not at all getting intimate with U '?
woh kya hota hai?
I mean like kissing U passionately or something else'
kisses? he used to kiss me more, when I was 13 -14 yrs old and now is not even looking me in that way'she says making a puppy face''
geet its not necessary he should only take first step''..
Why don't U do anything?
What? no no'? I mean, what I am going to do'?
prachi rolls her eyes' seduce him geet,.. Attract him..
First change U appearance in front of him. Wear something like modern dresses, revealing nighties . .. And spend time alone with him'.
phir dekhna, its effect on him..
geet 'haa last time it effected him..
U did it before
haa'
perfect'but this time keep trying till he gives U, all your rights'
geet blushes..ok byee'
par main modern dress ghar par sab ke samne kaise pehnunge''?
Office haa office chali jate hu'

Luckily Dadi and jaya were not at home so she didn't had to look for any excuse'
She took bath, and checks all modern dresses maan brought on her birthday'.most of them were very reviling feeling shy she chooses the most decent among them 'it was white color knee length dress''
she got ready packs lunch and went to office'.



On entering office,' she got nervous, by atmosphere,
some mens were admiring her ,while others drooling and lusting over her'girls were getting jealous of her beauty'
Geet walks very slowly and uncomfortably towards maan's cabin'.
vicky stepped out of his cabin and was .
surprised seeing her in modern dress'.wow gudiya'tu sach main gudiya lag rahe hai''
vicky if I am looking good then why every one is looking at me like this'?
vicky got conscious about the situation'he moves closer, gudiya U came to meet bhai like this?
haa' why am I not looking good?
its perfect. But he scans staff'.?. But not for office'U should have done this at home'
ghar par kaise'sab hai naa'?
vicky got scared for her'Geet tu ghar jaa'.I don't think it's a good idea'

par vicky?
geet just go before bhai comes from meeting hall''
she hands him Tiffin , rush towards door.
And bumps on maan'
before she falls maan holds her by her waist'.


.he was totally mesmerize by her devine beauty'..
She smiles looking her effect on him'
his heart skipped a beat seeing her innocent smile'
Adi was also watching them'his laugh brought maan back to his sense..
he quickly helped geet standing ..and turns to staff who was still lusting her''..It angered him hell'..he shouts at them' "get back to work. Now." .
All rushed to their works'.
it scared geet too'''
he glares geet angrily' "Come to my cabin"'
she follows him silently'
he closed door'why are U here?
tiffin..
Why all servants are dead ' ?
'nahi sab theek hai'she answered innocently..
''then why U bothered yourself for such a small work. He said rudely'
her eyes filled up, I was missing U''.

he felt guilty''she is longing for me. And I am shouting on her, for no reason'after all her beauty is not her fault. '
sorry I won't come again, she turns to leave when pulls her to him'kaha ja rahe ho..?
ghar she said wiping her tears'''.
I am sorry

Tears were still flowing continuously''.
geet please stop crying 'I cant bear your tears jaan
she nodes for no'
ok give me any punishment ?I will do what ever U say..? but don't cry..

Pakka'U will do..?
haa

You were avoiding me these days, so your punishment is
U should always with me for ever'

I am all your's jaan...
not like this U should stay with me day and night...


maan jaw fell open' how can it be possible? What about office?
U can work from home
ok but sometimes I need to come office please'
sonchungi'(I will think about it)
but no excuse for nights, U have to sleep with me'
she waited impatiently for his answer'
unaware of her intentions maan agrees to all her demands thinking its her childishness to demand nights with him'
ghar chale shona'..
she smiles widely on her first victory''.
and left with him to KM ''''.

(Precap---maan cursing himself for agreeing to her demands..)

Hi friends here is part 62..hope U all like it...
sorry for mistakes
and please comment . it inspires me a lot...





Edited by fairyland_1234 - 14 years ago
pushpi thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Acha how long till the next part is up? A few more mins?

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow gudiya is getting bold day by day...😉 ab dekhte hain maan kaise bachega😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

Acha how long till the next part is up? A few more mins?

24 hours only😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
love how office people drooling
over geet
wow accept geet demand
super simply mindblowing part
love it core
waiting next part
what i'll geet do
thanks sweety
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kya yaar...acha make it less than 24 hours. That's the least you can do ;-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
niceee

are u updating second one???????????/

update soon

great part
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

Kya yaar...acha make it less than 24 hours. That's the least you can do ;-)

Will definitely try to update as soon as possible dear😃

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