Stupendously fab!!!u're really awesome honey.the first part where they both aplogize to each other was so much well written.and then their love making was so so so passionate perfectly apt with the character of maan and the possesion he feels for her was so much visible.
Overall ths was a great pleasure to read such a good piece of literature and i plead u to write more os and ffs.not to forget hunzz u need to update ur ff.
Once again thank u so much for giving the pleasure with ur writing and hell it was soo much worth it!!!
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