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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 5

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Dutta and Nakku 's Friendship

They dismounted form the horses and Supriya exclaiming " wow what a lovely spot ,, it is so beautiful" Nakku was also enthralled with the beauty in front of her, she took Radha's reins and started walking Parvathi and Radha towards a tree to tie them, Dutta had helped Supriya to get down and was walking Prithvi towards the tree. After tying the horses, Supirya said "lets us sit here for some time and enjoy, Dutta this is such a beautiful spot",

Dutta "Yes it is my favourite spot too, I cme here when I want to be alone ", They sat down on a flat stone facing the pond ,Supriya on Dutta's right and Nakku on Dutta's Left, Dutta, looking at Nakku warmly put his hand across her shoulder and said "You ride very well Chottu , where did u learn", Nakku felt warm all over ,, with heart thudding ,looking down said "I have been riding since childhood " Dutta nodding put his arm back ..thinking this Chootu looks so sad ,, makes me feel protective towards him ,dnt kwn why ,, looking at him lagta hai usne bahut takleef dekhi hai life mein aisa lagta hai.

Nakku feeling shy was also feeling thrilled at feeling her love;s touch ,,closed her eyes and firmly told herself not to give herself away ,,Nakku tu ladka banke rah rahi hai ,,apne aap ko bhoolne mat dena.

They sat there for about 30 mins, mainly Supriya talking about her friends , her life in the city , clubs, friends , movies and her goal in life she wanted to be an actress in movies , she was thrilled abt an offer she is about to get .

After some time she said "Chalein , Ayisaab has promsied to take me shopping "

They got up and started walking towards the horses when Nakku saw a man on horseback aiming a rifle towards Dutta, Nakku screamed "Saab" and pushed Dutta. Dutta felt the push and out of instinct thinking it from an attacker grabbed Nakku's hand and pulled her infront of him with his arm around her neck and pinned her facing the ground , Nakku struggling said 'Saab'he realized it is Nakku and pulled her up screaming ,"Kya kar raha hai chottu ,,mein tereko ek min mein ghayal kar sakta tha ",

Nakku nodding pointed a finger towards the running figure of a man on horseback ,,, Dutta shocked was looking at the fading figure and looked at Nakku, folding his hand in a fist "Wht did u see, chottu "

Nakku 'hath mein bandook thi apke taraf nishana tha '

Dutta looked furiously at the fig and started towards Prithvi to follow the man, then realized Supriya and Chottu were vulnerable and there could be more danger he decide to take them back hme ,,,

On the way back all were silent, Dutta had a furious look on his face his jaw clenched and eyes blazing with anger, he wanted to rush Prithvi but was going slow becoz of his guest .

On reaching the stables he handed Pritvi to Ramu kaka and rushed inside shouting 'Bajji, aaj security kaun dekh raha hai ?"

Bajji "Wht happened Bhau , '

'"Ek admi bandook leke ranch per hai , yelling kiski himmat hai Dutta ke elake mein ake Dutta per hamla kare,"

Bajji ." Bhau ,,yeh kaise ho sakta hai ,, chalo camera room mein dekhta hoon, calling from his cell, aye Sathe ,, camera room mein aja abhi "

Furoius Dutta and Baji go to the security room, meanwhile Nakku and Supriya reach AS "Kya hua chottu "

" Who ek admin bankbook leke kada tha ,saab ko nishana karke ,,"

AS" hand on her heart ",Jagdamb,Jagdamb' kiski himamat hui yaha aneki ,sab thik toh ahi na',

,NAkku " haan ,,who bhaag gaya "

AS "Dutta ki fikar rahti hai mujhe hamesaha "going after Dutta "Dutta , Kya hua kaun tha"

Dutta AS "Aap fhikar mat karo mujhe kuch nahin hua " Aap Mehmano ko apne programme ke hisabe se le jao ,, chinta nako karu "

AS nodding ,went back , telling "Supriya ,,tu ja jaldi se tayar hoke aja ,,hum log ,Neelkanth jayenge, waha Kala , Leela and roopa ke sath shooping jayenge and raat ka Dinenr wahin karenge"(neelkanth is the mansion where Dutta's sis and BIL's live)

"Chottu, tu, Dutta koh kah dena hum log raat ko late ayenge"

Nakku "nodded" and went inside the kitchen to help Rosa.

At 9 pm ,Rosa told Nakku to go and check if Dutta and Baji are cmg for dinner ,Nakku went to the Den ,,saw Baji and Dutta siting on the stool drinking , Nakku was in the den for the 1st time and was staring at the Bar , collection of the drinks on 1 side , books on the other side, files and workstation for Dutta and Bajji ,,Bajji looking at Nakku jokingly "Eh Chotuu tu toh bahut chotta hai pine ke liye , abhi se pine ka shauk hai ?"

"Nahin , mera bapu daru pike sab paisa uda deta tha , who piyakad tha , meri maa bahut pareshan thi mera bapu ki pene se ,mein woh " looking at Bhau ",khana puchne ko aya tha, Rosa ne bheja hai"

Dutta sipping from his glass was staring at Chottu warmly and gravely said "Tune aaj meri jaan bachayi, is ke liye Shukriya "

"Ji mein kuch nahin kiya , meine jo kiya who mera farz tha, app ne mujhe pannah di ,sahara diya , iskeliye mien aap ko shukriya bolna chaiye " looking at the ground nakku replied

Dutta smiled remembering how independent this Chottu is , din't take clothes from his acct .

Looking at Nakku and signing with his eye asked Nakku to sit on one of the stools, Nakku sat looking down , Dutta "Tera bapu daru pita tha,,abhi kahan hai "

"Mumabi mein saab"

"aur bai bahen"

"ek chotta bahi hai, Sethji "

Tu kyon chod ke aya'

Saab, mujhe ,,,,looking dnw

Dutta completed "apne pau pe khada rehna tha "

Nakku nodded , was feeling uncomfortable lying ,,

At that time ,,Bajji got a ph ,attending "haan bol Sathe kay pata chala" hmm thik hai "

Bajji looking at bhai , Bhau " who admi ,, Apte ne behja tha "who asli mein Prithvi ko nishana banana chata tha ,,"

Dutta throwing his glass across the room ,yelled "uski itni himat "

Picking the car keys started stroming out of the house ,, Bajji " bhau ruko mein bhi aa raha honn, "

Dutta raise his hand " mein akela jaunga "and stromed out of the house .

Dutta and Apte

Dutta rushed his car towards Raman's Bar and restuarant where Apte usually cmes to drink, Dutta entered the bar looking around but did not see Apte , he waited for 10 mins but Apte did not cme , Dutta then decide to go to his Ranch ,, Apte was kindda Dutta's neighbour, he and Dutta both had similar size ranch long time ago , but Dutta has now expanded and Apte was the same , he was jealaus of the fact that Dutta owned almost the entire county holdings and wanted to get back at Dutta at any given point , He started drinking and gambling and womanizing , He was aware Dutta was going to introduce his prized possession Prithvi in the races this year he was personally training Prithvi for the races and he wanted to get back at Dutta by killing Pritvi .

Dutta raced his jeep towards Apte's ranch , on reaching the house he heard a woman's scream, from the house , Dutta rushed towards the house and kicked the door open , the sight he saw before him , angered him further , Apte drunk was holding a bottle of drink on his hand 2 more men encouraging a couple of men, who were forcefully holding a girl her clothes torn and were trying to force her to drink form a bottle ,,the girl was crying and pleading them to let her go ,. On hearing the door crash all the men in the room turned back ,,Apte who was drunk ,,recognized Dutta and said , "ahh Dutta bhau welcome ,,and to what shall I say this honour is for" , Dutta , clenching his jaw, crinks his neck and said to the guys holding the girl "isko chodo "

Apte, "kyon yeh teri behen lagti hai ," and started laughing mockingly , all the men started laughing Dutta "let her go now "

"Nahin toh kay kar lega"

Dutta walked towards the men holding the girl ,, caught one of them by his color and smashed his jaw with a blow before any one could realize wht is happening ,,the guy fell and the girl ran frm there ,,, all the men realizing turned towards Dutta with sticks in their hands, Dutta faced them with a calm expression , he turned and gave a flying kick to the nearest one on his neck , he fell and Dutta grabed his stick and faced the rest of the men , they attacked him from the top to hit on his head and Dutta prepared for this held the stick in both his hands and stopped the blows and with all his strength pushed all the men in one force the guys were drunk ,fell easily and dutta attacked them one by one with his stick on their head, back ,hands,, atlast there was only Apte left who was drunk and screaming at Dutta how dare you come and spoil my party , Dutta slowly approaching him ,threw the stick and yelled at him so you have hired people to kill my Prithvi , ? You can think you can take Dutta for granted , a punch on his face , with every sentence ,

Tune Sher ko lal kara hai ,, aa himmat hai toh samna kar , by this time Apte is already knocked on the ground, pleading at Dutta's feet , mujhe maaf kardo , Age se aisa nahin hoga"

Dutta kicking him hard told him "remember next time you try to harm anyone under my zimedari , I will kill you with my bare hands ,,aaj tere ko zinda chod raha hoon"

Saying Dutta walked out of the house fired his jeep and raced towards home ,

He realized Bajji was following him in his jeep . ( after Dutta stormed out of the house ,bajji took his pistol and keys and started following Dutta murmuring ,,I cannot see you going alone , Nakku hearing this told Bajji mein bhi saath chalu , Bajji ,, tu wahan kya karega ,,tune kabhi revolver dekha bhi hai kya , bahu akela his Apte se nipat lega,,mein toh piche se jar aha hai ,,mein idhar akela nahin baith sakta )

Tu jake so ja

Nakku nodded , she was sitting on the kitchen door step when Dutta and Baji entered the house .

She was so relieved seeing Dutta safe ,she saw his hands were bleeding and he was holding his left arm in pain , he was holding a bottle in his left hand and drinking while entering ,seeing Nakku he asked "tu kyon jag raha hai "

"Who saab "looking down ",,kahana lagaon,, ""Shaking his head he went to his bedroom , "

Baji "Bhau Subah miltein hain"

After Baji ate , Nakku set Dutta's thali and took it to his room , the door was opened and Dutta on the sofa was drinking frm the bottle remembering the time Nakku pushed him and then Apte mocking him , his hand was bleeding, seeing Nakku he said "Chottu ,,mein kaha na nahin khana "

Nakku "saab aap ko chot lagi hain dawai lagaon"

Dutta, "hum log ko yeh sab ki aadat hai. tu ja so jao ,,aise jakahm hum roj khate hain " looked at his hand frowning he was remembering the night at the stables and the girl with sparkling brown eyes ,shaking his head he closed his eyes tired , Nakku seeing him like this was feeling miserable wanted to hold his hand and nurse it but was scared of exposing herself and turned sadly and left the room,

Morning, AS at breakfast table with Supriya and her mom asked baji "dutta abhi nahin aya "

Baji " mein dekh ke atta hai ",, at that time Dutta cmes with his hand bandaged ,he greets everyone and all eat ,AS ,"Dutta Sat morn we have Satyanarayan pooja so remember dnt make any programme" ,looking at Bajji and Dutta both ,"' your sis and biil's wil be coming and I have invited some friends and relatives too ,

Dutta and Bajji nods ……to be continued

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Posted: 14 years ago
mine yahooo me 1st🥳
*dinchak dinchak* Looks at daya 😛😛
will read it later n comment aramse😳😉
Edited by AzMishy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
My spot😛
So me finally here...am starting my dereservation spree from my petu's FF😳
An action filled update...Baaji here also totally at loss ..and Nakku jumpin in to save his life...
Apte here also bad very bad...
Supriya angle is interesting...love how Dutta treats Nakku😳
Chotu is really really sweet...😃
and me going to the latest part now...😛
Edited by -Srushti- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I need to read all the parts from the beginning... so of course i will
Reserve 😉
Edit:
Read all the parts. Really liked the story line...Dutta is a billionaire don...i like it...
And he has a love for the horses...😳
Prithvi sounds like a cool horse.😃...just like mine...but my horse is not wild 😆
Thank god All his sisters are married...😆
Ok...so he saw her at a party and she fell in love with him instantly...and he must have felt something too... these feelings will later be developed...😉
Nakku's past is horrible...but i like the fact that her elder sister Roopa got married to the person she liked and i would like to believe that the person with whom she got married is a good person. 😊
And she had run because of Morey...the leech is here also...😆
Oh god Nakku...and her bholapan she revealed her true self to this stable guy and he turned out to be loose talker... *shakes head*
But if she didn't run form there she wouldn't have met Dutta again and if she didn't met Dutta then she wouldn't have stayed in his place and if she didn't had stayed in his place the story wouldn't have move forward...So a special thanks to Nakku's bholapan and the loose talker...👏😆
Dutta also has a past with Seema...and she is a betrayer here also...?? God...Seema and Supriya...😆
One question...can Nakku be a boy's name too?? Coz you know everyone is calling her Nakku and they assume her to be guy...😕
Aww Dutta calls her chotu..how sweet 😳
Supriya here as well??? 😲 I am not going to get rid of her..am I?? 🤢😆
As long as she doesn't start liking Dutta i am ok with her existence...😆
Aww Nakku saved Dutta (Prithvi's) life... 😳 Thank you Nakku...😃
Yeh kya..she didn't aid him?? 😲 Why why?? 😲
Poor Dutta didn't got aided 😆
Thanks for the PM and am waiting for the next part...and you need to update soon as you didn't even give a PRECAP 😆


Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Raj🤗
I will not reserve my spot😛 *points at Srushti*😆
Thank god Nakku saved his or should i say prithvi's life.
I am very happy that Supriya wants to become actress,matlab woh jaldi exit legi😆
As it is i don't think whatever she talked,Dutta listened it attentively,he was toh busy thinking about his dream girl & his dream girl is busy staring at him😍
Finally Nakku ke kadam pad gaye Dutta ke bar me,
ab Dutta ko bhasan se koi nahi bacha sakta😆
Apte ki Kya mast dhulai kari,hamare hero Dutta ne😎

Why AS wants to keep satyanarayan pooja😕,pls. don't tell me she will make Dutta & supriya sit for that pooja.Becaz it is not allowed as per hindu culture.
Waise bhi Dutta ke saath iss pooja me sirf apni Nakku baithegi after their marriage.😉
Thanks a lot for the update.
Pooja😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice story of Tasha . Read all the parts .

very interesting ff indeed this one . Different story line of Naku in Boy get up . And here also supriya in present and seema in past ?

Iam very excited to know how Naku will be revealed herself before Dutta and what 's going to be Dutta's reaction after seeing Naku in real form ?😍

ha ha After all his dream girl is infront of him and he can't able to see her .😊

Don't know how long naku will be in boy get up . Hope she will be revealed soon . I would love to see if dutta finds himself her secret .

Can't wait for starting of tasha romance . and this supriya hell with her here also always comes between tasha .

I hope supriya a big KBH will exit soon .

Waiting for the next update .

Thank you for this interesting ff .
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiya,raj/prncz,wow what an update.In particular,enjoyed the bar scene and the subtle interaction between chotto and Dutta. Also loved the fight scene true to Dutta's style of combat,enjoyed the detailing ,very well written. Waiting for the next part... thanks for your pm,I was being vigilant for your update as Iam following this FF...incidentally,I sent you a pm,regarding my the party pt 4update,I guess you are busy,still loving your wrting x hammie
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Posted: 14 years ago
OH Rajjj !

I justtt love the update !

itwas awesome ,

sups is such a pain in the ass

and aw poor N when D puts hand on her and tellhs her/him that he rides well
poor N kya kya khayal a rahe hon gay dimag main :P

i love how they call him chutto !
ah again it N who is guarding D !

the bar scene is to die for

how D acknowledge N !

Love how u proceeding the story !
its all abt Prithvi <3


and wooo Love how D beats apte black adn blue !
best part N goes with food to D awww

poor baby , dil kay armaan nahi chuppa pa rahe !

but D refuses :(((((((((((

cant wiat for what is coming next !

and Now Raj

u need to be fast with updates !

cuz im so liking the storyyy !
Edited by kiran255 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update dear

poor naku dutta's hand on her shoulder bechari kya kare kahh bhi nahi sakti

supriya wanna be actress.

thanks for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice update👏, good to see Datta in action, try to update fast if possible. Thank you😊

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