FF:Dutta's Love (Dec 23rd , pg 117)

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FF : Dutta's Love

Hi all.. This is dedicated to all Tasha fans, all guys and gals who are romantic at heart.

My 1st attempt pl bear and any mistakes /suggestions let me know pl

This is the story of Dutta Bhau, a self made millionaire, his mom Ayi Saheb, his childhood friend Bhajirao and his 3 sisters and their husbands.

Dutta has varied businesses , his passion is horses , he trains, breeds and races also has his own ranch , orchards and a winery , his BIL's (read bro's in law ) take care of the winery portion of the business they live in big house a few miles away from where Dutta lives with his mom and Bhajji and Rosa .

I take you all to the day where Dutta meets Nakku 2nd time,

At the dining table, Dutta and Ayi Saheb sit to eat dinner and Rosa, serving the dinner , Rosa is the housewife cum cook, like a family member has helped Ayi Saheb raise the children since they were born,

"Dutta, why don't you teach some discipline to this Bhajji, he is always late for dinner, I am not going to warm his dinner again ", mumbling she went to the oven to remove the baked bread,

at that moment the front door opened with a bang and Bhajji entered carrying a person in his arms,

Dutta got up and asked "What happened Bhajji"

Bhajii : " I found this young chap lying on the road, unconscious , poor guy looks like has not eaten since a long time , he looks like has been down for quite some time "

Dutta : " let's take take him to the living room "

Ayi Saheb and Rosa following Dutta , Bhajji with a worried expression.

The lad looked too thin, was darkly tanned and dark black curly hair were cropped short close to the head. He looked so vulnerable, Dutta felt some thing tug at his heart looking at him , Rosa got some water and tried to wake the guy , his eyes fluttered and he opened his eyes, his 1st glance fell on Dutta and widened ,

Dutta looked shocked, oh those eyes, have come back to haunt him again, but how ? what the f**k , what is wrong with him ?, he keeps seeing those eyes every where , how come? Shaking his head, last time they belonged to a beautiful girl with reddish brown hair falling down her back and fair skinned but this lad, **shaking his head,*** could be her brother, Dutta again shook his head and told himself don't make a fool of yourself, that was a dream only.

Dutta to the lad : " What is your name "

the lad stammering," I .. I ' am Nakush .. all call me Nakku " and then closed his eyes as if tired .

Dutta about to ask more, Ayi Saheb : "Dutta let him eat something and then we will question him, look he is so pale , looks like he has not eaten for days "

Rosa ran to the kitchen to get some soup for the lad "Oh poor thing, lets feed him "

Ayi " Dutta, lets put him in the green bedroom"

Dutta : " Ok , sure "

They try to support the lad and take him to the room, but he stumbled and started to fall, Dutta " Ayi leave him, I will carry him "

Dutta put his arms under his shoulders and legs , he again felt something tug at his heart, Dutta again shook his head mentally and said to himself , "why am I feeling like this , I don't even know him ?"

Dutta picked him and carried him to the room on the 1st floor, Bhajji, Ayi and Rosa following him, he put the lad slowly on the bed and Ayi Shaheb :"Dutta you and Bhajji go and eat , I and Rosa will feed him and join you "

Dutta "Ok Ayi Saheb "

Bhajji at the table : "Bhau, I have not seen him near by , where do you thing he is from ?"

Dutta :" I dnt know I am trying to recollect if I have seen him before " ( Dutta does not tell Bhajji about the eyes , he knows if he tells , Bhajji will rigg him for days, like before )

Ayi Saheb and Rosa joined them a little later, Ayi Saheb :"He is resting now, we will talk to him in the morning , I think, Dutta we will keep him here till he gets well "

Dutta :" Ya sure "

Precap.. She looked so petite and lovely ,oh her eyes !! ,,he couldn't move he just kept staring at her figure running away from the stables '

Next Part

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/laagi-tujhse-lagan/1658208/ff-duttas-love-dec-23rd-pg-117?pn=4

part-III

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/laagi-tujhse-lagan/1658208/ff-duttas-love-dec-23rd-pg-117?pn=10

Part-4

Part-5

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1658208&TPN=21

part-6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/42396331

Part -7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/laagi-tujhse-lagan/1658208/ff-duttas-love-dec-23rd-pg-117?pn=44

Part-8 Anna and Dutta Meet

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43122099

Part 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/41295602

part-10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43939513

Part -11
Part -12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/laagi-tujhse-lagan/1658208/ff-duttas-love-dec-23rd-pg-117?pn=78

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Prinsesse.Suvi thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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reserved...never knew u write.. :D oh and I am first...and yeah, dont expect me to comment for a looong time😆 EDITED:
Oyyye tumne Naku ko ladka bana diya? Abh TaSha ke beech mein dostana? Hayye I am so very excited dhinchak dhinchak...DOSTAAANAAAA lalalalalala😆😆😆😆
arre wah rosa and all..it sounds so romantic..u know, abh mujhe rosa and dutta ka romance zyaada acha lagega..rosa is such a niceee name...lekin woh rosa thodi older haina
Hayye dutta deewana after some ki eyes😳 naku ki?😳😳😳
haye haye
sorryfor the delay in commenting, i was chuti manaoing...will read the next few parts soon😃
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omg dear ff by u ......so excited :) u noe that i am busy with exam .....will comment tmmrw :D so for now
RESERVED!!!

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Hello Hello Raj :D

I'm here :) to comment 😃

so wonderful start ...I'm liking the whole "eyes that torture him" lol

now is this lad a lad or lady lol i mean u say Nakku but refer to the 'lad' and him so i'm kinda confused 😕

I guess my questions will be answered with the next post lol

very nice start.....update soon :P or else u may have to wait longer for my update 😆

^ how u like my tactics lol

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hey prncz- velly nice---- I love the italian setting,vineyard,stable horses, and Rosa the cook...... and of course our memorable trio of Dutta,Nakku and Baji... I also liked the idea that she is portrayed like a lost , vulnerable lad...... and he the great protector as always... sounds good,...loved the idea of the precap.... writing captures the reader ,soooooo friend waiting for mooore.. hammie
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh Princz !

Congrats on ur first FF !
HMm Dutta is millionaire and love horses !
wow he is so much like me ,
i love horses too <3

HMm thank god the thre trio doesnt live with him <3
and who is this lad , is he lad or ladyyyyy :P
hmm too many questions running in my mind
and whose eyes are haunting Dutta !

really interesting xpecting quick updates :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suvi7884

reserved...never knew u write.. :D oh and I am first...and yeah, dont expect me to comment for a looong time😆

thnx suviiii, will wait for your comments
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Originally posted by: dg0628

omg dear ff by u ......so excited :) u noe that i am busy with exam .....will comment tmmrw :D so for now

RESERVED!!!

Thanx Daya ,, 🤗 i knw ,,, ofcourse studies 1st ,,no prblm take ur time ,,but do pl let me knwo if u liked it 😛
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Originally posted by: Hamlet53

hey prncz- velly nice---- I love the italian setting,vineyard,stable horses, and Rosa the cook...... and of course our memorable trio of Dutta,Nakku and Baji... I also liked the idea that she is portrayed like a lost , vulnerable lad...... and he the great protector as always... sounds good,...loved the idea of the precap.... writing captures the reader ,soooooo friend waiting for mooore.. hammie

Thnx hammie for encouragin me ,, yup we will get to see nakku and dutta LS in a different setting 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran255

Oh Princz !


Congrats on ur first FF !
HMm Dutta is millionaire and love horses !
wow he is so much like me ,
i love horses too <3

HMm thank god the thre trio doesnt live with him <3
and who is this lad , is he lad or ladyyyyy :P
hmm too many questions running in my mind
and whose eyes are haunting Dutta !

really interesting xpecting quick updates :D

hi kiran ,,thnks for your comments my name is raj ,, ya ,,i knw lots of q's in u rmind ,,hopefully next update a lot will be clear ,,
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was really good prncz 👏, i loved it... thnk u... plzz pm me... 😊

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