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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajani-Jadhav

natalie is very sweet and caring....is your comp all right now..?update soon the next part..



She is like a mixed combo of all the traits of my friends. I mixed a few trait from different friends and made her up. So all the awesome in one pack. Everyone loves her! 😃 Thats why i made the character!!! lol
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

So finally i am here..............i mean i have reached up to your fic and read the first part of it.

Cool update & loved the poster u made.

Piais hurt by Abhay's behavior and when he called her....u know i was hurt too when i listened those words from Abhay to PIa. How can someone be so rude, knowing very well that the person in front of u love u a lot?

I know she will be able to open that book and i am sure that she will find the key of that book being very special. But the question is will she take help of Arnav in this matter?

The librarian is so supportive and good. Misha was also very much shocked after seeing Pia's reaction for Abhay but i agree any girl will respond like that if she will listen those words.



Sure sure... She will she is special after all. Read the whole thing when you get time. Some people are really liking it you know! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Paradisekiss053



Sure sure... She will she is special after all. Read the whole thing when you get time. Some people are really liking it you know! 😊



Actually the concept is really lovely so they will be liking it. 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Y should I b getting Angry.. Ur exams r going on.. So u should concentrate on ur studies more dan d FF.. Sorry I thought ur in 12th as u were saying dat ur exams r getting over in cuming few days n my exams r also getting over in 2 days.. M in HSC Board.. n I dont know how all ur friends r from 12th.. Its indeed a Great Coincidence.. Bt m Glad dat M 1 of them.. Tkcr.. All d Best.. lol..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey! its lovely😳pia is shocked😲confused 😕and many more emotions all together
Natalie is very caring but was behaving with pia very weirdly, is she friend of her mother ?or related to her...cause the line I wish you could have met her..
in this her means pia's mother right?
anyways will be waiting for next update...........
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha



Actually the concept is really lovely so they will be liking it. 😉 😉 😉

Thank you again... Sometimes i feel that a thank you is so unnesesary cause you all know that i already tell you from the core of my heart... Yeah some poeple do like it and others... well they thing its stupid and yuck. That comes from yet another personal comment which i dont care about. I love writing and i will continue till all my inspiration is gone (God forbid that!)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Gals1110

Hey Y should I b getting Angry.. Ur exams r going on.. So u should concentrate on ur studies more dan d FF.. Sorry I thought ur in 12th as u were saying dat ur exams r getting over in cuming few days n my exams r also getting over in 2 days.. M in HSC Board.. n I dont know how all ur friends r from 12th.. Its indeed a Great Coincidence.. Bt m Glad dat M 1 of them.. Tkcr.. All d Best.. lol..

I know you are not angry! 😆 I was just saying that... 😛 Nah my exams just finished today and now i am FREE! It really feels good. I am sure with all the parties and stuff ,y brain is going to bring up some funny and naughty chapters surely! ⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ilove99

hey! its lovely😳pia is shocked😲confused 😕and many more emotions all together

Natalie is very caring but was behaving with pia very weirdly, is she friend of her mother ?or related to her...cause the line I wish you could have met her..
in this her means pia's mother right?
anyways will be waiting for next update...........

She is supposed to have all these emotions because inspite of knowing Abhay she never went deep into his world to understand him. With this she will learn about herself and find out what she didnt know and get to know the world as the supernatural place it is without her knowing it! 😃 I am planning for a magical roller coater... As i said before.
Its all in the readers imagination actually. You wouldnt specifically know who Natalie was talking about... You just have to assume. Whatever makes you feel comfortable and familiar with the story goes.
And as for Natalie's weird behavior. Its good that you understood that. That is not her normal self. She has changed herself to meet with the worlds bad. She wants to look strong and bold to hide the real soft corner into a trench. She is a very complecated character which will unfold as the story proceeds. She might be tough at times but she never means harm. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey.. Im a new reader of your FF.. I havent read all the parts but will surely do once Im free..

Please send me a PM when ypou update next.. ok ??
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

hey.. Im a new reader of your FF.. I havent read all the parts but will surely do once Im free..

Please send me a PM when ypou update next.. ok ??

Surely i will do that! I am guessing its fairly worth reading in your opinion so i am adding you to my PM list. Just to be safe i am sending you a friend request. 😃

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