BitterSweet LoveStory MG FF Thread 1 - Page 81

10 DAYS.... tahts tooooooo long for the update.... i even forget what was the story ... 😆😆

Awesome part..... loved it

Awesome updates.......u r a magnificent writer.......cannot wait.....please update soon! 😊 cannot wait ten days........thanks 4 da pm:) & da double updates.......😛

Edited by khwaishfan - 13 years ago

Great update continue soon..........

Loved it.... tom n jerry fight.. love it!

Arre yaar.. These Rat-Meow are too good!! but LOVED the concern between the two of them...
And the car scene was ahem.. soooo romantic! Hayeee cant wait for them to fall in love..
but Superbb update.. Loved it to the core..
Continue soon.. and thank you soooo much for the loonnnnggg update..

awesome!

Haha so the bodyguards managed to land two punches on maan and he didn't even realise what was going on but set stopped everything as she doesn't like the sight of blood which made her faint twice and so maan thought to tease her and they both ended up bickering their nok joke are too funny and maan when his drowning in geets eyes he doesn't even realise what his doing lol but geet the sherni is there to get him back from the trance lol and awe love te yash and meera scene so he finally managed to propose to meets who was waiting for him to do so in 5 years lol how sweet and phew geet got saved by pari form meeras mum but I'm not sure they realsied that there was a silent spectator watching all this lol anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

wowwwwww awesomeeeeeeeee

loving it.....
 maan getting shock after shock....and vow how both compliment each other....
its just commendable.....
the charaterisation is just superb and how you express them is even better.....
just love all the characters so much....
all are powerful but have their bunch of weaknesses ....they are so real and not like demigods......
just love the way story is moving ahead......