BitterSweet LoveStory MG FF Thread 1 - Page 80

awesome update muskii.....loved the update..........
maaneet nhok joks are cute😉
yash-meera proposal is awesome⭐️⭐️
geet fainting looking at the blood is funny😃

wow..its an awesome update, and its tooooooo long thanks but not a single line was boring... liked the yash proposing meera.. loved it.. the incidents bw maan n geet r toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo GOOD  ... loved the hospital scenes tooooooooooo.. plzzzzz continueeeeeeeee...

amazing part.......i liked the way yash proposed meera....it was so different

wow geet scared of blood ha ha

she is really out of space

poor Maan left without

thank yu ha ha ha

fabulous update

pls cont soonnnnnnnn

lovely update.........cat fainted twice 😆...........

great..............

10 days? You will make us wait for 10 days for another update?😲 Don't you have a heart?😭 Or are you writing this FF with the sheer intent of torturing your poor unsuspecting readers? So.Damned.Unfair.😡

 

Coming to the update- loved it. I don't think Maan has managed to win even one of their skirmishes so far…he has been now what- slapped, bitten, insulted, screamed at and had his foot stomped as well! The only thing Geet has not done to him- pulled his hair and scratched him (or maybe she did do that and I missed it).😆

 

I love how Maan is already falling under Geet's spell while Geet is blissfully unaware😳….Can't wait to see what happens when Geet doesn't scream at Maan's nearness anymore😍! <yeah I am evil like that>

 

Can't wait for the next part…Please don't make us wait for 10 days💔..

I hope this comment counts as long!

loved this part😊
geet calling maan Mr Magambo and maan calling geet as cat 🤣🤣🤣
both geet and maan thinking they were not that bad, atlest they thought one positive thing about each other😊
geets body gaurds beating up maan😲, iam really not liking this from the day he hav met geet he is getting injured. poor maan i feel sorry for him
 you hav promised that body gaurds would be punished😡, i want them to b punished soon plz
and cuming to our sherni's brother yash- wat an proposal, very straight, iloved the whole proposal sequence👏
loved maneet moments, maan started falling for geet, but she she is always finding sum way to hurt him, now she bit his palm
totally the update was good👏👏
do continue😊

awwwwweeeeeeesum prt
Luvd it 2 d core Luv it ...luv it

Yash n meera scene was grattt ...d lines were awwwwwwesum
Maneet were soooooooooooooooooooooooo cute
Plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont delay d update all time i wait for thos ff to b updatd so plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz updat soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Thanxxxxxxx fo d pm
Im eagerlyyyyy waitin fo d nxt prt
Edited by tehzeeb25 - 13 years ago

wonder ful update yaar.............