Originally posted by: kuttu
Hi
Loved the way you potrayed Pias possesive nature. She is one stuborn girl wonder how Abhay darling is going to put up with her. And Haseena's motherly love. Poor Maithli seems like life has come to a stand still. She loves Abhay and Abhay has truly moved on while she is still where she was ages ago. What is going to happen of her. Is she going to be a matyr in your story. Waiting to see the queens reaction on knowing that Abahy has escaped her web. And the thought that Abhays love for Pia is stronger than anything else that would have her bleeding I suppose so waiting for the final encounter
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