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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

awesome update

loved it

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
so Maan think Geet
is the deceiver & she
still pregnant but Maan
doesnt knowshe is caring
his child interesting
awesome update pls cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Shreya  🤗.....wow.....another interesting twist......love the way u keep us hooked to this FF......already waiting for the next update.....thank u for the PM.....TC 😊






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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
Ouch...she went to give him a surprise and what a nasty surprise she received in return!! Your story is getting really interesting...wondering what happens next...please continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
hiiiiii
awesome update
loved it
intresting concept
cant wait 4 more
con soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
awesome part....loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
WAITING FOR AN UPDATE DEAR....................
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Recap-The men inside became alarmed hearing  the not-so-faint noise of a
woman.
 
That's when she made a mad dash towards the exit  and ran towards the place she asked the taxi driver to park.


                         Chapter-7 The hidden face (part 2)

                          FLASHBACK CONTD

Meera couldn't get what has happened to her friend all of a sudden.

What is she doing at her place at this time of the night in this condition?

Why is she shaking and trembling as if she has seen a ghost?

She thought her husband might be going mad searching for her or has she told him and come......hey wait.....isn't she suppose to surprise her spouse with the news of her pregnancy?

Then what on earth is she doing here.....has she fought with him....but why.....and even if she has done something like that then she should be angry.....why scared?

Too many questions.....but geet was nowhere near answering them.

                         * * * * * * * *

''Meera please do me a favor let me stay here for this night,get my passport from the black bag from my room which is on the wardrobe...go to the khurana mansion anyhow,make some excuse and get my passport.....i'm not staying here any more....please do this last thing for me...'' geet finally managed to speak between sobs.

Meera closes her eyes an take a deep breath,she can never deny her.....but she cannot guess what went wrong between them....there must be something really big otherwise geet talking of leaving was impossible in every way.

But she knew she cannot ask her trembling friend for now.

''All right i'll do it,for the time being you can stay at my aunt's place as it will take time to make your visa,he wont find you there,and if you are thinking of leaving India,you can come with me to London as i have a flat there'' stated meera in a calm voice.

                       FLASHBACK ENDS

                             PRESENT

Maan was restless.....he kept pacing up and down the hall.

What was geet talking about?

Who the hell have poisoned her mind against him?

No.....that's not possible.He knew very well that even if god came down to her and told her that he is wrong,she wouldn't believe him.

Then what.......how come she came to know about all this?

She has been missing since last week......wait last week?

The same day when he heard a cry of a woman on that place.....this means she was the one!!!

Oh no.....how come he didn't realize then....all those decorations,candles everything....she might have planned a surprise for him and she was missing receiving a rude shock.

No way....she cannot hate him NO.

He was definitely not going to see hatred in those eyes where he has always seen love.

Life have been unfair enough,he just cannot let go of her....not this easily.

She likes it or not....i am not going to leave her or let her leave me....

Precap- She felt as if those words were like thorns hitting her....''please help me with this beta''

                        Love shreya

Ok sorry 4 the short update.....longer one coming up.Do comment and hit the like button.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
Last week...... She was missing 4rm six months in intro........i m too buyest 4r maan so i don't care weather he killed smbdy or do wat ever he want...... I can't hate him...... So i don't want geet to hate him....lol...
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Posted: 13 years ago
please update soon

this small update could not fill my curiosity. i want more............