*Applause*.
You write beautifully....that you knew already, but I want to tell you-your writing actually moves me. Its weird, I completely understand Shilpa...and that's only cause of the way you write.
Her insecurities and hestitation with regards to her relationship with Vivek are relateable...because of what happened to her. When you love someone with your whole heart and they disappoint, rather betray your trust and confidence in them, it has a huge detrimental effect on your personality and maybe even your looks as you feel indifferent to caring for yourself (which is wrong!!) but very human and that came across in your writing...
I feel so bad for her! Bless Shilpa but well done to you, this is an awesome chapter my dear, short but sweet-again, it takes alot to write something which can touch so many hearts so will read it again and again :) as per usual...but definitely eagerly!! awaiting your next piece....
You just keep raising the bar for yourself as well as everyone else! :P lots of love and a big jhappi! You star! Hats off :) xxxx
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