PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: amail1601

@chaand-haseena....you know me na...crazy stuff mein expert. ;)



that title really had me laughing... i actually believed it too...😳 judging it was coming from u.. i didn't expect anything less..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
 
 
@Henna....ho sakta hai...someday........ πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
 
 
@MeetPremeer....thanks!!!!!!!! :)
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
 
 
Here we go with the next part...
 
 
 
Part 2
 
 
Tracker was standing in the corridoor checking her nailpaint when suddenly her phone rang...
 
Tracker: Hey Mishu!
 
As she listened, a host of expressions charged across her face - confusion, shock, anger, wonder, and finally amusement.
 
(giggling)
 
Ok Mish....I'll be there!
 
*
 
Meanwhile Chaand and Haseena are sitting in their drawing room, sipping from their goblets as usual...
 
Chaand: Haseen.....tumhaari yeh aankhein.......
 
Haseena (smiling teasingly): Meri aankhein....Chandu?
 
Chaand: Mujhe meri naani ki yaad dilaati hain.....
 
Haseena: Oh really? 40 thousand years pehle ki baat yaad hai tumhein?
 
Chaand: Yes darling. (leans towards her) Humaari pehli mulaqaat bhi yaad hai....
 
Haseena: (mockingly) Yeah? Prove it.. (she leans away)
 
Chaand: Baat kuch aisi thi..................
 
*
 
Pia was wandering along the corridoor, wondering about Abhay...
 
(in her mind)
 
Yeh Abhay ki problem kya hai? Kyun hai woh aisa? Kabhi meri jaan bachaata hai, kabhi door rehne ko kehta hai. Door rahoon bhi toh kaise, burger jaisa jo smell karta hai.
 
(stops)
 
Burger? Yeh burger kahaan se aaya? Shaayad mujhe bhook lagi hai. Canteen jaakar kuch kha leti hoon.
 
(She walks away, and doesn't see the handsome young guy watching her from behind a pillar with a smile on his lips and mischief in his beautiful grey eyes!!)
 
 
***
 
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
So u have decided 2 keep us in suspense about mishas revenge n have even added more suspense about the guy with grey eyes?Thats ok im a patient person.
U r doing great thanx 4 updating
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Posted: 13 years ago
🀣🀣🀣

ROFL Raichands romancing lol @ the no. of years πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
@gaya3devi....nehoo?
 
@shaggyscooby....thanks for the encouragement......will try not to test your patience much! ;)
 
@hennu... aage aage dekh hota hai kya. ;)
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haseena calls Chaand 'Chaandu' LOL
and giving him attitude! Hahaha
 
and the burger comment! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
Nice update Adi!
continue soon! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
 
 
@anu...thank you! 😊
 
will do! 😊😊😊
 
 
@meetpremeer....hey thanks! 😊😊
umm...can you plz tell me a shorter name? I would hate to type ur id wrong. 😳
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
^ adi do tell us how they met and wat yr it was 🀣🀣
I think i'm more interested in hearing their story...πŸ˜†
Posted: 13 years ago
very nicely written aditi ...loved reading it completely 
i like suspense .. let it build πŸ˜†