PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
lol...chandu in romantic mood 🤣
i wonder wat misha is up to🤔
burger jaisa😆...aur ye handsome kaun hai jo pia ko dekhing🤔..chupke chupke😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow loved it !! can u pls pm if u can
pls pls continue soon !!!cant wait 2 see wat  misha is gonna do

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Posted: 13 years ago
 
 
 
@henna......gonna do that soon. ;)
 
@amrit....thaanks yaar!!! :)
zyaada suspense kiya toh might get beaten up also. not serial creative na. :P
 
@sammy....keep wondering!!!!!!!! ;)
 
@niru...thanks, and sure! add me in ur buddy list so it will be easier for me to PM you. :)
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
great going....second part really tickled my funny bone....😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
scrap me when u update if i'm not around... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Super Kool (Suvi, is it?).......thanks! hope to do more than that with the next. :P
 
 
@henna...okie :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
 
 
Part 3
 
 
Tracker meets Misha in a local hardware store as Misha had asked. Misha is comparing ropes of different breadths.
 
Tracker: Mishu? Hum yahaan kya kar rahe hain? Aur tum yeh ropes ke saath kya kar rahi ho?
 
Misha: Yeh bhoot ke liye hain.
 
Tracker (shocked): Bhoot?!! Tum kya suicide karne waali ho bhoot banne ke liye?
*hugs Misha and sobs*
nahin Mishu, main tumhein marne nahin doongi. Tum marr jaaoge toh woh T toh mujhe ketchup ke saath kaccha kha jaayegi.
*sobs harder*
 
Misha (pulling away impatiently): Oho chup karo Tracker! Main nahin marrne waali.
 
Tracker (stops crying, but sniffles): Phir?
 
Misha: Yeh Maaya ko chaahiye.
 
Tracker: Kyun? Usse kya woh bhoot ko baandh legi? Western movies ke un handsome cowboys ki tarah?
Bolo na Mishu...bolo na.
 
(Misha pays for the rope she has selected and starts walking out the shop.)
 
Misha: Ab chalo bhi...bhoot ke aane ka intezaar hai kya?
 
(Tracker runs out after her.)
 
 
*
 
 
Daanish was having a bad morning. First he had gone to take a hot shower in the morning, and the water had suddenly turned cold when he had just soaped himself. As soon as he wiped his face with a towel enough to see, the water had turned red.
 
Scared out of his wits, he had towelled off and hurried out to dress. As he picked up his shirt, he noticed red splotches on it.
 
When he opened his cupboard to take out another shirt, he found them all to be similarly stained. He had to wear the shirt he had kept for washing again.
 
Running late, he had poured himself coffee in one of those take-away containers he kept for emergencies, and was right now stuck at the site of a landslide.
 
Sighing, he looks at his watch, and picks up his tumbler to drink.
 
Daanish: Late ho gaya aaj toh. Panchhi will kill me!
 
(As if on cue, his phone rings. It is Panchhi. He prepares to face her wrath, but she tells him something that shocks him to the core. His tumbler falls from his hand, spilling its contents all over his lap and the floor of the car. As he dazedly looks down, he sees that the few drops still left in the cup are red....... Suddenly, horns start blaring behind him, and a policeman pokes his head in through the window.......)
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
have to mention u have portrayed misha's and trackers dialogues immaculately.. i could really imagine both of them actually saying those lines.

With Danish... spooky stuff yaar... blood(?) dripping from everything and anything he touches... wonder wat's going on...

really like how u update in little snippets... really creates suspense...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jungli Billi

have to mention u have portrayed misha's and trackers dialogues immaculately.. i could really imagine both of them actually saying those lines.

With Danish... spooky stuff yaar... blood(?) dripping from everything and anything he touches... wonder wat's going on...

really like how u update in little snippets... really creates suspense...

 
 
Wow! Thanks for the super-fast feedback Henna!!! Getting influenced by my glowy blue-eyed vampire or what? 😛😆😆
 
Thanks sooooo much for the encouragement...now I know a li'l better what to do. 😉
 
@Daanish..*ahem* ;;)
 
Hope you're enjoying it!! 😊
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmmm is danish having a nightmare or is this happening for real?
Cant wait 4 the next part