Maneet ff:~A Drink~ UPD: pg 59,60

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys me back!!
I know i have two stories in progress but Ajnabee will end this week so I'm left with Friction.
I have another FF to share with you all if anyone is interested.  The title A Drink might change.
I might continue...It's different from the show.
So please share your ideas with me. Specially title ideas..... Anything is welcome!😆

Love Amna~




Intro:

He walked through the heavy door.  It was a Friday night and people had a chance to forget life and just live on Monday there would be the usual routine.

He sighed. A sigh of relief a sigh that meant forget worrys-that is for now''.

This moment just froze it was like the grinding and the dirty dancing and howling.  The loud piercing music became mute.

This was his life he walked through the crowd to where the bar was.  The girls giving him seductive looks and the usual winking was obvious.  This was a freakin nightclub!!

But he came here to forget all his worries for a day or until the hangover lasted and then back to his problems'

He spotted his usual stool and casually walked up there facing the dance floor.

A girl walked upto him and winked.

He smirked at her.

Then the girl came upto him and sat on his lap.  He kissed her neck while she closed her eyes.  During his usual routine he called for the bartender.

"Sam Honey! Get me the usual please!" he yelled through the music while kissing the girl in his lap who now faced him.

"Sam?" he called again while the girl in his arms giggled.

After a few seconds''..

"I don't know your usual Sir" the girl said sarcastically stressing each word.

"What?!" he growled and turned back to find a gorgeous looking girl about 23 years old in a white shirt with a black tie and a plaid mini skirt.

"And you are?" he asked seductively.

"Geet!  Sam quit and now I'm the new bartender!" she said her mint breath so strong he could it from there.

"Well''" he started as he gently indicated the girl on his lap to leave.

"My usual is a scotch" he said smiling.

She just nodded and got back to work.

After about two minutes she handed him the drink.

He winked and then smiled taking a sip.

"Yeah, don't even try that on me as I have seen many like you and just because the innocent looking girl is a bartender doesn't mean you can get your chance!" she spat out looking at him in disgust.

He could tell she got that often.

He looked at her still casually sipping his drink.

She turned away frustrated at his reaction.  Seeing that he chuckled.

"Well you better get used to me because I'm a regular" looking at her with his hands on the counter.

"Just don't hit on me and I won't care whoever you are!" she said leaning closer her hands on the counter, she looked at him straight into the eye.

"It's a deal!" said amused while raising his drink.

 

She came home and threw her bag on the couch.  She jumped onto the couch while massaging her temples.

"Ugh!!" she silently shed a tear.

But there was no one to console her.  She had two jobs which tired her to an extent.  She didn't have time for fun and enjoyment.  She had duties, responsibilities which had to be taken care of.

She wasn't allowed to wish for anything or anyone she didn't have that right.

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Index

Chapter 1: A day to forget: pg 7
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1552004?pn=7
Chapter 2: Tum Abhi? Yahan.....Is waqt?



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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome. Add me to the pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
keep on cuz i want o know why she has two jobs.  i like it so far
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Posted: 13 years ago
grt start..sounds interesting...do pm when u update :)
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oh ya...for the title..i think u should stick with A Drink cause a drink is how their story starts..it fits..for me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

oh ya...for the title..i think u should stick with A Drink cause a drink is how their story starts..it fits..for me :)



aww thank u jaani!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
its toooooo gudddddddddddddddddd
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  lovedd itt continuee soonn
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i like it add me to ur pm list