|Fanaa| [Part35Uptd-Pg55-16/1] - Page 2

Originally posted by: Riasa

it's okk any body can make twist 😉, it will help me to improve my story writing skill 😆...... soo it's group story 😛 this is the real fun of the group story yaar

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701

I know, right? I LOVE group stories. LOL, I can't think of all the twists on my own..So yeah I write a small part and whoosh, some one else adds their own great ideas! 😃

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yaa it will be vry interesting.......group story😉

Hey awesome idea Akanksha!

Count me in. 😉

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

hey its a great idea...but i have one consern...so my question is that does the story have to have vampires in them??i mean cant we just write something totally opposite from wat we actually are watching...??cause i get bored reading about vamps and abhy and piya in the same situation..lol.let me know wat can be done..

❤️MONA

brilliant start Akanksha0701👏 you kept it open, i love it, and here is my update😊

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Part 2

I was still shaken by the incident, looking around for the dog! and my whole body was aching, especially my arms and legs when the boy walked towards me with fast steps, and grabbed my bruised arm with his hand, and pulled me up in one jolt, like I was nothing but a rug doll "ouch" I screamed, as I felt the pressure of his strong hand on my arm, but he didn't let go of me and snapped at me angrily :" are you crazy!, if you want to die then go and jump off a cliff or something, why jump in front of my car and cause me problems "

I looked at him stunned from his arrogance, he continued "do you know that I can put you in jail for this?, suicide is a crime by law"

Suicide! What the hell! what a jerk!, I thought, my head still spinning, he thinks I am suicidal!, I tried to push away his hand from my arm but it didn't budge "let go of my arm, you are hurting me!" I said in pain, to my surprise he chuckled:" seriously! Why do you care about little pain when you with your full senses threw your self in front of a speeding car!, or maybe you thought that it would be fun to be hit by a car!, and the procedure of getting killed will be pain free? And what makes you sure that you will die on spot, maybe you would only lose an arm or leg or both or worst get paralyzed for the rest of your life!"

I looked at his smug face; he thinks he is smart lecturing me about the consequences! DUH I know!, and I felt an itch to slap him hard:" I am not suicidal ok!, I wasn't trying to kill my self" I said in anger

"really then I assume you were just trying to do aerobics early morning in the middle of the road, in front of a speeding car instead of attending your classes like a good student" he said sarcastically

"I was just trying to save a puppy ok!" what an insensitive man I thought, instead of asking me if I was ok he is taunting me!

"What a lame excuse! you should do better then that!" he pauses and let go of my arm, thank God," so tell me what exactly went wrong in your miserable little life that makes you feel it's not worth living, have you flank your stupid exams or maybe you got dumped by your Bf" he says, continuing with his taunting

I felt an outrage of anger bursting inside of me, although usually I am a very calm person, but this boy was getting on my nerves, the way he was talking to me irritated me to no end!, finally I snapped: "What the hell! Who do you think you are? Judging me like that!, are you deaf or something, I told you that I was not trying go kill my self!, I just was trying to save a puppy"

He looks at me amused by my anger, he takes off his shades and for the first time I could see his intense grey eyes, as he looked at me I felt his eyes were like hypnotizing me, as I couldn't take my eyes off them, in an skeptical tune he says "really?! So where is the invisible puppy that you were suppose to save?" there was challenge in his eyes

"I don't know!, but it was there in the middle of the road, I am sure it was when I.."

Then we were interrupted by a middle age man: "excuse me!, i am looking for a small puppy, i lost it a while ago, have you seen it?, it has white fur " thank God, I sighed in relive and looked at the boy with challenge, some one now owes me a big apology! I thought, but to my surprise things didn't turn quite the way I expected them to be!