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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MaanGeetkiSimmi

HAI - yur a good writer ! =D CONTINUE =D



Thank you 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nikipuki

That was a a very tender and sweet update. Geet perhaps at the juncture of maybe just maybe lowering her defenses. Poor girl hasn't been treated well since 10 years! That's a long time to bear abuse......I'm just glad that all her experiences thus far after marriage have been positive.


Girl, your writing is very captivating.

PS How come she is wearing a chudidar for muh-dikai? Would't it be traditional to wear a sari?



I am happy to know that you enjoyed the update..... yup, Geet might just open up a little if her pati and his family keep being so nice to her.... and as for Geet's abuse... she had been abused since the day she was born, it just accelerated after her mother's death.... she was only ever loved by her mother....

Regarding Geet's attire.... I will answer that in the future update.... maybe in Part 14.... 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Awesum jus loved it

Geet is such a sweetheart
I jus loved her gesture wen she kissed back Maan on nose as a Thank U
Marjawa meri sweet si Geet ki innocence par
Loved NT's care
She is really a sweetheart
The way she cares for her talks to her n all is fabest fab
Maan was loosing himself in her
He was madly following for her
Loved it
Update soon
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz



I think Maan may have just fallen too deeply with Geet's innocence.... 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

Very well written part....... So pati is falling in love wid wife..... Poor maan wifey dosen't know anything abt husband wife....... She was comparing maan wid her brothers nd dad......OMG.



Yup! that's Geet for you! She will always compare Maan with her brothers and father.... remember she knew no one else except her brothers and father so she will always end up comparing every person she meets with her father or brothers....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: acjanfeb1

awesome,shall i say first ray of light ignited by maan in the dark life of geet. beautiful felt very happy knowing geet feelings. she is feeling secured in his company. loves geet when she refer maan as pati. waiting for next update.



Yes, it's a start.... Geet might just take a tentative step forward
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bono_jostna

hey angel!!! really a nice update👏.........waited for it so long
!!! it was a milestone for geet.... as for the first time she felt safe with maan....she felt something other than fear..and most of all she reciprocated him...though by sign language but it was a move.......liked the way maan cared for her in previous chapter😊..and now maan is only attracted to geet for her physical beauty...wishing geet to open up sp that she can also have emotional and mental attachment with her "PATI" other than physical one....by the look of it maan is going to consummate their marriage soon..........☺️☺️☺️not only for NT's word....i don't think he can suppress his desire anymore..



thank you for your wonderful comments.... You are very right though, it definitely was a milestone for Geet.... Maan is struggling with his desires for her but he does care for her.... and as for consummation... well... wait and read 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bluedreamz953

OMG...Geet is so funny and cute! She is just too adorable

She thought he's gonna hit her? LMAO!! don't laugh at my Geet 😆
Loved the update Sarah!
It was awesome and don't worry about the time you take coz all good things come in small packages with late delivery! LOL! I'm so bakhwaas! was there an insult hidden in this complement? 😕😡 😆
Thanks a heap for the awesome update
Love you,
Shaila



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shalve

lovely... sweet.. adorable... awesome... amazing.......fab.......



Thank You ☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chubzy

Oh wow! Wat a beautiful update! Frankly m not dissapointd by geet's lack of desire, if she would hv any at ths point than it would hv been out of her charactr, she shld feel securd n comfortable wit him than only she'l b able to respond to his touch wit desire. Plz cont asap.



Thank you so much for understanding Geet's character... I am trying not to move too fast with their relationship.... it will be a slow paced progression....

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