Tishnagi..New FF...Geet and Maan....Part-3..Pg-14

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Friends...I am new here and just started to watch Geet and i m in love with this show...i m starting a new ff from where they saw geet running away frm her sagai...

 
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Tishnagi
 
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Geet is waiting in the middle of the road in her lehnga just an hour before her engagement with Maan....the cool breeze of winter making her dupatta fly in the dark'she is looking down at Maan's name on her mehndi with teary eyes'tears are not willing to stop at any moment as her heartbeat is keep beating maan's name in her heart and soul'.

Geet (to herself): hai babaji yeh main kya kar aayi'.main bhi na'ab kya karoon main...apne atith ke samne aane se main..main Maan sir ko chod ke aa gayi'.jinhone hamesha mera haath thama jab jab main akeli thi '..unhe hi main aaj in hazaaro logo ki bheed ke saamne chod ke aa gayi'woh ..woh mere bare me kya soch rahe honge'.unhe to yahi lagta hoga ki main bhi'main bhi Sameera ki tarah use dhoka deke chali aayi'lekin Babaji aap to jante hai na ki main..mere liye Maan sir kya hai'muje koi to rasta bataiye Babaji'aapki geet aaj kho gayi hai'..

she just closes her eyes with taking tears in her fists remembering all her sweet moments with Maan'..how he always holds her when she is about to fall'.she remembers how he confess his love at the train station'how he wanted to be with her in the hospital,'how he changed himself while dancing bhangra with her'..she remembered the vows they both took together that night''.she just whispered with a smile'

Geet: I Love you Maannnn'.

When Geet hears '."jab pyaar karti ho to chod ke kyun chali aayi"'..Geet opens her eyes suddenly and turns back and she is surprised to see Maan infront of her eyes dressed up in his Engagement outfit looking at her in anger'.

Geet: woh'woh aap'

Maan: pata hai Geet aaj pehli bar tumne itne pyaar se mera naam liya hai'aaj pehli bar muje aisa laga ki main us ladki ko dekh raha hoon jise main pyaar karta hoon'..aaj tumne yeh sabit kar diya ki tum mujse kitna pyaar karti ho'lekin tum is tarah yaha kyun chali aayi woh bhi us din jis din hamari sagai hai'..

Geet: woh 'maan main who 'kuch baatein hai jo'jo main aapko..woh

Maan: haa Geet woh who kya'.kyun kya hua'tumhe kya laga ki tum mujse durr chali jaongi to main tumhe dhundh nahi paunga'tum bhul rahi ho ki main kaun hoon'.Main Maan Singh Khurana hoon '.Woh Maan Singh Khurana jo ek bar kisi ka haath pakadta hai to phir use chodta nahi aur jise chod deta hai uski tarah dubara muh modke piche nahi dekhta'.jis tarah maine Sameera ka saath apni zindagi se nikal diya hai usi tarah maine bhi tumse kaha tha ki tum bhi apne atith ko hamare rishte ki beech me nahi laogi lekin tumne kya kiya'tumne wahi kiya jisse muje darr lagta tha'.kyun Geet kya mera pyaar itna kamzor hai'kya tumhe yeh laga ki main tumhe tumhare gharwalo se bacha nahi sakta'..ya to tumhe yeh laga ki main shayad tumhare bache ko itna pyaar nahi de pau jitna use milna chahiye'.

Geet just looks at him with wide eyes open with tears flowing down'..Maan comes forward closer to Geet'.and looks deeply in her eyes'..

Maan: bolo na Geet kya hua'.tumhe kis baat ka darr lagta hai'kyun sab kuch chod ke chali aayi''tum janti ho ki mera pyaar itna kamzor bhi nahi hai ki main tumhe duniya se bacha na saku aur rahi baat tumhare gharwalo ki to tum ab Handa Parivar ki beti Geet nahi balke tum'tum Maan Singh Khurana ki Geet ho'aur yeh bacha'.

He just looks down at her tummy and puts his both hands on her tummy and comes closer to her looking into her eyes'.

Maan; yeh Bacha sirf mera hai'Maan Singh Khurana ka apna bacha'.jise who apna naam dega'.maine tumhari zindagi ke sare muskil dor ko hata diya hai'ab tumhe kabhi bhi koi sikva nahi hoga apne kal ko leke'.ab to batao Geet kyun muje chod ke chali aayi tum'..

Geet: Maan aapke liye 'aapke parivar ke liye rishto ki kya aimiyat hai'kya woh'kal agar hamare beech me aapke parivar ka koi rishta beech me aaye to aap'

Maan just moves his hands to her shoulders and holds her tight while pulling her closer with anger rising in his eyes'

Maan: hamare is pyaar ke rishte ke liye main hazaro rishte bhi tod sakta hoon'.mere liye sachchi hi rishta ki aimiyat rakhta hai jo hamare beech me hai'..Geet maine zindagi se aaj tak kuch nahi manga lekin ab sirf itni umeed karta hoon ki tumhara saath aur Pyaar zindagi bhar ke liye mere saath rahe'kya tum mera saath nahi dogi 'kya apna vaada itni aasani se tod dogi tum..

Maan's eye were getting emotional first time in his life'he was never scared before even when Sameera left him'.Geet just looks at him with full of loved eyes and slowly puts her hand on his cheek caressing it..

Geet: Maan'kuch pal ke liye main lad khada gayi thi'main rasta bhatak gayi thi ''lekin ab rasta bhi saaf nazar aa raha hai aur manzil bhi'.aapne soch bhi kaise liya ki main aapse kiye huye vaade tod ke aapka saath chod ke chali jaungi'..jis tarah aapne kaha ki aapke liye main kya hoon ..usi tarah mere liye to aap hi meri puri duniya hai'..aap to jante hi hai ki main aapke bina ek kadam bhi nahi ja sakti to aapke bina zindagi to bahot durr ki baat hai'agar aapka saath hai to main har dard aur muskil par kar jaungi'.lekin aapko kabhi akele chod ke nahi jaungi'.kya aap is Geet ko aaj Maan ki pehchan denge'

Maan just comes forward and rests his forehead on hers'.

Maan: Geet jab itna pyaar karti ho '.mere saath zindagi bitana chahti ho to kyun bar bar meri nazro ke samne se durr ho jati ho'.

Geet: Shayad isi TISHNAGI ki liye aap mere piche hamesha chale aate hai'

Maan: shayad'.lekin ab jab tak shaadi nahi ho jati main tumhe ek pal ke liye bhi akele nahi chodne wala'pata nahi phir agle hi pal tum kaha chali jao'.

Geet: galti insaan se ek hi bar hoti hai '.bar bar nahi'.main ek bar galti kar chuki hoon aapse durr janeki ab dubara nahi '.kyunki in do pal ki durri mere liye hazaro saaloin ki durri se kam nahi thi'.

Maan: Geet tum pagal ho'

Geet: janti hoon'.pagal hoon isi liye to itna pyaar aapse karti hoon'

Her words make both Geet and maan to smile on each other'.Maan Moves back and holds her face in his hands and kisses her forehead'.he moves back while looking into her eyes and holds her hand and leads her towards his car while she was looking down at their hands in eachother''..

Part-1..pg-1

Part-2..pg-8

Part-3..Pg-14

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Edited by jashvi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice start...all misunderstanding cleared in the 1st part itself...can't wait to know what happens next....!!!! PM me wen u update next....!!!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ansah

hey that was awesome...that is really soo good...

i totally loved it...keep writing πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Originally posted by: komlika

Hey good work.......please do continue .......but promise us tht u will update atleast twice a week........add me to PM list

 
 
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