Passionate Maaneet@Maan's Magical Outhouse ONESHOT - Page 3

Nice OS

Originally posted by: mehreen.

<font color="#ff0099" size="2" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">This was awesome.Do continue...youv'e left me curious😊</font>

wow I am so happy 😃 that's fantastic your as much curious to know what happens as much as I am myself lol...I am thinking omg who is that person going to be ahhhhhh....I dunno yet either and the suspense is driving me insane....when I work it out I will continue hahaha

Originally posted by: CSSK

<font color="#9933ff">omg Nice part...Continue soon...😃
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I will try when I get inspired hehehehe

Originally posted by: premeena

loved it please do continue

thanks a bunch! We will see when I get some time hehehe 😆

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wow it was so good
do continue
bye sumi

awww thanks a lot Sumi! 😃

Originally posted by: zoya-shah

TOO GOOD.CONTINUE PLZ.

wow thanks so much yaar 😃

Originally posted by: sravani899

anju dear its awsome

do continue please

i am curious to know what happens next yaar

Wow you read my OS that's fantastic! I am so happy! 😃 Yep the curiousity is driving me insane of what will happen and I am the one who wrote it ROFL!

Originally posted by: pickachu

Awesomeeeee os.
Plzz continue it.




Fatima

Thanks sooooo much! hehehe I will definitely try now that so many people are requesting for more 😆

Originally posted by: -afsha-

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Nice OS</font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Loved th way Maan n Geet always get lost in each others eyes😆😆</font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Maan was loosing him self </font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Plz do write more n if u write plz do pm me</font>

awww such sweet comments thanks so much! 🤗

lol I just love Maaneet eyelocks hehehe that's why I put so many in there 😆
and I just love Maan loosing himself ROFL!

yep I sure will PM you if I do continue....whenever that will be hehehe....I need to be inspired, motivated, in the right frame of mind and in a creative mood .....

when all those factors occur I will write it up hahaha till then I hope everyone can be patient and bear with me hehehehe 😆

Okies I am continuing it a bit further .... where I Ieft off

He was inches away from her now breathing deeply ...moving away a hair strand....from Geet's glowing white face....he was so drawn into her features.....the slope of her cheeks....her parted lips....he then followed his fingers through her hair....Geet felt a tingle of sensation within her....what waas Maan up to she wondered?....she tried to move back but only ended up hitting her head against the bed frame....."hai Baba Ji" she cried out and placing her right hand behind her scalp.... she slowly rubbed her head to ease the pain....Maan breathed in with a sigh thinking...."yeh larki bi na...koi na koi musibat me phas jande hai...."

Maan moved closer to Geet ...sitting right near her....he softly placed her head on his lap and massaged the bump on Geet's head .....ever so gently he moved his fingers over her skull....she was enjoying it...it was making the pain go away....she closed her eyes and relaxed.....Maan just looked on...he absolutely adored her.... but just couldn't say it to her...something was stopping him...was it  the fear of rejection? or did he just want to be 100% sure that she was in fact the one for him and also desired him deeply as much as he did.....

hey...

Awesome wow great OS ..plz add more

i think sasha and tasha should enter the room...

woooohoooo

Anju is doing jumping jacks!

I am so happy that in the latest Geet episode 26th August 2010

a bit of me oneshot was kinda displayed onscreen

Geet's foot got hurt and then woohoo Maan carried her in his strong arms and as he was carrying her they had an intense eyeloack and couldn't take their eyes off each other....just like in my oneshot!

yipee yahoo!

so yep I am celebrating here 🥳 that we all got to watch such a beautiful Maaneet scene onscreen!....something that I have always wanted to see 😃

Anju!!