~MAGICAL RIDE~ || New Maaneet Story || chap 1,2,3,4,5 updated 23/03/24 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 months ago
#11

Chapter 3


Fantastic and so Overwhelming Chapter


Finally Maan gets to see his Geet but with that

came her mischievousness as now Maan knows she is a wizard she

uses her powers on Maan or before his eyes so he can see what his wife is up to

seems like Maan uttered the words that brings on problems for him

now Maan , Geet and Sanaya are chained to their chairs

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Posted: 6 months ago
#12

Chapter 4


Awesome and Shocking Chapter


I'm just glad that Sanaya was there and Maan could hear her Maan talks too

doing everything she ask him especially when matters became serious

with Geet's dad

so now Maan and Dev will have a dual competition and who ever wins

will then marry Geet

hopefully Maan truly works hard and can win this competition

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Posted: 6 months ago
#13

Chapter 5


Amazing Chapter


Maan now gearing himself for the competition

and it also seem like Geet is somehow around him too

Sanaya doing everything now even taken Maan to get a wand for himself

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Posted: 6 months ago
#14

Will be waiting for you to continue

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Posted: 6 months ago
#15

1 , 2, 3,4,5


very interesting n mind blowing story

enjoyed reading all parts in one go

maan is ready to learn magic to get geet his love back

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Posted: 6 months ago
#16

Hi Sweta

thanks for posting


Chapter 1

Maan was indeed shocked seeing his wife do magic

of cos Maan confronted Geet

finally she revealed she is a wizard and can do magic

dismayed that Maan left Geet

oh so Maan's dad and mom were wizards

sad that his parents died cos of magic

at least Maan had dadi

can understand why Maan did not want to be a wizard

so that's how Maan met Geet

Gosh Geet left

as expected Maan was shattered

great that he realised that he did not give her a chance to explain

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Posted: 6 months ago
#17

Chapter 2

well dadi feels Geet would not have left Maan

of cos Maan misses his Geet and wants her back

liked that dadima consoled and assured Maan

she had a good point

glad she told Maan to get his Geet back

so dadima tells Maan that he has to go to Geet's world

great that Maan agreed

now Maan is in Geet's world

his reaction was justified hearing about Geet's impending marriage

at least Sanaya found Maan

angry that Geet's dad is forcing her to marry Dev

Maan was astounded seeing Geet's house

ha ha Sanaya knew what he was thinking

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Posted: 6 months ago
#18

Chapter 3

glad that Sanaya is helping Maan

he needs all the help

after all is in a different world

great that she disguised his face

Maan was indeed worried

good that they managed to get into the castle

of cos Maan was astounded seeing the interiors

ha ha he forget that Sanaya can read his thoughts

Maan was clearly amazed seeing Geet's room

at least he remembered to say repel

finally he meets his Geet

she was so happy

emotional moments

Geet's anger was justified

pleased that she confronted Maan for leaving her

oh her dad bought her back

hmm Sanaya saw their private moments

liked that Geet berated her

nice that Geet and Sanaya tease Maan

Gosh Maan's words create problems for them

now Maan fell in the trap

oh no Maan, Sanaya and Geet are tied up

Geet's dad did this

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Posted: 6 months ago
#19

Chapter 4

Geet's dad was really angry

of cos he is unaware that Maan is a wizard

he assumes Maan is a human

pleased that Geet defended Maan

sad that Geet and Sanaya were unable to break Geet's dad's spell

hate that Geet's dad insulted Maan

Geet was correct that Maan was unaware of her reality

well she was glad she ran away and fell in love with Maan

however Samay Handa is adamant that Geet will marry the guy he chooses

good that Maan tried to intervene

finally Samay Handa listened to Geet

he feels Maan is not worthy of Geet

glad that Geet told her dad that she loves Maan

but for Samay he is not a wizard

seems like Maan could not speak

will he tell Geet that he is also a wizard?

pleased that Sanaya intervened

well she told Geet's dad that Maan is a wizard

Geet also agreed to this

now Maan is released

however Samay is not convinced that Maan is a wizard

Gosh Maan has to compete with Dev in a wizard competition

as expected whoever wins, gets Geet

Maan's reaction was justified

hate that Maan cannot meet Geet until the competition

feeling for Maaneet

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Posted: 6 months ago
#20

Chapter 5

not surprised that Maan cannot stay away from his Geet

I think that Geet was with him

great that Sanaya consoles Maan

Maan's frustration and helplessness was reasonable

of cos he wants to take Geet back to their world

alas this is not possible

glad that Sanaya makes him understand

liked Maan's confidence

Sanaya was correct that he had to win the competition

good that Sanaya confronted Maan

pleased that Maan confided in her

Sanaya was correct that Maan may have inherited some magical powers

however Maan disagreed

at least they have two weeks to train Maan

Geet will naturally support Maan

loved that Maan will do anything to get his Geet back

wonderful that Sanaya is helping Maan

now Maan has a wand

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