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lovely update.. maan is so sweet n caring... do continue soon..
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lovely update.

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girls 1 thing have to tell you I don't know dancing ... it's been very difficult for me 2 write the dance steps still tried ... I know I suck at it ... please bear with me ... sorry 4 the crappy steps ... I just hope u like it & please give me ur views on this part ....
 

Part 29 :-

Geet – thank u …

Maan – maine tumhae mana kiya tha na … thanks kae liyae … waise tum chaho tho mujhae dusri tareekae main thanks keh sakhthi ho ….

Geet – dusri tareekha … wo kaun sa hain …

Maan touching geet's chin with his right hand & then sliding his left hand around her waist & pulling her towards him – wo ….

He gets lost in her beauty & her eyes so much that … he could not speak a single word … thinking to himself … - geet aaj kithni sunder dikh rahin hain … main apne aap ko kyun sambhal nahin paa rahan hun …. Oh geet …. tumnae yeh mere saath kya kardiya hain …

Maan – wo … tum aaj bahut sunder dikh rahin ho geet … dill kartha hain ki main tumko bas yuhi dekhtha rahun …. dill kartha hain ki … main tumhae saari duniya sae chupaake kahin dur lae jao … dill kartha hain ki …

Geet blushing while she is still in his arms & her hands over maan's shoulders criss crossed – Bahut shayri karr rahen hain … kya baath hain … waise … thank u …

Maan – shayri aur main aisi koi baath nahin hain main mere dill kaa haal suna rahan hun aur tumhae majak sunjh rahan hain … teek hain … agar tumhae thank u kehnae ka ithna hi shauk hain tho mere tareeke main thank u kehdo … tho main jaanu tum sach main mujhae thanks kehna chahthi ho ki nahin …

Geet – bathayiyae tho sahi … aap ka tarekha kya hain …

Maan pulling her face close to his face with his right hand - batha du … mujae tumsae ek gift chahiyae …

Geet - kya gift chahiyae aapko … aur waise main aapko kya gift de sakhthi hun …

Maan – wo gift tho mujae sirf tum hi dae sakhthi ho aur koi nahin …

Geet – aisa konsa gift hain ki koi nahin dae sakhtha aap ko sirf main hi dae sakhthi hun …

Maan then turns geet's face so that her ears are closer to his lips – mujhae ek kiss chahiyae …

Geet's face is feeling shy & her face is all red now – jee …

Maan – haan geet … tumnae teek suna … ab jaldi sae mujhe mera gift do …

Geet then hears some body's some voice outside … - koi aa rahan hain …

Maan – bahane math banao geet …

Geet – nahin sach main koi aa rahan hain … chodiyen mujhae … koi hamein aise dekhengae tho kya samjhengae …

Maan – mujhae mera gift do pehlae …

The voice is becoming clear now … it's dadima …

Geet trying to free herself – dadima aa rahin hain … chodiyen mujhae …

Maan – tum mujhae dadima kae naam sae uss din ki tarah bewakoof nahin bana sakhthi ho geet … main tumhae aaj jaane nahin dungaa …

Dadima is about to enter the room … - geet …

Maan now realises that geet was actually saying the truth takes his hands off her but still is looking into her eyes & geet is looking at the door and at maan…

Dadima – acha … tum dono yahan par ho … geet tumhare ghar waale kahan par hain ….

Geet – jee dadima … wo ready ho rahen hain … main dekh kar aathi hun …

Pinky enters the room – koi jaroorat nahin hain geet … hum sab yahan hi aa gaye hain …

Geet's family enters the room … along with pinky & her dad …

Maan introduces every one to dadima …

Dadima 2 geet's family – acha hua ki aap log aa gaye hain … warna geet idhar akeli padh jaathi …

Pinky – kyun dadima … main hoon naa … geet kae saath … uski best friend … tho wo akeli kaise padh sakhthi hain …

Dadima – wo baath nahin hain pinky … tum uski friend ho … parr parents tho parents hote hain naa …

Pinky – haan dadima … so tho hain …

Dadima - Ab neeche chale … shayad ab tak sare guests aagaye hongae …

Maan – haan aap sab log chaliyae … pinky tum geet kae paas ruko main jab kahun tab geet ko neechae laeke aa jaana …

Rajjo aur Tito – hum bhi di kae saath hi ayengae … hain na di …

Geet – haan … tum dono idhar hi rukna mere paas …

Maan - teek hain … chale …

Pinky ,Rajjo & Tito are facing geet ….dadima is walking ahead of every one then geet's parents & pinky's dad follow her maan is behind every one … Maan while leaving turns back & is looking into geet's eyes puts his finger on his lips & signals to her that she owes him a kiss … geet is feeling shy & is blushing & bends her head …

Pinky – oye geet tujhae kya hua … ithna sharma kyun rahin hain … & turns back & finds no one there ….

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Every one is in the hall now …

Maan goes near Mr.Chopra – hello Mr.Chopra … nice to see you over here …

Mr. Chopra – hello Mr.Khurana same here … by the way … what is the reaason for the party …

Maan – surprise hain Mr.Chopra … aap ko abhi thodi daer main pata chal chayegaa …

Mr.Chopra – aap ki secretary nahin dikhayi dae rahin hain … kahan pae hain.

Maan – wo bhi aajayegi thodi daer main …

Mr.Chopra – waise arrangements sab bahut ache hain … lagtha hain Ms.geet naae aaj kaafi mehnat kiya hain …

Maan – actually arrangements geet nae nahin kiyae hain … geet dusrae kaam sae busy hain …

Mr.Chopra – oh … never mind … still the party rocks ….

Maan – thank you Mr.Chopra …. main abhi aata hun … please excuse me & please enjoy your self …

Sasha & Tasha have finally cleaned them selves of the mess they got into earlier & still fuming with anger at what ever happened to them …

Tasha spots Maan – DD …

Sasha – kahan par …

Tasha points to where he is standing – udhar …

Maan is talking with Mr. Varma another client of his ….- hope you are enjoying the party Mr. Varma …

Mr.Varma – yes of course Mr.Khurana …. Waise party ka purpose kya hain …. Ithni dhoom dham party diya hain ….

Maan – aapko abhi pata chal chayega … Mr.Varma … Now please excuse me Mr.Varma … enjoy the party …

Maan is searching for adi … Spots nakul – nakul tumnae adi ko kahin dekha.

Nakul – adi bhaiyya … udhar hain … points to where adi is …

Adi is with geet's family & pinky's dad… introducing himself to them – ji main adi hun … geet kae saath kaam kartha hun … actually kartha tha … abhi tho geet hamari boss ban gayi hain … tho … starts his laugh …ha ha ha ha ha …

Maan comes there – adi …. (then spots geet's parents … & pinky's dad …)

Adi – jee sir …

Maan – ek baar spot light check kar kae aa jana…

Adi – jee sir …

Maan to geet's parents & pinky's dad – aapko yahan par koi takleef tho nahin ho rahin hain …

Mohinder – jee nahin … hum teek hain …

Maan to Mr. Manchanda … - thank you very much … aapnae aaj jo kuch bhi kiya … hamare liyae ….

Mr.Manchanda – nahin maan puttar ji … aap nae jo hamari geet kae liyae kiya uss kae aagae tho yeh kuch bhi nahin hain … aur yeh sab bhi tho aapnae hi kiya tha naa …

Maan to geet's parents – acha hua aaj aap yahan pae aaye … aapko maalum nahin hogi geet aapko kitna miss kar rahin thi …

Mohinder holding maan's hands – geet hamein aaj tak miss kar rahin hongi … par mujhae aaj yakeen hogaya hain ki aaj kae baad wo hamein ithna miss nahin karegi jaise pehlae karthi thi kyun ki aap uskae paas hongae … usko aap sae wo pyar mila jo hum usse kabhie dae hi nahin paaye … aur sab kuch jaanne kae baad bhi aap usse shadi karna chahthae hain … isse hi pata chaltha hain ki aap hamari geet sae kitna pyar karthae hain …

Maan – aap yeh sab baathein bhul jaayiyae … aur bas party enjoy kariyae … baad main aaraam sae sab baath kar lengae ...

Maan calls nakul – nakul … inka dyan rakhna … inko kuch bhi cheez ki jaroorat pade tho dekh lena … yeh geet kae parents hain …

Nakul – geet bhabhi kae parents hain …

Nakul – namasthe … geet bhabhi bahut achi hain …

Maan – teek hain … ab tum jao aur baki kae guests ko attend karo … aur inko bhi dekhthae rehna …

Adi comes & tells him that every thing is ready …

Maan is now looking for dadima & to him self - ab dadima kahan par hain …

Maan to geet's parents – ab sagai ka time ho gaya hain … aap bhi chaliyae dadima kae paas …

Maan - adi tum bhi mere saath chalo … searches for her & finally finds her …

Maan – dadima aap geet ko jab corridor main dekhtae hi anounce karna start kar dijiyae … main abhi geet ko lenae jaa rahan hun …

Maan – adi sab ready hain naa …

Adi – yes sir …

Maan calls pinky – pinky ab geet ko neechae le kae aajao …

Pinky – jee sir …

Pinky – geet chalo …

Geet ,Pinky ,Rajjo & Tito all walk towards the hall …

Maan is going upstairs … light's go off … everything is dark now in the hall …

Maan reaches pinky …

Maan – geet mera haath pakdo …

Maan bends his left hand elbow & asks geet to hold his elbow … now they are walking towards the steps …

Dadima starts her announcement … - I hope U all are enjoying the party tonight … now … jaise aap sab ko malum hain ki yeh party ek surprise party hain aur iski surprise main abhi reveal karnae waali hun … aaj ka din hamari life ka sabse kushi ka din hain …. Kyunki finally hamare maan nae hamari baath maaan li hain …

Sasha & tasha come closer to dadima …

Sasha – yeh dadima kya baath kar rahin hain … kaun si baath maannae ki baath kar rahin hain …

Maan & geet are near the starting of the steps …

Dadima – wo baath hain ki aaj Maan ek bandhan main bandhnae waale hain … ek aisa atoot bandhan jo hamesha hamesha kae liyae unkae saath rehnae waali hain …

Maan asks pinky to call adi for the spot light …

Pinky calls adi – adi sir … spot light …

Adi – haan pinky… abhi on kartha hun …

The spot light is travelling slowly through the steps & falls on geet on maan .

Sasha – geet …

Tasha – yeh behenji … fashion disaster … saari main …

Sasha to herself – "geet yehan kya kar rahin hain MK kae saath … aur dadima konsa bandhan kae baare main baath kar rahin hain …"

Tasha – sasha …

Sasha gives her annoying look to tasha …

Tasha - I mean maam … yeh behenji MK kae saath kya kar rahin hain … aur aise ready kyun hui hain jaise koi shadi main jaa rahin hain …

Sasha – yeh fashion disaster ko kaun sae kapdae kis maukae par pehanna chaiyae yeh bhi maaloon nahin hain … yeh soch nae ki baath hain ki yeh MK kae saath kya kar rahin hain ...

Dadima – Tho aaj main bahut kushi kae saath yeh elaan karnae waali hun ki aaj mere maan ki sagai hain ……

Sasha is shocked & unhappy that could be easily seen in her crooked face – sagai … MK ki sagai …

Maan & geet are walking downstairs the spot light following them … Pinky rajjo & tito are also behind them … the steps are already filled with rose petals of various colors symbolising that their future life will be colourful & filled with tenderness ,happiness & everything gud from now onwards …

Dadima – haan aaj Maan ki sagai hain … aur … I proudly announce my grandson's engagement today with the woman of his dreams Geet Handa … Please welcome the lovely & the most beautiful couple in the universe …

All the guest start clapping their hands as Geet & Maan are walking towards dadima & the guests are congratulating them for their sagai …

Sasha tho jal bun kae raakh hi hogayi hain … & her mouth is wide open - geet kae saath sagai …

Tasha – sahsa …

Sasha gives her annoying look to tasha … thinking to herself - "I am already pissed & u are calling me by my name instead of calling me maam"

Tasha – I mean maam … Mk aur Geet ki sagai … in dono main yeh sab kab hua …

Dadima orders for the cake … the cake comes & is kept in front of dadima … it is a chocolate cake …

Dadima,Geet's family,pinky,pinky's dad, adi,every one surround maan & geet.

Dadima - Maan aur Geet aage badiyae ….

Geet's mother gives the ring to geet & dadima gives the ring to maan …

Dadima – maan aap ab geet ko anguthi pehnayiyae ….

Geet gives her left hand to maan & maan makes geet wear a diamond solitaire ring … on her ring finger

Dadima – geet ab aap maan ko anguthi pehnaayiyae …

Maan too gives his left hand to geet & geet makes maan wear a diamond solitaire ring that matches her ring …on his ring finger

Every body is clapping their hands & congratulating the couple except sasha & tasha …

Dadima – maan aur geet ab aap dono cake cut kar do …

Maan & geet both cut the cake … then maan takes a piece of cake & feeds  geet & geet to takes a piece of cake & feeds maan …

Dadima – come on every body … please start enjoying the party … music please …

Dadima – geet aur maan … tum dono bhi dance karo …

Maan – dance … dadima nahin …

Geet – haan chaliyae naa …

Maan – nahin …

Dadima – geet aap maan ko manayiyae main abhi aathi hun …

Maan – geet tum janthi ho … tum yeh sab nahin kar sakhthi ho … phir bhi tum dance karna chahthi ho … Dr. ki baath yaad hain na tumhae …

Geet – parr …

Maan – nahin geet … mere liyae tumhari health important hain aur kuch nahin …

Geet – simple sa dance karengae … please …

Maan – teek hain … bas thodi daer kae liyae …

Please enjoy this song & imagine that Maaneet are dancing on this song  - khuda jaane from Bachna ae haseeno … one of my fav. Again … click on the first link if u want 2 c the dance … this video is from MJHT …

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e-F8B2ibmnU

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGK-iuh5JE4[/YOUTUBE]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGK-iuh5JE4

Maan takes geet to the dance floor holding her hand … maan slides his left hand on geet's waist & hold's geet's left hand with his right hand & then they both start dancing …. Their steps are real slow so that geet health does not get affected …

Sajdae main yuhi jhuk tha hun … tumpae hi aakae rukh tha hun ….. kya yeh sabko hota hain …

Humko kya lena hain sabsae … tumsae hi sab baathein ab sae …. Ban gaye ho tum meri dua …

Maan holds geet's hands & make her twirl slowly around him …. maan slides his left hand on geet's waist & hold's geet's left hand with his hand & put his right leg 1 step ahead & geet goes 1 step behind …. They continue their dance … 

Sajdae main yuhi jhuktha hun  … tumpae hi aakae rukh tha hun ….. kya yeh sabko hota hain …

Humko kya lena hain sabsae … tumsae hi sab baathein ab sae …. Ban gaye ho tum meri dua …

Khuda jaane kae main fida hun … khuda jaane main mit gaya … khuda jaane yeh kyun hua hain …. Kae ban gaye ho tum mere khuda ….

Oh …. Oh … oh …oh … oh … oh … oh … oh …(2)

Maan hugging geet now while singing the below lines …

dil kahen ki aaj tho chupalo tum panah main … kae darr hain tumko kho dungaa … dil kahen sambhal jara kushi ko na nazar laga  … kae darr hain main tho ro dungaa …

ho … karthi hun sau gathein tumsae … baandae dil kae waade tumsae …. yeh tumhae naa jaane kya hua …

Maan holds geet's hands & make her twirl slowly around him ….. and geet wraps herself around maan & her back touching maan's chest & they both are swaying in each other's arms …

Khuda jaane kae main fida hun … khuda jaane main mit gaya … khuda jaane yeh kyun hua hain …. Kae ban gaye ho tum mere khuda.

Sajdae main yuhi jhuk tha hun … tumpae hi aakae rukh tha hun ….. kya yeh sabko hota hain …

Humko kya lena hain sabsae … tumsae hi sab baathein ab sae …. Ban gaye ho tum meri dua …

Khuda jaane kae main fida hun … khuda jaane main mit gaya … khuda jaane yeh kyun hua hain …. Kae ban gaye ho tum mere khuda.

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please reply as i need ur feedback ... i am not sure whether u will like this dance part ...please let me know girls if u like it or not ... 
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow......... so cute
Maan asking for Kiss.... uuuuffffffffffffffffffff
he is so caring...... DadiMa's Introduction for the couple scene was good
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part 
just loved it..
cont. soon........
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey sweethrt ...............u r too gud😃😃..............i just loved ur dance part👏👏 ..........really i was in maneet dream landdddd while reading😉😉..............i dnt know how do u create the magic in ur FF but i now a days i m eagrly waiting for ur FF den the real serial😆😆😆😆...........as i m just loving it too much😊
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nice work n keep updating often👏👏👏....................love u😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for the Delay......................
Just now read both the Parts.....😊...............
They are Awesome.....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏........Fabulous.........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...........Fantastic.......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..............
Loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Loved the way Changu-Mangu annoyed Sasha-Tasha.......🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣..........Thats Really Funny.....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣............
Loved Maaneet's conversation......😳😳😳........When is Geet going to give Maan's Gift????????😉
Loved the way U Described the whole engagement.........❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.......
Loved every single detail.....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.........
Hey Loved the Song U chose for the Dance........❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️........
And U described the Dance Sequence Beautifully........⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️..........
Eagerly waiting for the next part....😍😍😍........
Pls Update Sooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan asking for a kiss thts so cute....enjoyed sasha n tasha's reaction.. song was lovely.. thanx a lot for a quick update.. do continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Dew..Forgive me for not sending promt reply....I saved all ur pms and today I read all parts from 25-29....
Ur. FF is wonderful.👏👏👏👏👏..very smooth and sweet like barbara cartland. ⭐️ I loved many moments...
I love the way Geet and Pinky interact..They share a very sweet friendship...
The song -0 tere bina jiya...that's one of my fav. ...I wish Maan would have entered there and.....(Lost in dreams)  😍
The talk between Daadi and Maan regarding Geet's sadgi....so lovable....Maan shares such comfortable relationship with Daadi...very well sketched.
You roped in everybody from Geet's fmaily to Mr. Chopra...commendable job yaar...I know how difficult it is to write long updates....but U didi it...
he dance sequence was very romantic..actually soft romatic songs suits them...very nice song selection.😉
And the kiss that didn't happen 😍 🤗....Muah..muah..,muah for this part.
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waiting fot more treat lke this....
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