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Posted: 13 years ago
wah wah double update...............aur wo bhi itney din baad............loved the update...............loved the way geet makes maan to bend for her anger and then making him realize that freedom is very imp for any being..............loved it.............
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

wah wah double update...............aur wo bhi itney din baad............loved the update...............loved the way geet makes maan to bend for her anger and then making him realize that freedom is very imp for any being..............loved it.............


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Posted: 13 years ago
awww dat was soo sweet poor pari hope she gets her salaam balaak back
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update.... loved both the parts
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oye Neeru......U back wid the Bang !!!!!!!!!.....πŸ₯³...Truly,fantabulous plot..πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...I never knew ki u'll use Vicky part with so much mature storyline..😍.....N yes,I can too feel how Geet n Maan felt by freeing those piegons...😳....Hey,Neeru - I have an Idea kya hum tumhare FF ke kuch parts with photos update nahin kar sakte...☺️....I feel ki that will be too close to our heart n will remain forever..πŸ˜›.....
 
BTW......Thanx re for the parts..πŸ€—..I was waiting now what next n see u gave such a commendable parts...πŸ˜›...
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Posted: 13 years ago



Hey alll

my favvv maaneetians...

i am really really really very

sorry for not updating rapidly...

or even frequently...

i have written few parts and i promise i will update soooner

please dont stop giving a glance to my ff...


LOVE U ALL...

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Posted: 13 years ago




PART- 54



Maan was mesmerized by what he just experienced now, he never did this before...

he never knew freedom gives such immense pleasure to a soul...

he looked at Geet who was looking at her Love and feeling his happiness...

she walked close to him... and he wrapped her in his arms to express what it felt 

like at that very moment...πŸ€—



they stayed close to each other for quite a while speaking to each other and having fun,

and when they came down to the living room, Maan asked Geet to get back to their room,

and that he will be coming soon as he finishes attending the important phone call...

and soon as geet leaves the place he call's Vicky to caution him and Pari not to speak

anything about the SALAAM-BAALAK to Geet as she is very close to them and she could

stress herself...Both Pari and Vicky assure him of not making any conversation regarding 

SB to Geet which relieves Maan ...


at the dinner table when Vicky continues with his fun filled conversations for his dear one's

to smile, he succeeds in getting the positive response , and later when Pari stops Geet

to give her the medicines, Geet happily takes the pile of medicines 

without any arguments, which surprises Maan very much...


Maan and Vicky speak to Pari , to assure that they will be always there to help her, and

that they all together will definitely get SALAAM-BAALAK back at any cost...

Pari smiles in tears for having such good friends with her... and the trio get bact to their rooms...

Maan asks Geet how did she so easily accept Pari's orders to take the medicines...?

For which Geet cleverly says :

GEET :MAAN... Yeh kaisa sawaal hai???

           Pari doctor hai, wo meri itni fikar karti hain

           aisey mai mujhe uski baat tho maan ni hi hogi na...


Maan in his usual style twirls her and held her close to himself,

 MAAN : achaaa ??? tho wo tumhaari fikar karti hai??? aur main nai???

GEET : Ajeeeb ho Maan aap kabhi kabhi...bhalaa maine aise kab kaha???

           ki aap meri fikar nahi kartey hain???


MAAN : tumhe directly kehne ki kya zarurat hain Geet???

             yeh tho tumhaari harkaton se saaf pataa chaltaa hain...


GEET  now gets anger and moves away from MAAN...


GEET : Kaisi harkatey Maan ???

            aap aisey kyu keh rahe hain???


MAAN : Achaaa??? ab tumhe kuch nahi pataa hain naa?//


GEET : Haan Maan nahi pataa hai mujhe kuch... tho aap bataa dijiye naa...


MAAN : ...


GEET : MAAN...😑 Baat kya hai ???


MAAN : Jab maine tumhe itne pyaar se samjhaaya tha tho tum samajhne se rahi...

            aur ab ???😑


GEET : Wo tho... pari ne... 


and she stops... and While Maan waits for the response she says...


GEET : Maan sach mai ... bahut neend aaa... aaa rahi hai... kal subey 

            baat kartey hai good night... [ she cannot reveal the reason behind her medicine ]


MAAN angrily walks out of the room with his laptop...

he seriously starts working on it and after a few hours , 

it suddenly reminds him of Geet's Cravings, which makes him 

run to his room, as he thinks she can wake up at any time as for now,

...and to surprise him Geet did never sleep till then, she was just wandering

in the room, mumbling to herself about her argument, seeing this Maan 

returns back and starts working again, but he is fully attentive to know 

if Geet needs his help at any point of time... 

Aakhir wo hai tho MAAN SINGH KHURANA na πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰


the next morning Maan disappears before Geet ia awake, and makes sure 

he is angry with her πŸ˜† [ these two never change ] πŸ˜†


Geet searches the whole Mansion for Maan and is irritated that she could'nt find him,

and to top his absence there were Pari and the dearest Daadima who will never let

her go out from the Mansion, ... Pari  and Vicky went out on their search for a good

lawyer again... and DADI asks if Geet is ready to come with her to a  party

in one of the Dadi's friend's place...,but Geet denies

as she is not interested to attend parties at that time,...πŸ˜•


As it was impotent for DADI to go, she leaves ... and Now as Geet is alone...


she tries tooo???????????????

SNEAK OUT πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰

so wait for the next update...

which i will sooon do...πŸ˜›

Edited by wiinie_pooh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous update.
thanks 4 d pm