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Navpreet

@dimpzz

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

#431

amazing update!
really luved it alot!
n seeing maan n dadi lyk tat...it felt really nyc
n d pic is AMAZING!

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

#432

amazing update!
now finally itz evening!
yipeee
update sooon!

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wiinie_pooh

@wiinie_pooh

Senior Member

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#433

PART-34

MAAN was confused....

MAAN : TUMNEY...????

PARI : HAAN... HAAN... MAIn....e

she saw GEEET smiling and heading towards her... so she hanged the phone...

Maan was utterly confused with PARi's wierd behaviour....
how she calls,speaks all unconnected things... and hangs the phone
suddenly with no reason....

He snapped out of his thoughts to see what was in the courier.....
slowly started opening the courier

Jaane hai kitna bechain mann
jaane hai kaisa deewanapan
deewanapan'
kabhi na sakoon aaya, kabhi na karaar aaya
jab se hai tum pe, mujhko, pyaar aaya
pyaar aaya

He saw a Cd and written on the cover........ :
Aap ke jitney hi bechain yaha koi aaur bhi hain....
Dekh lijiye.... 😉

Maan could wait no more....he straight away played...the Video....
It was Geet , holding his photo twirling round ... smiling sweetly

tu tasvur mein mere
tu hi baaton mein
tu afsaane mein mere
tu hi yaadon mein

she was happy .... content.... in love.... she was mesmorised
by her partner's concern... it seemed like she was under the
spell of Maan's Magic......😳

(kabhi na sukoon aaya
kabhi na qaraar aaya
jabse hai tumpe mujhko pyaar aaya) - 2
bekaraari bari kab kaise
yeh dil na samajh paaye

she is looking at the watch for every second....waiting for the moment
when she would be finally in Maan's life forever....

badla badla lage yeh aalam
anjaana nasha chaa jaaye

for her it seemed like the dimension of her life changed....all of a sudden....
from the moment Maan entered her life.... the seasons seemed to be pleasant...
the weather became calm....she was looking out from the window...
to see how the nature is celebrating their joy.........

Maan was overwhelmed by the happiness, he felt like heaven seeing

his life, his world , His Geet in soooooooo much Happiness....
he felt a smug.... seeing her holding his picture... the moment was
lingering.... he was thinking of her every second,... infact
in each of his heart beat.....Ohhh he loved her sooooooo much...
he dint have any way to express the love his heart felt for his
princess...........

taheri zameen tahera hai pal
mann mein machi kyun hulchul
sab kuch alag sa lagne laga
yeh dard kaisa jagne laga
jagne laga
kabhi na sukoon aaya
kabhi na qaraar aaya
jabse hai tumpe mujhko pyaar aaya
Geet was in her thoughts unable to return to real world,
no where to realise.... all the kids were surrounding her,
to play with their beloved DIDI
dillagi dillagi mein kaise
main khudko bhula baithi
maine to kuch na socha samjha
sapne bhi sajaa baithi

aab koi bas chalta nahin
ek lamha dhalta nahin
He looked at the clock.... which seemed like not moving at all...
he wanted to hold the clock and fix the time.... for their reunion...

chuubne lagi kyun yeh dooriyan
koi na jaane majbooriyan
majbooriyan
kabhi na sukoon aaya
kabhi na qaraar aaya
jabse hai tumpe mujhko pyaar aaya

it was early evening.... now they could wait a second to be awayfrom each other...........

kabhi na sukoon aaya kabhi na qaraar aaya

jabse hai tumpe mujhko pyaar aaya pyaar aaya

......... Maan called Pari to ask her ..............????

GUesS what???
hope u like the update...
sorry really no time to Pm all of u...

Edited by wiinie_pooh - 13 years ago

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Water

@Water.

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#434

Hey,

I like you FF. I just finished reading the first two parts and they are great.

The expression that comes to my mind is "Light n Fluffy" - lolz....now i am hungry.

But that is how I felt, reading the convo between Pinky and Geet.....it was no light, nice, friendly and full of love and how Geet innocently works towards a plan to go to the Mela.

Loved it.

😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

Rachana

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Trisha

@Tishuu

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#435

omg u updated! Yay bt bt bt bt why dnt it open?

wait a min

yh toh same hai - iread this a few days bak -toh phir yh aaj phirse post kaise hogaya??

Edited by Tishuu - 13 years ago

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Sheetal

@Coolsheetal

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

#436

Hey Neeru,m sorry for replying so late.....😔......badly stucked in office schedule................as usual,the update is very nice & very near to the heart....😍👏❤️. & guess what ????? when I was reading ur update naa,the same song was played in my laptop playlist......☺️......Wow,we all r fascinated by Maaneet connection & look my laptop is connected with ur updates.....😆🤗..........

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wiinie_pooh

@wiinie_pooh

Senior Member

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: aarmanshilpa
Hey,

I like you FF. I just finished reading the first two parts and they are great.

The expression that comes to my mind is "Light n Fluffy" - lolz....now i am hungry.

But that is how I felt, reading the convo between Pinky and Geet.....it was no light, nice, friendly and full of love and how Geet innocently works towards a plan to go to the Mela.

Loved it.

😳

Rachana

hey thanks Rachana....

i am glad u r liking my FF

keep reading.... i will come up with more updates....

WELCOME TO MY MANEET WORLD🤗

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wiinie_pooh

@wiinie_pooh

Senior Member

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: Tishuu
omg u updated! Yay bt bt bt bt why dnt it open?

wait a min
yh toh same hai - iread this a few days bak -toh phir yh aaj phirse post kaise hogaya??

Hey tumne tho Raaz khol di yaar...

us din main hadbadi mein teekh se

update nahi ki thi....

if u noticed main ne uss din...

part-34 nahi likha tha....

i dint Pm anyone and also the page seemed

like exceeded the maximum post space...

and it was displayed on the red part

which i dint like....

so aaj fir se khoshish ki

ki woh puraaa update white page pe display ho

but my effort does'nt seem to work😭

Edited by wiinie_pooh - 13 years ago

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wiinie_pooh

@wiinie_pooh

Senior Member

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: Coolsheetal
Hey Neeru,m sorry for replying so late.....😔......badly stucked in office schedule................as usual,the update is very nice & very near to the heart....😍👏❤️. & guess what ????? when I was reading ur update naa,the same song was played in my laptop playlist......☺️......Wow,we all r fascinated by Maaneet connection & look my laptop is connected with ur updates.....😆🤗..........

OYEEE Hoyeeeee🤗

Tumhaaraa tho mai kya kahu meri Jaan.....

u r always connected.....

i was like reading ur comment with my mouth wide open....😲

LOVE U for ur LOVELY COMMENTS🤗

AUR haaa tumhaarey HRIDAY PARIVARTAN ka KYA HAAL HAIN???

How is ur DD?????????😉

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Trisha

@Tishuu

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: wiinie_pooh

Hey tumne tho Raaz khol di yaar...

us din main hadbadi mein teekh se

update nahi ki thi....

if u noticed main ne uss din...

part-34 nahi likha tha....

i dint Pm anyone and also the page seemed

like exceeded the maximum post space...

and it was displayed on the red part

which i dint like....

so aaj fir se khoshish ki

ki woh puraaa update white page pe display ho

but my effort does'nt seem to work😭

😆hahahahaha awwww im sorry meri jaann

but but but ek baat batoon??? a😕ctually na iss page mein kuch kharaabi hai!!!!! - i tried opening on my fone(⭐️cos thats where i read most updates⭐️) and it kept closing down n then on pc it kept doing errors😕 - thats y - isliye woh pura white pe nahi araha!!!! - i duno y????😲

but yhhhhhh............see i thought i was having dejavu or i had actually dreamt of this update?? - yh dnt be shocked this happened many tyms to me - once i had a dream that the next update for another FF was on page 10 - n guess wat..........next morning it was bang in front of me PAGE 10

then i had a dream that part 19 was posted for another FF - n the next day i saw part 19 but i thought i had already read it....n so waited for 20....n wen i read 20 i was like - confused sorts..then i realised i had skipped 19 - having thought i read it before

likewise i thought i had read urz already tooo - hahahaha!!!!!!!!!!

btw i mean page 61 mein kharaabi hai - rest is working fyn

Edited by Tishuu - 13 years ago

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