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Posted: 13 years ago
too good πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
awesome....loved it
poor geet felt bad for her....
hate devtara....the devil couple
keep writing πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
hope geet is fine
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Posted: 13 years ago




PART-18




PARI enquired many times and got the same answer...
she said in shock.... barely able to speak,
even to herself...

PARI : GEET .... Pregnant hai.............??????


Pari felt... like she should inform MAAN immediately, she again felt
she should first speak to GEET and enquire if she even knew
that she was pregnant,she dint know what to do... she was utterly confused.....
she turned to speak to the nurse... she walked out to give some instructions
to nurse about GEET... Meanwhile, GEET opened her eyes... when she heard the voice...
she was pale... she was very weak to sit errect,but tried her best and was able to do so,
she looked around her,she was shocked to see pari, who was partly visible from the door....
she jumped out from the bed...


GEET : PARI......??? BABAJI...yeh yaha?? inhone mujhe dekh liya tho???
          MAAN SIR ko pata chal jaega mai yahaa hoon...NAHI YEH nahi hosakta...

saying this she managed to escape and ran away immeditely...
she came out of the hospital.... she stood on the road waiting to
cross the road... an old woman approached her,and asked her a favour...

OLD WOMAN : BETE.... mujhe zara road cross karado...
                      mai teekh se dekh anhi sakti [ she said in shivering voice ]

GEET : Ji... ayiye mai karaadungi... dyaan se... maa ji..

Geet forgot her weakness and holding her hand helped the woman to
cross the road...

GEET : Maa ji...aapko kaha jaana hai???
           bataayiye... mai aapki koi madad
           kar sakti hu tho...mujhe achaa lagega...

Old woman was still shivering,Geet gave support by holding her shoulders,
she said...

OLD WOMAN : BETE... mujhe ... hmm.. [ tried to recollect ]
                      wo ... "Salaam Baalak" ke paas
                      jaana hai....

GEET : " SALAAM BALAK " ?????

OLD WOMAN : Haan... bachaa... wo... anaath alay hai
                      mai wahaa... har mahiney jaati hoon...
                      un bachchon ke saath rehke mujhe
                      Sukoon milegaa...mere tho bache meri
                      fikar hi nahi kartey....

[ starts caughing... Geet helps her by patting on her back ]

GEET : Ji... MAA ji... Mujhey wo jagey ka pataa dijiye... mai
           aapko le jaaungi....

and they start off to the orphanage...on the way GEET looks on the sides of the road...
and seeing the greenary.... it reminds... her of the drive to resort with MAAN
and her eyes start tearing... but she controls herself by taking a deep breath...
the old woman asked Geet about her life, and Geet told her about being shifted
to MUMBAI to be independent and she also told that,she was searching for job
and also a place to shelter herself... she stated that she was ready to do any job...
Finally they reach the orphanage.... and GEET feels sooo glad to see all the children
.... even they all were different from others,few were conjoined,few
were physically handicaped, few were abondoned...but their spirits were high...
she felt as if God had helped her to reach such a place ,to get immense inspiration
and gain her self confidence...

The old women looked at Geet and said slowly in a caring voice...

OLD WOMAN : BETE... aap yahaa in bachonko padhaana pasand karengi????

GEET was glad to listen to those words, she felt gifted...she felt the warmth in the
atmosphere.... it seemed to her as if she knew all of them.... each one had a
blood relation with her... she felt at home... HOME IN HER VIEW....

The old woman took GEET to the office and GEET was appointed to teach the children
and take care of them,to which Geet felt she would Give her fullest ....


I WILL UPDATE SOONER....
HOPE U ALL LIKE THE WAY
STORY IS MOVING,
IF U HAVE ANY SUGGESTIONS
DROP THEM HERE....


__ lots of love to all MANEETIANS 😳 Edited by wiinie_pooh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
really nice...to good....
loved it....
keep writingπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
geet as a teacher
interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..such an coincidence...how i wish nice thing like this occur in the show itself....it'll be cool..please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz update soon...............nice twist....
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yaar ab ek aur twist....😲.......
Im really shocked that Geet escaped from Pari😲
But Im relieved that Geet got settled somewhere and she is fine.
Thats a Fantastic Update YaarπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Will be waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
i really loved the both parts..i felt the warmth in both parts...they are just amazing...plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part yaar...
Hope Pari tells Maan about Geet's whereabouts...
Continue soon!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
πŸ€— thnk oyu so much it was so awesum πŸ‘

i cudnt catch up with sum previous parts bt today aftr reading all missed parts i realized story has gone too far but i loved it thnk god pari din call maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome ff
loved it
plz add me to ur pm list
thanks
con soon