~ Ishq Main Fanaa ~ 18Parts: DONE Sep27th

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Guys I'm back with a new FF. I know I have a few incomplete ones, but this once I intend to complete. My awesomeeee friend gave me this brilliant story line. I'm sure you guys will enjoy it!

So here it is:



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RpE8u9Titcw[/YOUTUBE]

I . N . T . R . O


As the train comes to a stop in Srinagar, many hurry to get off the train to meet their loved ones, to buy a magazine, to catch an auto. Out of all these people there are a pair of feet in no hurry to leave the train.

Rubbing the drowsiness out of his eyes, Rahul blinds his eyes from the glittering sun rays as he looks out the window onto the crowded platform. Slinging his backpack over his shoulder, he makes his way onto the platform.

"Chai,Chai.. garma garam Chai.. Coffee Coffee.. Garma Garam Samose lelo"

Shutting out all the external disturbance, Rahul pulls out a single sheet of paper from his pocket, scrutinizing it for a minute and memorizing it's details, Rahul stuff it back into the pocket.

"Auto, sir jee auto?"

"Residency Road chaloge?"

"Haan sir jee, andar bethiye"

Sitting down, Rahul leans back and closes his eyes, ready for the journey.. a journey further than Regency Road...

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Turning off the stover as the tea comes to a boil, Muskaan carefully pours the hot chai into a cup.

"Baba, yeh lijiye chai" Muskaan says handing over the cup to her father.

"Acha baba, main chalti hoon, kuch samaan vagera khareedna hai"

"Muskaan, jaldi ghar aajaana, aajkal dange kuch zyaada hogaye"

"Haan Baba, main yoon gayi aur yoon aayi"

Slipping her bag over over her shoulder, Muskaan heads out locking the door behind her.

Who knew that a storm would enter her ordinary life and change it in ways she never imagined...




Please comment/criticize :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee............. I am soooo excited Filpu..... LOVED DA INTRO.... Loved da promo... n loved da banner... U r an awesome writer... Can't wait 4 da update... Pls pls plsss update soon... Plsssssssss.... n Mishti Jhappi for everything........:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG MD!!!
 
Amazing intro..
 
And Loved the trailer...
 
Continue sooooooon...
 
Can't wait!!!! :D
 
Aaahhhh am soooooo excited to read the next part!!!!
 
Love you loadz siso!!! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it!
do add me!


sheena
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awwwwwwww
Trailer Vid is fab and
Such a Beautifull Intro part  😍
Love it
 
Cant wait for thr story
 
Update soon 😊
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The video was amazing and FF intro is wonderful! I can't wait to read next.😃
Update!!!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: TaniShaKaShid

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee............. I am soooo excited Filpu..... LOVED DA INTRO.... Loved da promo... n loved da banner... U r an awesome writer... Can't wait 4 da update... Pls pls plsss update soon... Plsssssssss.... n Mishti Jhappi for everything........:)



Tafu!! i love you! this is such an awesome idea 🤗 Will update soon! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: x!reema!x

OMG MD!!!

 
Amazing intro..
 
And Loved the trailer...
 
Continue sooooooon...
 
Can't wait!!!! :D
 
Aaahhhh am soooooo excited to read the next part!!!!
 
Love you loadz siso!!! 🤗



Sis 🤗 Love you!

Will update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

loved it!
do add me!


sheena



Hey Sheena! :) Thanks! Sure will :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: angeldmg16

Awwwwwwww
Trailer Vid is fab and
Such a Beautifull Intro part  😍
Love it
 
Cant wait for thr story
 
Update soon 😊
 
 



Thanks Noooooooooooor!! 😳

Will soon! 😃