~ Ishq Main Fanaa ~ 18Parts: DONE Sep27th - Page 18

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

WOAH!!!!!!!!! Shilps I thought that was a gorilla in your siggy for a sec! :)

Originally posted by: vaish04

🤣 🤣 :O Hawww.. Dekh Shilpa MA ko kya keh diya 🤣 Oh god !! 🤣

Originally posted by: vaish04

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Well..firstly..you aren't going to be killed...

Kyunn???

Kyunki..you kept them together..till the end...even it was ending ..but it was together :D

ofcourse one wasn't going to die and the other grieve their whole life 😲 I can't do that to RM

You know..i'd have HATED it if one of them would have died and other would have to suffer..coz already both of them have suffered their share of sufferings !!

So Good Job there..!

Next...Veryyy niceee..and not read before concept..*atleast for me*... Tani ka concept 😃

Very well written *except a few hindily mistakes*🤣 and Awesome cuteii scenes indeed !! oye what hindi mistakes?? 😲 tell tell!!

I did think initially that it might end up being another 'fanna' film type..but i'm really happy it dint go that way..though the Kashmir and terrorist thing was inspired from there i guess..'

ya that part was similar but not totally copied 😆

I thoroughly enjoyed reading and imagining Mayank as the 'Khadoos' 'Akdoo' yet Sweet by heart nature and the Green Gold Shervani was a icing on the cake :D..Thanks for that :)

oye you were reading about Rahul 🤣🤣 haan I can sooo imagine him in Gold Green Sherwani 😍 he needs to show us some pics of him in traditional clothes 😍

I was really sad at the flashback parts :( lol

ya those parts were really sad :(

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I LOVED the confession...'A Rainy Confession'..really loved it..you know its actually the confession of an FF that makes us remember the ff..apart from few other factors..but major role is of the confession..which i LOVED here :D..Thanks for yet another memorable and cute confession :)

ya the confession.. rain just made it even more perfect 😳

I'm really satisfied by the amount of Gussa Muskaan showed (on learning the truth)...like neither too long/much nor too short/less.

ya didn't want to make is a tv drama 🤣

The Last part was very touching and very well taken along ..like the i was so expecting them both to die together coz..already she had lost her baba..it'd have been a torture if it would have turned any other way !

I have sooooo many things to say..but none is actually coming the right way =))

But yeah..One thing ...This is ONE story that has an 'Absolutely Mindblowing' SEQUEL Waiting ;P...

sequel? 😆 how do you write a sequel if the two main leads are no more? 🤣 write a sequel in heaven? 😆

It has Awesome scope !!..

And i Demand of and Epilogue..ideas?? i can provide!!!

ok tell me.. will think ke if I will write or not depending on if the ideas are enough to make me be like OMG i want to write that 😲😳😍😆

Awesome Job guys..Shilpa, Tani and Reemz :D

ove you Shilpa ..meri Jhallz <3

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