For Creators: An editorial from the W.O.P. - Page 4

Originally posted by: kaasshh

meera okay i wanna join.....bt i cnt write much critical essays....all my essays are either emotional or somewat sugar-quoted......

Kaashwa ,


Sugar coated or soaked in sugar syrup ...but do write and state what you wish to see further and what you do not want to  see ....After all it is our serial ...we do have a proprietary rights over it ...

Join Beta...with ur songs,shayari, sugar posts ..we will enjoy it !!

theres only thng i want.......KRIYA......😃

this serial is regarding some social issues of women ryts.... the victims of the uneducated,boisterous aristocrats(the thakurs)..how their children are taught wrng thngs are are nt given education...how they are being used for the selfishness of the parents.....and how they r gonna be reformed by some really nice elements... so plzzzzz concentrate on THAT....do not induce stupid love triangles and wars between two guys for a grl...so on and so forth...it luks so dull....and soo unrealistic....
its evn better if aman is nt engaged with any of the grls in the show....let him serve some other purpose na..is a love interest so imp for this lawyer..whu fights for the truth?

 

How some of the supporting characters can have a purpose in life - SAXENA  family

Nainaji - She needs a purpose in life besides crying buckets and threatening floods in and around Mumfordgunj. The actress has a beautiful smile, let 's see her help Komal reform her ways, teach her cooking and how to take care of their home. She could get involved in a women's organization that helps young girls. She could get out of the house for a while during the week besides anticipating Prof. return with a cup of chai every day.

Komal - Here is a young girl with a lot of time on her hands and huge potential to be an inspiration to young girls in India by going to school, learning more about life outside the Takur world. Right now, she is being constantly sent to her room like a three year old for a nap. She has neither learned to cook or do any chores around her home.

Adarsh - He started off as the wuss on the show and has continued to be one to this day. Can we see the softer, more gentle side of him? When is he going to mature and be a MAN in the family instead of hiding behind his little sister in handling familial matters? Is he ever going to treat Komal like a wife or is she just an unwanted guest at that house forever? He needs better role models and a few friends to understand more about how the real world works beyond the four walls of the green house in Mumfordgunj  He doesn't seem to have learned much at his workplace.

Prof. - Here is a man who needs a huge wake up call. He preaches one message but practices another.  He is a weak man who has given his children a great education in idealism without the tools to help them successfully weave their way through life.  If he is indeed a law Prof. then he needs to go back to law school, his logic is mind-boggling esp. in the current track (hiding truth from Krishna, refusing help in jail, etc.). He appears to be a villian in hiding bent on destroying his children's marriages for the sake of his idealism.

Arushi - did this girl ever go to school and why is she always hovering around the house sticking her nose in everyone else's business instead of focusing on her future education. Maybe she could go to Lucknow for her college degree like her sister. She is immature and not ready for a serious relationship. The Laywer wa may be a bit too old for this under 18 immature girl esp. if he is a lawyer which puts him over the age of 25 easily.

BTW, how about bringing some of the Saxena relatives living in Banares for a visit. We have seen some of the Takur's relatives at Krishna and Prats's wedding.  The Saxenas also need to make some friends. They are breathing the same "karaab hawa" in that green house that the Takur women are breathing at the haveli.

Time for some fresh air all around.😃

Edited by MERARAI - 13 years ago

Merari Mearai Merari! 🤗

Loved the post yaar! 👏
So well written, so true! 👏 👏 👏
Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! 😃 😃 😃
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I agree to wht you have written abt Pratigya and just don't like how they try to show Krish as dump and emptyheaded! 😡 Even SBS always pull down his character as negative! 🤢 Scold Pratigya a little bit and she takes it as her 'bezaati' (shd be Angad's sister! 😆) While she keeps on scolding and insulting Krish every now n then! 🤢 So who is more egoistic here and more down to earth! 😆

Originally posted by: pritirays

Merari Mearai Merari! 🤗

Loved the post yaar! 👏 Thankooji!😳🤗
So well written, so true! 👏 👏 👏
😳Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! 😃 😃 😃Me too!😳
*Looks for more LIKE buttons to click on!* 😆 Aww!😃

I agree to wht you have written abt Pratigya and just don't like how they try to show Krish as dump and emptyheaded! 😡 Kyun????😲😕Even SBS always pull down his character as negative! 🤢 Scold Pratigya a little bit and she takes it as her 'bezaati' (shd be Angad's sister! 😆)Good one!👏👏👏👏😛😉 While she keeps on scolding and insulting Krish every now n then! 🤢 So who is more egoistic Prats 😲 here and more down to earth! 😆 Krishna Baba👏👍🏼

 Editorials will be ongoing on this thread now that it is now stickied😃. Please post anything that needs fixing.  POPs (Producers of Pratigyas) will hear from us👍🏼 when we see them go off the tracks😲😕,👎🏼 after all we are the WOP. (Watchdogs 😍 😍😍 of Pratigya).👍🏼 😉.

WOP's avatar should be : 😍

Edited by MERARAI - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MERARAI

Editorials will be ongoing on this thread now that it is now stickied😃. Please post anything that needs fixing.  POPs (Producers of Pratigyas) will hear from us👍🏼 when we see them go off the tracks😲😕,👎🏼 after all we are the WOP. (Watchdogs 😍 😍😍 of Pratigya).👍🏼 😉.

WOP's avatar should be : 😍

Awesome! So needed! So now we can tell the CVs that we don't like this track or the other! 😆 I need to share something, but I will PM you! 😉

awesomee well sed merari.. this is for u 🤗

Originally posted by: Aabrayy

awesomee well sed merari.. this is for u 🤗

Thankooji!😳😃  Now when we watch the show we have to wear a critic's hat.  Our mission is to make this show even better the best ever.👏👏👏👏👏 WOPs will do our part.😃

I am happy to see the introduction of Aman. Prats needs someone like him to compliment her efforts.