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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beware! This is a lengthy post....but it must be said. πŸ˜ƒ

Some of us have recently noticed this show has been threatening to go off the tracks that we are have decided to self-appoint ourselves the official WATCHDOGS OF PRATIGYA in an effort to save our favorite show from falling TRPs and going off the air.  We are after all the viewers and as the saying goes, we,the CONSUMERS ARE ALWAYS RIGHT.πŸ˜ƒ  We are sure the Creators get that we express our opinions and thoughts in the right spirit with the best of intentions.πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ  We are taking the liberty to draw their attention to a few things that have "machchar ki tarah" bothering us recently.πŸ˜•πŸ˜²

We appreciate good acting, casting, plots and dialogues. This show started off with giving us just that. To date, we have applauded them when they got it right and we will continue to call on them when they fall of the tracks. After all we are watching this show bec' it's a ONE OF A KIND DRAMA in many ways and we want it to stay that way and get back to #1 across channels with the highest TRPs EVER in the history of Indian television.

Pearl Grey has said that the networks have given her free creative control. That puts the responsibility for the finished product we get to see firmly in her court. Hai na? Can't blame the network executives for this one.

Pearl Grey created Krishna, a one of a kind hero after investing a lot time and effort.
Whether intended or not, Krishna turned out to be the heartbeat of the show. Pratigya,the low pulse, has turned out to be a weaker character from the start. She was labeled a strong heroine which some of us question to this day.

Prats has accomplished diddly squat without Krishna's help in one form or another. Whatever she has managed to get done on her own has created one mess after another. She creates the mess then runs around finding a way to clean it up. Only situation where she has not been the cause of the problem wherein she steps to do what is right by another woman and fighting for her rights was her saving Kesar's baby, but even then Krishna was her saving grace from Katra Naresh. Why is the female lead glorified for causing one mess after another in her own life or for her families ever since she arrived back home only to anoint herself the savior and fix it with Krishna's help?

Krishna is popular with audiences bec' he was a unique one of a kind anti-hero never seen on TV before. Arhaan Behll has put his own stamp on Krishna and made this character shine right from the get go.
His portrayal of Krishna has always been real and believable but recently the character has been morphing in ways disliked by the viewers, much to our dismay. Not Arhaan's fault here. As a newcomer to the industry Arhaan has been very impressive as Krishna and has excellent on-screen chemistry with all his co-stars, something very few actors bring to the table... like Meryll Streep, Dustin Hoffman, Jack Nicholson and Robert Redford.

The show was promoted as a unique love story and we have waited with patience watching the twists and turns in their journey with anticipation.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜› However recently too many tracks have been introduced with different promos being aired confusing the viewers even more about the direction of the show.

The Pratigya Niwas promo aired as recently as yesterday, yet it seems disconnected from the current track.πŸ˜• Are these teaser promos served as mini appetizers while we chew on the current tracks like stale bread we are forced to swallow, as, with bated breath, we anticipate the arrival of our favorite entree yet to be served.πŸ˜› At the moment we are watching other patrons (shows) enjoying our favorite dish😲(the promised love story).

Since Prats was thrown out from SS Niwas, it feels like the creators have lost their focus and we are watching a show riddled with attention deficit issues. The plot lines are disjointed, disconnected and the episodes lack continuity from day to day. For those of us who watch and maybe even re-watch episodes to catch the nuances and hidden clues for upcoming tracks it has become more "what's up with that?" moments.

Here are a few on our checklist as reminders to the Creators, not that we need to remind them of their jobs. But as the WOP (Watchdogs of Pratigya) we would like to bring your attention to the following issues.


1. Krishna Krishna Krishna is slowly morphing into a wuss before our eyes. WE DON'T LIKE IT! Don't we already have one on them on the show in Adarsh bhaiyya?😲 The rough around the edges guy with an attitude surely has to change his ways some and grow up.  But does he need to become a ditzy, dumb, henpecked dude to win his wife's love? The answer is a resounding NOPE. As the saying goes, IF IT AIN'T BROKE, DON'T FIX IT.πŸ‘πŸΌ

2. Please pay attention to continuity in scene, day to day. E.g. one minute Krishna is angry and venting, next minute the show goes on as if nothing was ever said.πŸ˜²πŸ˜• We are paying attention to little details here, after all we are the watchdogs.πŸ˜‰

3. Introduce your story tracks......Aaram se. What's the rush?😲 Are you on a schedule to wrap up the show in a few months? Nahi na? So please take your time and develop the track, strengthen the plot, stretch it like chewing gum but not too thin πŸ˜ƒand we will watch.πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘ We are looking forward to this show being on the air for years to come.πŸ‘

4. Please keep the characters and scenes "real" like you did in the beginning months. We were promised fiction that depicted reality. We did get that early on, but recently the reality has been sorely missing. Krishna getting into a fist fight with a customer in a food stall over a glass of water πŸ‘ŽπŸΌwas truly a "what's up with that?" 😲moment.

5. Please keep the plot lines real. If the premise of the show is that Pratigya is a strong woman, why hasn't this strong woman admitted to her mistakes, changed her own ways first and shown some remorse for her behavior? Instead we see a self-absorbed, head in the clouds, clueless gal with a chip on her shoulder who is the source of the problems in her life, who then manipulates every one around her, uses her naam ke vaste pati for her selfish agendas and we are expected to believe that she is a woman of strength? NOT!πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ If you tell us she is a girl on her way to becoming a strong woman that would be more believable at this point and we will accept it to some extent for now.

Now,BOLBO, tell the Creators what bothers you πŸ˜•about the direction of the show under this banner....WHAT'S UP WITH THAT? created by the W.O.Ps.

We hope to see these glitches fixed pronto so we get to enjoy this show for months and years to come. πŸ˜ƒ

Chalbo, have your say!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#2

Originally posted by: MERARAI

Beware! This is a lengthy post....but it must be said. πŸ˜ƒ


Some of us have recently noticed this show has been threatening to go off the tracks that we are have decided to self-appoint ourselves the official WATCHDOGS OF PRATIGYA in an effort to save our favorite show from falling TRPs and going off the air.  We are after all the viewers and as the saying goes, we,the CONSUMERS ARE ALWAYS RIGHT.πŸ˜ƒ  We are sure the Creators get that we express our opinions and thoughts in the right spirit with the best of intentions.πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ  We are taking the liberty to draw their attention to a few things that have "machchar ki tarah" bothering us recently.πŸ˜•πŸ˜²

We appreciate good acting, casting, plots and dialogues. This show started off with giving us just that. To date, we have applauded them when they got it right and we will continue to call on them when they fall of the tracks. After all we are watching this show bec' it's a ONE OF A KIND DRAMA in many ways and we want it to stay that way and get back to #1 across channels with the highest TRPs EVER in the history of Indian television.

 

Pearl Grey has said that the networks have given her free creative control. That puts the responsibility for the finished product we get to see firmly in her court. Hai na? Can't blame the network executives for this one.

Pearl Grey created Krishna, a one of a kind hero after investing a lot time and effort.
  Whether intended or not, Krishna turned out to be the heartbeat of the show. Pratigya, is the low pulse, has turned out to be a weaker character from the start. She was labeled a strong heroine which some of us question to this day.

 

Prats has accomplished diddly squat without Krishna's help in one form or another. Whatever she has managed to get done on her own has created one mess after another. She creates the mess then runs around finding a way to clean it up. Only situation where she has not been the cause of the problem wherein she steps to do what is right by another woman and fighting for her rights was her saving Kesar's baby, but even then Krishna was her saving grace from Katra Naresh. Why is the female lead glorified for causing one mess after another in her own life or for her families ever since she arrived back home only to anoint herself the savior and fix it with Krishna's help?

Krishna is popular with audiences bec' he was a unique one of a kind anti-hero never seen on TV before. Arhaan Behll has put his own stamp on Krishna and made the character shine right from the get go.
His portrayal of Krishna has always been real and believable but recently the character has been morphing in ways disliked by the viewers, much to our dismay. As a newcomer to the industry Arhaan has been very impressive as Krishna and has excellent on-screen chemistry with all his co-stars, something very few actors can accomplish like Meryll Streep, Dustin Hoffman, Jack Nicholson and Robert Redford.


The show was promoted as a unique love story and we have waited with patience watching the twists and turns in their journey with anticipation. However recently too many tracks have been introduced with different promos confusing the viewers even more.

The Pratigya Niwas promo aired as recent as yesterday, yet it seems disconnected from the current track. Are these teaser promos served as mini appetizers while we chew on the current tracks like stale bread we are forced to swallow, as with bated breath we anticipate the arrival of our favorite entre yet to be served. At the moment we are watching other patrons (shows) enjoying our favorite dish (the promised love story).

Since Prats was thrown out from SS Niwas, it feels like the creators have lost their focus and we are watching a show riddled with attention deficit issues. The plot lines are disjointed, disconnected and the episodes lack continuity from day to day. For those of us who watch and maybe even re-watch episodes to catch the nuances and hidden clues for upcoming tracks it has become more "what's up with that?" moments.

Here are a few on the checklist as reminders to the Creators, not that we need to remind them of their jobs. But as the WOP (Watchdogs of Pratigya) we would like to bring your attention to the following issues.


1. Krishna Krishna Krishna is slowly morphing into a wuss before our eyes. WE DON'T LIKE IT! Don't we already have one on them on the show in Adarsh bhaiyya?😲 The rough around the edges guy with an attitude surely has to change his ways some and grow up.  But does he need to become a ditzy, dumb, henpecked dude to win his wife's love? The answer is a resounding NOPE. As the saying goes, IF IT AIN'T BROKE, DON'T FIX IT.πŸ‘πŸΌ

2. Please pay attention to continuity in scene, day to day. E.g. one minute Krishna is angry and venting, next minute the show goes on as if nothing was ever said.πŸ˜²πŸ˜• We are paying attention to little details here, after all we are the watchdogs.πŸ˜‰

3. Introduce your story tracks......Aaram se. What's the rush?😲 Are you on a schedule to wrap up the show in a few months? Nahi na? So please take your time and develop the track, strengthen the plot, stretch it like chewing gum but not too thin πŸ˜ƒand we will watch.πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘ We are looking forward to this show being on the air for years to come.πŸ‘

4. Please  keep the characters and scenes "real" like you did in the beginning months. We were promised fiction that depicted reality. We did get that early on, but recently the reality has been sorely missing.  Krishna getting into a fist fight with a customer in a food stall over a glass of water πŸ‘ŽπŸΌwas truly a "what's up with that?" 😲moment.

5. Please keep the plot lines real. If the premise of the show that Pratigya is a strong woman, why hasn't this strong woman admitted to her mistakes, changed her own ways first and shown some remorse for her behavior? Instead we see a self-absorbed, head in the clouds, clueless gal with a chip on her shoulder who is the source of the problems in her life, who then manipulates every one around her, uses her naam ke vaste pati for her selfish agendas and we are expected to believe that she is a woman of strength? NOT!πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ If you tell us she is a girl on her way to becoming a strong woman that would be more believable at this point and we will accept it to some extent for now.

Now,BOLBO, tell the Creators what bothers you πŸ˜•about the direction of the show under this banner....WHAT'S UP WITH THAT? created by the W.O.Ps.

We hope to see these glitches fixed pronto so we get to enjoy this show for months and years to come. πŸ˜ƒ

Chalbo, have your say!




Mera ,

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Right now I am so happy and relieved ...that I am savoring this post word by word and letter by letter..and since you have vented out all my thoughts...I have to dig deep and come up with what is bothering me...Bothersome issues are many ...and it will come in my second post...Right now let me savor ur post again......😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thankoo, Tanthyaji.  This forum got jittery very fast yesterday, like voters before an upcoming election, that I felt we needed to put the issues on the table for the Creators to know.  Let's see how fast they fix it.πŸ˜ƒ After all customers are always right.πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG...thanks a ton for making this post..i loved reading it πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
..and i agree wid each and every word u have sed πŸ‘πŸΌ
..dont get wats the prob..CVs are seriously lost πŸ˜”..and i soo loved how u described Pratigya's character..they say that shez a strong woman..but i dont get how! πŸ˜•
and also now watever they are doing wid Krishna's character..its not acceptable..also they show sth else in promos..and story is going sumwhere else πŸ˜’
this post realli needs to be forwarded to the CVs..and to pearl grey whoz the writer
if u want to then u can send her this post as a link in a msg..on Fb..this will defo help her..thinking again..and make improvements in the story..if u want..then i can send her this as a msg..
here is the link:
http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1081133059&v=wall&ref=ts

Edited by NZ_rockx - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Transformations !!!  Evolution !!!...................................


It has been said that Man is an evolving Animal ...that he is always on a learning curve right until he dies ......So one must always be prepared to see and accept  the changes in man .....Right , we all accept this nature's dictum ...How does this evolution take place  ?? put simply a better man may become best man or he may  acquire some undesirable qualities.. a worse man may become even worst  or he may redeem himself  by learning some good traits ......in other words a man changes but does not change...His basic qualities will always be the same ,irrespective of N number of learning curves....

when Krishna was introduced , he was shown as a rational, cunning, brash, humorous and loyal man ...he was  supremely confident , arrogant ,full of pride on himself and his lineage ...he was short tempered, ruthless and unpredictable ....And never in the history of TV viewing have I seen a character  undergoing 180 degree turn and transform himself from a macho , Alpha male to a bumbling,spineless, witless  wimp ......all in the name of love !!

Love transforms ...it enhances his good qualities and diminishes  but not eliminate his bad qualities.....



I am unable to digest this change  for it lacks credibility ....for change to occur  , he has to get something tangible  in return ..and not a vision of promised love ...till date Krishna has not received  an milligram of love for him to change ...There has been no incentive for his change into  a loyal husband  but he has 1000 reasons to become even more worse , which he has not become yet ...

For me  there is a inconsistency in this development of Krishna's character ...

If you are stressed out CV's ...Take a holiday ..go for some stress relieving massage and start correcting Krishna , Pronto

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: NZ_rockx

OMG...thanks a ton for making this post..i loved reading it πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
..and i agree wid each and every word u have sed πŸ‘πŸΌ
..dont get wats the prob..CVs are seriously lost πŸ˜”..and i soo loved how u described Pratigya's character..they say that shez a strong woman..but i dont get how! πŸ˜•
and also now watever they are doing wid Krishna's character..its not acceptable..also they show sth else in promos..and story is going sumwhere else πŸ˜’
this post realli needs to be forwarded to the CVs..and to pearl grey whoz the writer
if u want to then u can send her this post as a link in a msg..on Fb..this will defo help her..thinking again..and make improvements in the story..if u want..then i can send her this as a msg..
here is the link:
http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1081133059&v=wall&ref=ts



Feel free to forward it to the Creators, and thank you! NZ rockx ji!πŸ‘πŸΌ I heard they visit the forum so they may read it, but it can't hurt to give them feedback. Or just let them know about this thread on IF as there may be other posters who may later on add more points I may not have noticed.πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanthya



Transformations !!!  Evolution !!!...................................


It has been said that Man is an evolving Animal ...that he is always on a learning curve right until he dies ......So one must always be prepared to see and accept  the changes in man .....Right , we all accept this nature's dictum ...How does this evolution take place  ?? put simply a better man may become best man 
at who's wedding?πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰ (sorryπŸ˜† couldn't let the opportunity passπŸ˜›)or he may  acquire some undesirable qualities.. a worse man may become even worst  or he may redeem himself  by learning some good traits ......in other words a man changes but does not change...His basic qualities will always be the same ,irrespective of N number of learning curves....

A
aj Aap bun gayi Prof. of B.A.P.P ( a mix of Biology, Anthropology,Psychology and Philosophy all rolled in one).
πŸ‘
when Krishna was introduced , he was shown as a rational, cunning, brash, humorous and loyal man ...he was  supremely confident , arrogant ,full of pride on himself and his lineage ...he was short tempered, ruthless and unpredictable ....And never in the history of TV viewing have I seen a character  undergoing 180 degree turn and transform himself from a macho , Alpha male to a bumbling,spineless, witless  wimp ......all in the name of love !!

Love transforms ...it enhances his good qualities and diminishes  but not eliminate his bad qualities....
.just tones it down as the good qualities outshineπŸ‘πŸΌ



I am unable to digest this change  for it lacks credibility ....for change to occur  , he has to get something tangible  in return ..and not a vision of promised love ...till date Krishna has not received  an milligram of love for him to change ...There has been no incentive for his change into  a loyal husband  but he has 1000 reasons to become even more worse , which he has not become yet ...

For me  there is a inconsistency in this development of Krishna's character ...

If you are stressed out CV's ...Take a holiday ..go for some stress relieving massage and start correcting Krishna , Pronto
  They better fix it fast.




Edited by MERARAI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pratigya .....

when seen for an instant she seems to be a sober,idealistic ,irrational woman ...yet when you give a second look , she comes across as a  layered person ..... A woman who is not afraid  to take bullies ..A woman capable of compassion , mercy ...

one who is willing  to nurse the very man who caused her grief [ as she mistakenly believes] ....A woman who knows that sometimes ignoring thing is the best way of avoiding confrontation..the backbone of her parents family...A woman deeply devoted to her family..A EDUCATED, CONTEMPORARY Woman....A woman who fight against injustice  and is for equality  for woman .

This woman who values truth does not hesitate to lie in front of Agni, the sacred symbol of all Hindus...A woman who is capable of  hiding things from her Husband and father just to  avert some unpleasant scenes ...

Sh was forced into  a loveless marriage..she was cold and contemptuous towards her hubby ...she filled her duties towards her husband's family without any  emotional attachment ... when  a woman , her Didi [by virtue of marriage] was  meted out cruelty ..she fought for her did's rights and provided her justice.....but this self same woman doesn't bat an eyelid  when her own brother is ill treating his wife ...[Agreed he is not hitting or slapping her , but being emotionally cold and emotionally abusing  is the worst form of abuse ] ....and here her stand  for justice just sinks like in swamp.. A glaring inconsistency ...

 She realizes  that her hubby is not the tormentor ...but does that bring about  a change in her demeanor  !! Yes, She has started to give slight smile, which can be measured to its millimeter precision ...her face has lost its rigidity ...but otherwise ...πŸ˜”  Has she tried to know how his brain works, what makes him tick, what triggers him off ...and yet she speaks of being friends without being friendly ...All she has done his promoted him to being a handy chauffeur  .....

it is reasonable to assume that a conservative  girl who has grown in a small town would know the the values,codes of relationships ...yet the simple fact that after marriage, her husband and his family  has a first claim on her loyalty , duty and affection and she is honor bound to uphod her Hubby's family respect and pride seems to elude her ...

Her constant running to hr parents house too is off putting, it is not as if she is the only child or that her parents are mentally deficient  ...she must stay put in her husbands house....does her mother run to her father's house every second day ....

The lesson the CV's are showing thru Pratigya is not entirely conducive to peaceful and happy married life..esp if it is a joint family
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you Mera for taking the time to write this incredible post πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I agree with everything you wrote πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ˜ƒ

CV' need to seriously take everything you said into consideration so this show can get back on track and not linger on what seem like pointless storylines.

If only they were clear with their intentions i'd have faith in them but recently like u mentioned the promos are showing one thing and the show seems to be heading elsewhere and i speak for myself, a loyal KriYa fan and a fan of the show itself, feel completely shafted! πŸ˜•