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Posted: 18 years ago
thnx here it is now!

Hi people this is my first ever fan-fic and I hope you lot appreciate it!!!
My story is called………….
                      ❤️ Deewana Pyar Anjana Yaar! ❤️
(Mad love, strange partner-as in life partner- yaar)
                   Part 17 >>>>>>>>>>>
Recap-
Angad- kripa. Tum yeh sab kya keh rahi ho kyat um mujh se pyar nahin karti.

Kripa looks up and has tears in her eyes!

Angad-(he holds her tight) bolo kripa! Bolo. Maine kahan bolo.

Kripa is just looking at him and angad is shaking her.

Angad- bolo krpa. Tum jawab kyon nahin deti.

Kripa-(shouts) NAHIN!!!!!!

On the scene:
As the music ends kripa is just walking in the rain. And angad is also walking in the rain. Everyone is coming outside to see wot has happened but no1 was there!

Josh- are yeh log kahan gaye.

Anjali- I know. Kahan gaye hon ge.

Kavya- ghar gayen ho. Shayad thak gaye hon ge.

Kumud- waise shayad. Chalo barish bohut hai andar chalet hai.

Qazi- tani to tum yahan par rehti ho.

Tani- han! Mein mera bhai angad, mom and dad. Hum sab idhar rehte hain. Aur tum?

Qazi- actually mein ajj hi aya hoon Kashmir se. mujhe tum logon ke hi college mein admission mila hai.

Tani-(exited) oh wow u. in our college. To tum reh kahan rahe ho.

Qazi- nowhere. Mein beghar be sahara. Actually mein ajj hi aya hoon to kamaz kam do 1se 2 din to lag jayenge hostel mein room lete lete.(get)

Tani- oh to tum humare ghar kyin nahin rehte.

Qazi- tumhare ghar. Poar mein waha pe kaise.

Tani- tum mere dost ho to tum wahan per eh sakte ho.

Qazi- itna yakeen hai mujh par(as he brings his face close to her ear)

Tani-(shyly looking down) han. Apna se bhi zyada.

Qazi- mujhe bhi!

They both go to the dance floor and starts to dance. Then as the day finishes tani and qazi go to khanna house. Qazi tells anjali to tell kripa that he will stay at khanna house for bout 2 days coz of the hostel room. Josh takes kumud to her house. The kapoor house.

Kkusum- thnx josh beta. To kaise ho tum.(as she opens the front door)

Josh- I'm fine aunty. Aur ap.

Kkusum- mein theek hoon. Aur andar aao.

Josh- nahin actually aunty mujhe bohut der ho rahi hai. Mein chalta hoon. Mama bhi pareshan ho jayengi.

Kkusum- acha beta. Aate jate rehna.

Josh- ji aunty ab to aanna jana rahe ga.(he looks at kumud who runs to her room embarrassed)
Josh goes and kkusum is kinda confused but kinda confused also.

Kkusum- kuch to hai. I'll wait and watch.

Josh at his house. He presses the bell.

Mrs. Parvati garwal opens the door.

Parvati- are aao na josh kaise ho?

Josh- theek mom u ok?(he kisses her forehead for the first time)

Parvati-(shoked) theek ho na beta.

Josh- yes mom perfect.

Parvati- beta tum aaram karo. Waise itni der kyon.

Josh- who actually kumud ko chorne gaya tha. Who kkusum aunty se bhi mulakat ho gayi.

Parvati- kumud?!?!?!

Josh-(takes out a photo of hers and shows it to parvati) yeh hai kumud!

Parvati-(teasing josh) tum uski photo leke ghumte ho kya.

Josh- han. To?

Parvati- beta pehle to jab bhi tum ksi ladki ke saath the kabhi uski photo nahin rakhi to yeh sab?

Josh-(takes the photo out of her hand) she different!
And runs to his room! Parvati has the same feeling as kkusum and smiles and goes to her room.

Kavya is taking anjali to her hostel.

Kavya- did u enjoy?

Anjali- jab bhi tumhare saath hoti hoon to enjoy to karti.

Kavya- awwww y baby. Acha bolo tumhari family kaisi hai uthar London mein.

Anjali- bilul theek hain.

Kavya- acha waise mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha. Wait here.

He stops the car and goes to anjali's door and opens it. Anjali comes out confused. Kavya goes on his knees. Anjali is still confused but feeling really good. Inside somewhere she knew wot he was gonna do but it didn't come out yet.

Kavya-(still on his knees) mein tum.. tumse sh..shaa.
He stops and to himself"come on kavcya u can do it"

Anjali- kavya kya hua. Tum yeh sab…

Kavya-(puts his finger on her lips and looks in each others eyes and takes a ring out and puts it in her wedding finger) will u be mine forever.

Anjali-(surprised but really happy and nods her head like a kid smiling) han.

And they both hug. Then they both walk to the car sit down and as they reach the hostel anjali says good night to him he kisses her on the forehead. And then she goes inside. She finds that kripa is on her bed sleeping they both have keys for the room so anjali opened it and just went staright to bed after changing. She thought of telling kripa 2morow. As the camera faces kripa's face who has here back to anjali is crying her eyes out. But is making no noise. Everything goes off then we see kavya driving home as he reaches home we see nitiya nanda open the door.(nitiya nanda is good in this story)

Kavya- hi mom I love u sooooooo much.

Nitiya- (surprised) are beta I know I love u to but kuch acha hua kya.

Kavya- matlab?

Nitya-tum itne khush kaise.

He sits her down. And sits beside her.

Kavya- mama maine…who actually kisi ko propose kya aj.

Nitya-(surprise dbut happy coz she wanted him to get married) are waah. Kon hai who.

He takes her picture out of his wallet (lol hmmmm)

Nitya-(looks at the picture) are wah. Bohut khoobsurat hai lekin usne kya klaha aur uski family!

Kavya- mom usne han kaha aur uski family London mein rehti hai. Humein wahin par jana ho ga. Par kab mama I can't wait.

Nitya- beta tum anjali ko kehna apne parents se pooche aur phir hum sidhe London!

Kavya-(really happy) relli mom!

Nitya- ofcourse.(as she puts her hand on his head and walks out) good night beta.

Kavya- good night mom!

Kavya runs to his room gets ouyt his mobile and rings anjali.

Kavya- hi janoo.

Anjali-(not that sleepy voice but she just got to sleep)- hi is waqt phone I mean nething rong!

Kavya- han. Who maine mama se apna bare mein abt ki.

Anjali sits up scared.

Anjali-(scared and vervous) kya kk.. kaha unhon ne.

Kavya-(laughs) are budhoo unhon ne han keh diya. God I'm happy.

Anjali-(smiles embarrassed) relli. Par mama papa se haath kab mange gein.

Kavya- mama ne kaha hai ke tum apne parents se pooch ke hum wahan kab aaein.

Anjali-(excited) wow! Mein kal hi mama papa ko phone karoogi.

Kavya- ok tum ab so jao thak gayi ho gi. Mein phone rakhta hoon. I love u janno.

Anjali-(smiles) I love u 2 aur tum bhi ab so jao. Good nght.

Kavya- good night!

They both put the phone down and go tot sleep with each others thought.

On the other hand in anagd's room.

Angad- maine kya kya. Lekin maine to apne dil ka izhaar hi nahin kya to its ok. Use kamaz kam yeh to nahin lage ga ke main us se pyar karta hoon. Mein bhi use pya r nahin karat. Magar main karat hoon aur yeh mein khud bhi janta hoon. Itne dinoon ke baad mujhe yeh ehsaas hua hai. Main akhir kya karoon.

He takes the thoguth in his mind and goesd to slepp thinking bout ti and kripa is his dreams everywhere!

Hope it wasn't boring. I just thought I'd introduce the characters and families hope it wasn't too boring sorri if it was!
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Posted: 18 years ago
i've also continued my other one so do check that out 2 its called dulhan hum le jayenge! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok no1 replied to ne of my fanfics don't u like it o haven't read it yet! 😭 😡 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
thnx sorri i thoguht it wuld b quite oring just introducing the chracters!
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Posted: 18 years ago
It was graet plz cont. as soon a s possible 😊
lUv,
Kashish 😊 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
its great...............continue.
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Posted: 18 years ago
thnx i'm gonna continue 2morow!lub u all!xxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
ya plz cont soon ur fanfic rocks !!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMGG!!..I JUST FINISHED READING ALL THE PARTS...THEY WERE AMAZING!!!..PLZZ CONTINUE...
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing part and it wasnt boring
cont soon